Arakshi SS: Adhoori Si Dua # 2 Last - Pg. 11 (22/12)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

You were totally right about one thing..

I was all Blush and Smile and Cry...

(Well not cry, but kinda "Aww"ly emotional... Hope u understand what I mean."

When this ended,I wanted to poke you on your ribs and say "Please... Thoda Aur.. Puhleezz" with all puppy face.

Loved the end. It was all beautiful.

Anyway... U have shown her pregnant... ab thoda Pregnancy ke side-effects bhi de do..

*Puppy face*

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

amazing update as always.

superb ending.

thankx for pm.

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fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

me? crying? nah!
dat mst b smthng in my eyes...whch made thm wet!

me ? blushing? yeah a bit...bt th main thing i ws doing even with wet eyes was...

smiling!

all through th update i ws smiling like idiots...yeah may b cz i jst read a beautiful piece etched with emotions!

write more avantika...

PS: waiting for my Lady in Red...whr is she?

love
Aisha

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Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

It was awesome dear...

At the end ...I was smiling broadly with all my heart...
And of course...with moist eyes and red cheeks too...

Thank you for this beautiful SS...
Thanks for the pm...

Edited by Anjali.Mital - 11 years ago

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NainaSM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Awesome ...👏...so cute . sweet and romantic .☺️... love it 👍🏼

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angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

so lovelyyy...so cute...

wonderfully written...arjun's confessions were so well written...

i was listing RAB KA SHUKRANA...and actually felling each and every word...

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

beautiful is the only word i have for u right now 👏👏
just finished reading 2'nd and 3'rd part u have described so well all sakshi's insecurities
and arjun's helplessness in making sakshi realise his love for her
she was afraid that arjun might not be happy abt the kid but still will accept the responsibility
and arjun was miserable coz he thought that his behavior has made sakshi this much insecure
but god bless him and the kid that he was able to tell rather express to sakshi what she
meant for him
so is said love conquers all wither it is something u face from outside world
or ur own insecurities ❤️
do write more such beautiful pieces

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neeraja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

hi avani di🤗

it was lovely awesome beautiful part ...🤗

that's why i love your work so much 😃...your arjun is loving and caring despite of his vulnerabilities😃...

his convo with his unborn baby was so cute😃...

well u wanna write one more😉 go for it😃...

when will u give us lady in red😕...love u di🤗