Arakshi SS: Adhoori Si Dua # 2 Last - Pg. 11 (22/12)

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Hey ...
Trust me I actually thought that she's gonna leave him ... But thankfully she didn't do something as insane as leaving him !!

It's high time that Arjun faces his demons and their most awaited awaited confrontation of their feelings takes place ...

Thanks for the pm :)

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Wonderful Update.

As usual it is very nice and beautifully written

Continue Soon

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

You are back!😃

Not that you were gone... But this short and sweet SS of yours... I love them... SO much!!!

This SS tugged my heart...

I loved your earlier "Adhoori si dua"... And history is gonna repeat itself...😉

Thank you so much for this wonderful GIFT!

Love you a loads...

Ab jaldi jaldi next update do..

and yeah... "NO CLIFFHANGERS"

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Darn!!
This is how i feel now

Coming to the update:
The title "Adhuri si Dua" is really close to my heart.😃

They say, "It is love's nature to be expressed." At times it becomes very important to express your feelings to your loved ones to let them know that they are being loved & is important in your life which was missing in their relationship. Even though he loved her more than anything in this world, he could not express it.

I remember a quote by Khalil Gibran which slates "Love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation" Very humane.

Moreover their baby's arrival news will bring them close to each other .What Senior Rawte was suppose to do will be done by Junior Rawte even before his arrival in this world.😃

"Their child was growing inside her; a symbol of her devotion to him and his passion for her, but was it really a symbol of their love?" Loved this line the most. I loved this one more becoz it got a reality touch in it where human nature is showcased.

Next update cliffhanged kiya to

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

wow it was an awesome update

u have very well portrayed her fear of losing him

i really enojoyed

plzzz do continue soon

thanks for the pm dear😊😊

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

hello,

wow, what a update?

in every single sentence sink my heart deep

next moment it comes back

i thought that sakshi couldn't tell him and left him

but next moment think no no she can't be

specially in last bit

when she said: she want both on her side and please don't say to choose

oh god, my heart just go on for her innocence and lovely thinking.

i want to go and hug her

arjun expression is superb

he thinking mind and the way he ask

just mind blowing

feel little relax but precap again hanging me in middle

what happen next? they decide leave together or ether...😲

Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Superb update
sorry for the late comment
really emotional
Sakshi's having soo many feelings becaue of the situation she is in right now
the last part was lovely and romantic
the whole part was beautifully written
looking forward to the next part
thanks for the pm...continue soon

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

No mattar how much they fight with eachother and stay away, they are still together.
Arjun was furious when he knew that Sakshi didn't have dinner that too coz he hadn't one..that coz he cares for her.
And then the pregnancy, Arjun was so happy hearing the news but Sakshi has other fears.
Wonderful update.
Looking forward to the update.
Continue Soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

I have read the two parts now...
You are genius Avantika...
Again hat's off dear..
You know how to break certainly the best...
And you know how to build up new over destroyed sculpture...
Exclusive writer you are...
Enchanted I am...
I dont know how you have created this Arjun...
You dont know how real you have made him for me...
OMG...Sakshi's insecurity and words to save her relationship and to give it more life, my pillow is so wet dear...
Plz plz do continue soon..
And madam do you remember that you have one SS still incomplete...
I am dying to read that too...Arjun was chasing Sakshi..
And I am chasing you now...
Thanks for the pm..take care..

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rafif

@rafif

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

It was amazing just read it now pls continue soon but make them a happy family and little fights but no mighty jhagra ur story is well written , well executed and well organised do. Pm me 😊