Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Awesome and emotional update.
Loved it a lot.
Glad that everything is coming back on the track.
All misunderstandings are cleared.
Maine nahi chhorna uss khoteya Deven ko...
Continue sooonish..
Precap is interesting.
Thanks for the pm.
Sorry for such a short comment.

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Read! 😃

Will comment soon!

Edited:

My first reaction at Sunaina's explanation & repentance was to roll my eyes skywards. Years of education, work experiences, worldly experiences, a marriage to a decent loving man could not bat off a silly "advice" from a far flung mausi? That she had to bring so much misery upon herself & those who didnt have anything to do with her insecurities & beliefs.Then I was rudely reminded of the real life people who have poisoned their own & our lives for much lamer excuses. Its true such women exists & their numbers are more than you'd care for

At least in your story good sense has prevailed otherwise lifetimes will pass & these people live forever in their own perceived "unjust" world.

The heart to heart talk between Sunaiana-Arjun & Aisha-Arjun were the highlights of the update👏

All slowly orbiting towards new but permanent solid relationships😊

It was so heartening to see Ashima out of her dreary cold world out into the sunshine. But what's this? Yeh kisko le aa gaye kabaab mein haddi? 😡

But its good this man is out in the open.

I saw Rathore's punching bag was worn & torn & he has thrown it out! He needs a new one.Pronto!😆

Lovely update! I am assuming its ending soon! 😳 Hope to have a grand wedding for the Rawtes. I want to see them go through the rituals!

P.S: I don't know what this actor feels everytime he looks in the mirror. Bechara shakal se hi @$%&*@ lagta hai 🤣

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Sprry for being late
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it Very much
Loved Sam-Ashima...
Loved the way SKR mede Sunaina realuze her mistake...
Loved Arjun-Sunaina confortation...
Finally everything is sort between them...
Arjun-Aisha are commong close n start feeling for eachother... Lovely...
Finally Ashima is fine to go home...
Why did her husband come now...????!!!
Cont sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Waited for it for a long time..
Loved Sam and Ashima's part..now no worries for Ashima..with Sam and Shree by her side, she will come back on track soon..
About Sunaina, I was surprised..as she being a strong lady, such an idiotic comment makes her weak and she gets insecure..But glad she realized it now..
The conversation between Arjun and Sunaina in the kitchen was sweet, simple yet effective.
Finally they both mended their relation and now both can have a simple, normal life without any grudges against each other.
Arjun shared his feelings with Aisha..loved Arisha and their slowly progressing friendship..
Ahima's husband is back..but as you said no worries..Sam-Arjun-Chotu hai na..😉!
thanks for pm and cont soon.
P.S: Superb choice for her husband.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

awesome update di

loved it

Sunaina realised her mistake n made up her mind to make up!

loved the mother-son convo!

really nice!

Ashima is recovering now!

Anjali.. Arjun ne use utha diya aur use koi mauka nahi diya apni baat karne ka..hehe!

Ashima-Sam n Aisha-Arjun coming closer..wow!

precap is interesting n scary too

Ashima's husband back..ohh..

waiting to know what happens next

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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renuka99garg

@renuka99garg

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

bahut mst update hai nice story

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Thanks to all who hit the like button 😊

@Anika - Thanks dear 😊 ... don't worry ... ye zyada dino ka mehmaan nahi hai 😉 ... iska patta bahut jaldi saaf ho jayega 😛

@Sneha - Thanks dear 😊 ...well... indian families mein aise complications hote hain ... but now things are going to be fine 😊 ... Ashima ka husband bhi zyada nahi tikega 😉 ... mai jaldi hi uska ticket katwane wali hoon 😉

@Megha - Thanks dear 😊

@Zubiya - Thanks dear 😊

@Gold - Thanks dear 😊 ... yes ... ab age dekho kya hota hai 😊

@Areesha - Thanks dear 😊 ... 😆😆 ... Chhotu ka ek punch hi kaafi hoga 😉 ... ABhi to story shuru huyi hai ... agey bahut kuch hoga 😊

@Rinku - Thanks dear 😊

@Needhi - Thanks dear 😊

@Shanaya - Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... but things are improving 😉 ... areey!!! ur Juno knows a lots of things 😉 ... Stay tuned 😊

@skrafty - Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... things are changing and very soon there will be a twist in the story 😊

@Heli - Thanks dear 😊 ... I know ... shakal se hi kamina lagta hai 😆😆😆 ... but don't worry ... isko mai bahut hi jaldi udane wali hoon 😉

@Zuby - Thanks dear 😊 ... yes... that is the irony ... we get judged by our own gender and that does make us insecure at times ... but anyways ... I had to wrap it up soon ... I m not Ekta Kapoor and I have to start my another track soon in the story 😉... and this Kamina (I agree... shakal hi aisi hai 😆😆) ... is not going to last long ... and I would have loved to get him beaten by Rathod ... but I really don't have time to drag this track ... so will be wrapping it up soon 😉 and No, its not ending so soon ... more torture to come 😳

@Nikita - Thanks dear 😊 ... no worries ... take ur own time 😊 This will be changing soon 😊.

@Swara - Thanks dear 😊

@Godly.Affection - Thanks dear 😊 ...stay tuned 😊

@Renuka - Thanks dear 😊

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Part 11 A

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As she stepped out holding Sameer's hand he was standing right out of the gate of hospital with a wicked smile on his face.

She stopped and tightened her grip on Sameer's hand. The fear was evident on her face. Sameer looked at her face and the man.

It was not difficult for him to guess it was her husband.

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In all these months, Sameer had gathered a lot of information about Deven with Shree's help and was looking for a chance to get even with him and punish him for all wrongs he had done to Ashima.

Sameer had requested his contacts in Kolkata police to keep a watch on him. 2 months back he got to know that Deven was shifting to Mumbai and this alerted Sameer.

But now he was relieved as Deven himself was walking into his trap. He had placed an informer to keep a watch on Deven and got to know that Deven used to visit the asylum but never met Ashima directly. He just bribed a lower level employee to get the information about Ashima. Sameer could have stopped him but he had another plan.

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Deven was not hopeful about Ashima's recovery and didnt even bother but through an acquaintance he got to know that Ashima was improving. He hired a detective in Mumbai and got to know that Shree was now a part of ETF and his team members and their families were helping him in getting Ashima treated and that Ashima was improving. He also got to know about old friendship of Ashima and Sameer. He thought of it as an opportunity to harass Ashima and mint some money from Sameer. So he left Kolkata and shifted to Mumbai.

His source in asylum told him the date when Ashima was going to be discharged from there and he reached the place.

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Deven walked closer to her.

Deven (Evil smile): Ashima!!! meri jaan... tum nahi janti mai tumhe wapas.. aise normal dekh kar kitna khush hoon ... (dramatically) ... tum nahi janti mai kitna dukhi tha tumhare jane ke baad ... ekdum akela pad gaya tha ... aur sach kahoon to maine tumhare theek hone ki ummeed bhi chhod di thi ...

He takes a pause and looks at Sameer and Shree.

Deven(continues): Mai janta hoon ki tum yehi soch rahi ho ... ki itne din mai tumse milne nahi aaya ... aur aaj achanak se tumhare theek hote hi prakat ho gaya ... par sach bataun ... iski ek khaas wajah hai ... jab tumhe yaha laya gaya ... tab doctor ne kaha tha ki tumhe aur koi shock na diya jaaye ... kaha tha na Shree? (looks at Shree for a moment who was staring at him coldly, Deven smirks and looks back to Ashima ) ... aur tum to tab mujhse naraaz thi ... to maine socha ki agar mai tumhar samne aaya to tum theek nahi ho paogi ... isiliye maine apne aap ko tumse door kar diya ... jisse ki tum theek ho jao ... par yakeen mano... jab tumhare theek hone k koi asaar nazar nahi aaye... to mera dil buri tarah se toot gaya tha ... fir achanak pata chala ki tumhari haalat mei sudhaar hai ... tum apne purane dosto se mili (throws a wicked glance at Sameer) ... khush rehne lagi ... aur finally aaj ek dum theek ho gayi ho ...aur tumhare dost ... (looks at Sameer again) ... inka to poori zindagi mai shukra guzaar rahunga ... inka ehsaan to mai kabhi utaar hi nahi paunga ... inhi ki wajah se to meri Ashima theek huyi hai ... mujhe to samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki mai apni khushi kaise bayaan karoon ... i m so happy ...

He saw Ashima was scared but Sameer and Shree were unperturbed. There was no impact of his arrival on them. He was a little confused but decided to play further.

Deven: ohho ... ab dekho na ... hum yahin khade khade baatein kar rahein hain ... kyun na hum ghar chalein ... aap dono bhi humare saath chaliye ... celebrate karte hain ...

Sameer: zaroor ... kyun nahi ...(smirks) chaliye ... aapko lift de deta hoon ...

Sameer looks at Ashima who was visibly shaken but he assures her by blinking his eyes, presses her hand and left her.

Deven was a bit scared when Sameer offered him a lift but now he was not in a position to say anything and he had to accept the offer. He tried to come closer to Ashima and hold her hand but Shree came in between.

Deven shrugged and stood aside thinking that later once he reaches his home, he will throw off Sameer and Shree and will have his way with Ashima.

Sameer went to the parking lot to get his vehicle. He quickly called up Arjun and gave some instructions.

Sameer came with his vehicle. Shree rushed with Ashima to make her sit on the back seat and quickly got in to sit next to her. Deven was pissed off but he had no choice but to join Sameer in front seat.

Sameer drove silently as Deven kept on bragging about his "love" for Ashima and how "happy" they were after their marriage.

Ashima didnt know how much Sameer knew about Deven and was scared of the consequences if Sameer actually left her with Deven. She held Shree's hand tightly and Shree kept nodding to her assuring her that Sameer will not let anything wrong happen.

In 1 hour they reached Deven's place where Arjun and Chhotu were already present.

Sameer stopped his vehicle just at the entrance of building and Deven got off.

Arjun came forward, removed his glasses and tossed them inside his shirt.

Arjun: Deven Ghosh... from Kolkata?

Deven(nodding and confused): ji kahiye ...

Arjun: Kolkata police se ek information mili hai ... tum waha se drugs smuggle karte ho ... tumhare ghar ki talashi leni hai... ye raha search warrant ...

Deven is shocked and angry.

Deven(nervous): ye .. ye kya bakwaas hai ... mai koi drug smuggler nahi hoon... arrey... aaj hi meri biwi hospital se ghar aayi hai ... aur aap ye durgs ka ilzaam laga rahe hain mujh par...

Arjun comes dangerously close to Deven and looks directly into his eyes.

Arjun: Hum sirf apna kaam kar rahe hain ... to behtar hoga ki tum co-operate karo ... warna ...

Deven had no choice. They went inside the building.

Deven opens the lock of his flat and Arjun and Chhotu get in and almost ransack his house while he kept on shouting.

Chhotu finds some drugs packets near the inverter battery and shows it to Arjun.

*Flashback begins

As instructed by Sameer, Chhotu kept a watch on Deven and as he got a chance, he got some drug packets planted in his house through an informer. The informer diguised as an electrician did his job perfectly and hid the drugs n a corner just near the inverter battery and told Deven not to touch the battery.

*Flashback ends

Deven(scared): ye sab kahan se aaya ... mai nahi janta ... aap log mujhe fasaa rahe hain ...

Arjun signaled Chhotu and Chhotu held Deven by collar and dragged him

outside the building. Deven resisted and Chhotu gave a hard slap on his face and a tight punch in his stomach. Deven winced in pain and gave up as Chhotu kept on dragging him to the ETF vehicle and shoved him inside.

Deven saw Ashima was looking at all this still sitting in Sameer's vehicle and Sameer and Shree had come out and smirking at him. He knew that this was all their plan. He was scared but he was trapped.

He was not in a position to protest. Ashima was confused but got an assuring nod from Shree and she kept quiet.

Arjun and Chhotu take Deven to ETF office and make him sit in the interrogation room for more than 2 hours. He was frustrated and that is what Arjun and Sameer wanted to happen. To build this frustration inside him.

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#279

Part 11 B

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Sameer and Shree took Ashima home. Aisha was ready with an aarti plate. She welcomed Ashima and hugged her. Sameer took Ashima to meet Daadu. Ashima bent down to touch daadu's feet and he blessed her.

Sameer told that he had some work in office and asked Aisha and Shree to join him. Ashima had a hint what Sameer was thinking of but she couldn't dare to ask him.

Sameer went to his room, took some files and documents and left with Aisha and Shree instructing the servants and maids to take care of Daadu and Ashima.

Ashima and Aisha were supposed to share a room so Aisha had already made the changes to the room. Ashima sat talking with Daadu while the maid arranged her stuff in the room.

Ashima was feeling a little awkward and Daadu sensed that. He thought of making her comfortable. He asked a servant to get old family albums.

He sat with Ashima showing her their old photos. Ashima felt as if she was on a journey of life with Daadu and his memories. By the time they finished watching the photos, she was more comfortable and saw a tear stuck in Daadu's eyes.

Ashima: Kya hua Daadu? aapki aakhon mein aansu?

Daadu: haan ... khushi k aansu hain ... aaj bahut dino baad Sameer bahut khush hai ...

Ashima smiled.

Daadu: Beta ... mai tumse kuch maangu? dogi?

Ashima: aap aisa kyun bol rahey hain? mai aapko kya de sakti hoon?

Daadu: ek vaada ... ki tum mere Cheeku ka saath kabhi nahi chhodogi...

Ashima was in tears now.

Daadu: wo bahut chhota tha ... jab humara poora parivar khatam ho gaya ... fir Aisha k roop mein usey ek dost mili ... hum khush they ... fir usey tum se pyaar ho gaya ... usne mujhe bataya tha tumhare bare mein ... aur ye bhi ki tumhare Mata - Pita is rishte k liye razi nahi honge ... (Ashima looked down) ... fir tum uski zindagi se chali gayi ... aur uski sari khushiya hi chali gayi ... wo pehle wala Sameer nahi raha ... mai humesha se chahta tha ki uska ghar bas jaye (Ashima looks at him again) ... par wo tumse itna pyaar karta tha ... ki kisi aur k bare mein soch hi nahi paya ... par us din jab tumse mil ke aaya ... uski aankhon mein alag si chamak thi ... apni khushiya wapas pane ki wo chaah saaf dikh rahi thi uski nazar mein ... tumhe apni zindagi mein wapas paa kar wo bahut khush tha ... wo fir se sapne sajane laga hai ... tumhare saath apni zindagi jeene ke ... aur uske wo sapne sirf tum poora kar sakti ho ... isliye ... mai chahta hoon ... ki kisi bhi haalat mein ... sukh mein, dukh mein ... tum humesha uske saath rahogi ... vaada karo mujhse ...

Ashima(wiping her tears): mai ... vaada karti hoon ... kabhi ...Sameer se door nahi jaungi ... hum humesha saath rahenge ...

Daadu puts his hand on her head to bless her.

Servant calls them for lunch and they happily have lunch and wait for Sameer and Aisha to come back.

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Sameer tell Aisha about Deven's arrival and his subsequent arrest by Arjun. She is mad at him. They reach ETF office.

Sameer goes inside the interrogation room and tells others to stay out. Chhotu frowns again.

Chhotu (whispers in Shree's ears): aai shappath ... aaj Rathod sir pe bahut gussa aa raha hai ... bas ek baar wo haan bol dein ... isko chamgaadad ki tarah ulta latka kar iski dhulai nahi ki ... to apne baal katwa doonga...

Shree was emotional listening to this. He just gave a heart wrenching look to Chhotu and Chhotu melted and hugged Shree sideways almost choking him.

Deven smirked as he saw Sameer coming in.

Sameer quietly sat on chair and forwarded some papers towards Deven. Deven took them, read them and started laughing.

Deven(controls his laughter after a while): ye kya mazaak hai ... mai to kuch aur hi samajh raha tha ... aapne ye dene k liye mujhe yaha bulaya hai ... ye divorce papers ...

Sameer was staring at him coldly without a blink leaning back on the chair.

Deven: aapko sach mein lagta hai ki mai in divorce papers par sign kar dunga ?

Sameer didnt reply.

Deven(shrugs): chaliye ... is baat ka bhi jawaab mai hi de deta hoon ... Haan ... mai divorce papers par sign kar dunga ... waise bhi ab mai Ashima se bore ho gaya hoon ...is rishte se to mai bhi chhutkara paana chahta hoon ... meri bhi ek nayi girlfriend hai ... aur mai bhi uske saath ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahta hoon ... par wo kya hai na ... kuch bhi naya shuru karne k liye ek cheez lagti hai ... Paisa ... bas aap mujhe in papers

par sign karne ki keemat de dijiye ... mai sign karke chup chap chala jaunga ... palat kar dekhunga bhi nahi ... I promise...

Team members who were listening to this from outside were furious to listen all this but Sameer was still silent. But Chhotu couldnt control himself now.

He barged into the room.

Chhotu: Keemat chahiye tujhe ... aisi keemat dunga tujhe ki ...

He was interrupted by Rathod's raised hand.

Sameer: Ek minute Chhotu ...

Sameer took out other documents and files and banged them on the table towards Deven for him to have a look at them.

They were the FIR and chargesheet prepared ready to be filed against him

under Narcotics act as they found drugs in his house.

Deven was a bit worried now.

Sameer got up from the chair and moved closer to Deven and sat on the table.

Sameer: Deven Ghosh ... sach bataun ... mai bhi ek nayi zindagi shuru karne ja raha hoon ... aur jahan tak mai janta hoon ... nayi zindagi shuru karne ke liye paise se zyada zaruri cheez hoti hai neeyat ... kuch achchha karne ki ...Aur mai ye bahut achchhi tarah se janta tha ki tum itni asaani se Ashima ko divorce nahi doge ... isliye maine bhi apni poori taiyari kar rakhi hai ... aur haan... mai tumhe bata doo... ki ye drugs maine hi tumhare ghar mein plant kiye they... aur ye jhootha case bhi maine hi banwaya hai ... jo ki kafi hai tumhe kam se kam 10 saal jail mein rakhne k liye ... ya fir zarurat padi to ... (He looks at Chhotu who was already eyeing Deven to rip him off scaring Deven) aur fir bhi agar tumne divorce papers par sign nahi kiye to ...(he picks up his gun and points it on Deven making him sweat profusely) ... (Sameer smirks and takes off the gun) ... fir to divorce ki zaryrat bhi nahi padegi ... vidhwa ho jayegi ... to aur bhi asaan hai mere liye ... par mai aisa karna nahi chahta ... wo kya hai na ... Ashima theek ho gayi hai... hum shadi karne wale hain ... aur wo bahut khush hai ... to uski khushiyo k sadke mein mai teri jaan bakhsh deta hoon ... lekin agar tujhe teri jaan pyaari nahi hai to ... fir mai majboor ho jaunga ...

Deven(Nervous): ye galat hai ... aap mujhe dara rahe hain ... blackmail kar rahe hain ... Mmm... mai apse nahi darne wala ... aur aap mujhe aise nahi maar sakte ... aap ki inquiry hogi ... aap fas jayenge ... itna bhi bewakoof nahi hoon mai ...

It was time when Liza couldnt control herself. She barged in and stared at Deven.

Liza: Sir ... aap kyun iske saath time waste kar rahe hain ... aap isey Chhotu k hawale kyun nahi kar dete ... Chhotu... tera jo dil kare wo kar tu iske saath ... post mortem report to mai hi likhungi na ... mujhe to bas ye batana ki ... kya likhna hai iski post mortem report mein? Accident ya suicide?

Chhotu: ek coin lekar toss kar lete hain ... Head aaya to accident and tail aaya to suicide...

Chhotu and Liza laugh and Sameer smirks and looks at Deven.

Deven was now totally scared. He didnt know about Sameer's position and power and underestimated him. He was in mess now.

Sameer: soch lo ... mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai ... (forwarded a glass of water towards Deven)

Deven gulped the water and took the divorce papers and signed them reluctantly.

Sameer: Good choice!!! samajhdar ho ... next thursday family court mein hearing hai ... subah 11 baje ... time pe pahuch jana... Chhotu! ise baahar

tak chhod aao ...

Chhotu was a bit disappointed but he had to follow the orders.

Deven left embarrassed.

ETF got back to their work.

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Sameer, Shree and Aisha reached home in the evening.

Ashima was worried about the whole Deven case as she didnt know what was going on but was scared to ask Sameer. Sameer understood her fear and he decided to take the first step and talk to Ashima about it.

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So... how was it? Please excuse the spelling and grammatical mistakes

No pre-cap.

Those who want PM please comment on or like the latest part or send me a PM mentioning the story that u follow.

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Bhavna

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