Sequel ArNaya OS: Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho(last part-pg3) *Completed - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Oye Shanu.
Continuation ke upar comments kar.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awssuumm Update Zee!! Tune Rula Diya Yaar...Me Cried reading Shanaya's feelings..😭😭 lovd d line.."Maine yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra sirf 6 din ke liye nhi pehna balki 7 janmo ke liye pehna hai!!!" nd "Mere haathon ki mehendi ka rang bhi nhi utra.." See dats why i chose u fr writing my os..😊😊 u beautifully potrayed my emotions! Luv uu fr dat!! ❤️❤️ Aee lee..Meenakshi ko thappad bhi padh gya!! 😕 chalo..Arjun safe !!!!!!! But how will he manaofy me??? Continuee soonz!! Love u myyy zeee...❤️❤️ *huggss!!!* Muaaahhh!!! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Oye Shanu.
Continuation ke upar comments kar.

Maine Comment Kar Ditta Si..Check Karo Tussi!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awssuumm Update Zee!! Tune Rula Diya Yaar...Me Cried reading Shanaya's feelings..😭😭 lovd d line.."Maine yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra sirf 6 din ke liye nhi pehna balki 7 janmo ke liye pehna hai!!!" nd "Mere haathon ki mehendi ka rang bhi nhi utra.." See dats why i chose u fr writing my os..😊😊 u beautifully potrayed my emotions! Luv uu fr dat!! ❤️❤️ Aee lee..Meenakshi ko thappad bhi padh gya!! 😕 chalo..Arjun safe !!!!!!! But how will he manaofy me??? Continuee soonz!! Love u myyy zeee...❤️❤️ *huggss!!!* Muaaahhh!!! ❤️❤️



awwwieee...
Love you too,my Bong Sis... ❤️
*hugggsss!!!*
*mmmwaaahhh!!*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
all parts were superb
the use of this case with ArNaya is awesome
Shanaya's condtion was heart touching
her every word reflected her love for Arjun
and the trust that he won't leave her alone
beautifully written
plz do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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After an hour,Arjun reached his house and rang the doorbell.The servant opened the door and the sight infront of her shocked her...

''Dadasahib,aap?''

''Main thik hu... Shaanu kutthe?'' (Shaanu kahaan hai?)

''Vahinisahib mandir mein aap keliye Bappa se prarthna kar rahi hai... Aapki khabar sunke Vahinisahib ko bohut zor ka dhakka laga...''

Arjun could sense from the words that Shanaya was indeed really shocked.Arjun sighed and went inside,towards the Mandir...

As he was about to enter the Mandir,Shanaya turned around and looked at the sight infront of her.She was really happy to see her Arjun,safe and sound.She immediately got up and ran towards him and hugged him tightly.Arjun also hugged her tightly and let her shed away the tears her eyes stored... Arjun stroked her head and pecked her hair.

''Aap thik toh hai,Arjun? Aapko kahim lagi toh nahi? Sab aapke baare mein kya anab shanab bole jarahe thhe ki aapki bomb blast mein maut hochuki thhi,par,mere dil ne yeh kahi baat nahi maani.Mujhe mere pyaar,humare shaadi ke saato vachan aur mere Gannu Bappa pe pura bharosa aur yakeen thha,ki,aapko kuch nahi hoga... Dekha,mere pyaar aur vishwas ki jeet hui... Aap kabhi bhi aise chhorke mat jaiyega,warna,main mar jaungi...''

Saying this,Shanaya burst into tears and hugged him tightly.Arjun could feel the pain of his beloved wife... He kissed Shanaya's forehead and scooped her up in his strong arms and went inside the room.

As they entered their bedroom,Arjun kept down and suddenly,a sharp pain rose in his shoulders.He groaned in pain.

''Hey Bappa,yeh kya hua hai? Aapko toh bohut gehri chot lagi hai gardan pe... Main first aid kardeti hu... Aap yahin pe baithiye...'' a concerned Shanaya warned Arjun...

Shanaya brought the first aid box and started to do aply medicine on the wound.Tears fell from her doe-shaped eyes,when he winced in pain,while she applied Dettol on the wound.As she applied the medicine and carefully bandaged it,she hugged Arjun tightly from the back.Arjun turned around and saw tears in her eyes.Arjun cupped her face and kissed away all the tears.Shanaya carressed his face and placed a kiss on his forehead and eyes and left her lips to linger there,for a while.

Arjun knew that Shanaya was hurt and she wont express it.To relieve her from the pain,Arjun broke the hug and made her lie down.He leaned down and placed a wet kiss on her forehead and eyes.She was loosing her senses.Then,Arjun came down and placed a trail of wet kisses along her nape,earlobes and neckline. Arjun looked back at her pink lips.After a while,he claimed her lips.Shanaya threw her hands on Arjun's back and pulled him more to deepen the kiss.Arjun understood her antics and deepened the kiss...
Arjun then rose a little bit and placed open-mouthed wet kisses on her shoulder,by pulling her blouse strap a bit.A tear rolled down her eye,which fell on Arjun's cheek.Arjun immediately pulled himself and checked why Shanaya was crying.Arjun asked through his eyes.Shanaya nodded in negative and hugged him.Arjun kissed that tear drop and resumed loving his beautiful wife. Arjun pulled over a quilt over them and made love the whole night...

BG Music:

''Hum tere bin ab rehnahi sakte,
Tere bina kya wajud mera,
Tujhse juda agar hojayenge toh,
Khudsehi ho jayenge juda,
Kyunki,tum hi ho,
Ab tum hi ho,
Zindagi ab tum hi ho,
Chaen bhi,mera dard bhi,
Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho...''


The End.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Finally,updated it... Do comment on it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh i loved dis part..arjun vapas aagaya..yayy!! 😃 Arnaya moments were sooo Hawt 😳 😳 Haaye..Arjun knws better hw to stop shanaya's tears 😉 Nyc 1 !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ress/unress...Hayeee!!! Me Blushinggg!! Zeee Doll...luv uuu sooo mucchh!! ❤️❤️ Thanxx fr updating dis!! I woke up to this update nd u made me full red!!! 😳😳 I was blushing while brushing my teeth,having my coffee...Ufff!! 😳 Arjun sure knows how to stop my tears!! 😉 Awww...My Love,My Faith on Gannu Bappa nd on Our Marriage vows wer so strong!! 😊 Dats why i rqstd u to write this cuz u can potray my emotions beautifully! Their selfless love was sooo touchingg! Hayeee.. he carried me up in his arms!!! Ohhh Nooo..My Arjun hurt!!! 😲 Ufff...Me dressing his wounds!! Shirtless Arjun... Me cryingg seeing his wound! I seriously wud have! Usko dukhi ni dekh sakti main...😭 😭 Hayeee...😳😳 der love making session was sooo hottt!!! 😳😳 He pulled down my blouse strap..Oh Goshh!! 😳 AWww...Dats thw best part!! He is such a caring nd passionate lover!! A teardrop fell frm my eyes nd he released his hold! Luv it!! ❤️❤️ Tum Hi Ho... luvv u doll!!
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome part
Shanaya's immense love for her husband n
her prayers did go in vain
and Arjun came back to her
loved Arjun for the way he comforted Shanu
Shanu's understanding was superb
she kept her pains to herself
to avoid hurting Arjun
lovely ArNaya plot👏
thanks!!

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