Arakshi SS : ISHQ NE MAJBOOR KIYA........pt1(pg7)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi friends
how are you all
ab aap log fir kahenge update your other stories
I will update them...pakka
but mujhe ek naya story likhna hai ... I hope you people will encourage me
I know mein aap logon ko bohut bore karti hoon ...sorry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH
all characters are the same...
VEER ANAND : saakshi's twin .
loves saakshi more than anything
he was born with a rare heart disease.
he and saakshi are connected and he knows that she might even die without him
please tell me whether I should continue or not
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ya dear..obviously. .
Continue soon..
But continue other stories also..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good idea
Do continue
But finish do dil ek jaan first
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept magati 😃
cont soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PROLOGUE
the entire ETF team come back to the office after rescuing saakshi from the live bomb
" aaj arjun sir aur Sameer sir ke wajeh se ek aur aatangwaadi bhi pakada gaya aur saakshi ki jaan bhi bach gayi " chotu said
" guys I think hume ab saakshi ka birthday celebrate karna chahiye " sameer said
" woh ab conference room mein baiti hai , mein jaakar arjun sir ko lekar aati hoon " Aisha said
" haan , uska mood bhi teek ho jaayega " lisa said
Aisha went to arjun's room " sir can I come in ?"
" aao Aisha " arjun replied
" sir hum saakshi ka birthday celebrate karne waale hain , aap bhi aayiyega na " Aisha said
" mujhe yeh sab pasand nai , tum log enjoy karo " arjun said
" aaj itna sab kuch ho gaya uske saath , woh thodisi dukhi bhi lag rahi hai , aap bhi aayenge tho use accha lagega " Aisha said
he thought for a sec and stood up " teek hai , mein bhi aaunga , but just for 5 mins " he said
" ok sir " Aisha replied happily
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saakshi had kept her head on the table and was thinking of something
everyone noticed her tears which were running down automatically
" saakshi ? tum teek tho ho na ?" Sameer asked
" everything is fine , you are safe " Aisha said
" I wish I was not " saakshi answered absentmindedly
" kya ?" shree asked
" I wish aaj woh bomb blast ho jata ur mein marr jaati " saakshi said and everyone was shocked
her broken voice hurted him
" maine aur rathore ne bohut kuch kiya tumhe bachane aur tum yeh sab keh rahi ho " arjun asked angrily
" wohi tho , aur god ke saath mera deal hua tha na ki mein pehle jaaunga " a voice interrupted
saakshi was shocked
she immediately stood up and ran into his arms
he lifted her and kissed her forehead
" kon hai yeh ? saakshi aise bhaag kar kyun chali gayi iske paas ?" arjun thought
he was getting angry looking at them
he kept her down that was when she realised that he had lifted her , she slapped him
" oh , yeh kya tha ?" he asked her
" tumne mujhe utaya kyun ? tum pagal ho ? doctor ne hero giri karne se mana kiya hai na ? tumhe kuch ho jata tho ? tum delhi se kab aaye ?" she asked him angrily
her concern was clear in her anger , it increased arjun's curiosity
" aise koi apne twin ko marta hai kya ? " he asked
" twin ?" arjun thought and felt relieved
" aur waise bhi tum itni moti nai ho gayi ho ki tumhe utane se meri jaan chali jaaye , aur dusri baath , meri pack up one ke liye aur 6 months bacha hai , yeh humaara akhri birthday hai jo hum saath mein manaayenge , agli birthday tho tum akeli hi manaogi na , tho chalein tumhaare friends ke bohut hi yummy sa cake laaya hai " he continued
" tum jyada cake nai kaa sakte " saakshi said
" jaanta hoon meri maa , lekin tum tho kha sakti ho , aur mein thoda sa kha hi sakta hoon , it wont kill me " he said
" hmmm...hmmm" Sameer interrupted
" oh god mein tho bhool hi gayi , guys , yeh hai veer mera twin brother " saakshi said
saakshi introduced veer to everyone
they cut the cake and saakshi feeded the cake to veer first and ate the remaining almost immediately
" saakshi , kitne baar kaha hai maine mera joota mat khaya karo , tum bhi meri tarah bimaar pad gayi tho ?" veer asked
" tho acha hai na , tum aur mein iss duniya mein ek saath aaye the aur saath mein hi jaayen ge " saakshi said happily
all her team members felt sad hearing her reply
" chup ... bilkul chup ...tumhaari zindagi lambi hai " veer said
" waise , tum inn logon se kya keh rahi thi , woh bomb ko fut jaana chahiye tha ?" veer asked getting angry
" veer ...woh ...actually...ek min , ek min ... tumhaara test tha na , tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ?" saakshi asked him
" tumhaare saath apna last birthday spend karne mein aa gaya , test likhke kya karta mein ? 6 months ke baad jaana hi hai na " veer answered
" tum hamesha aise baatein kyun karte rehte ho veer ?" saakshi asked
she had started crying , whenever veer used to talk like that she used to feel a pain in her heart
" taaki ek din tum iss baat ko maan lo ki mein tumhaare saath zindagi bhar nai reh sakta " veer answered
" kuch nai hoga tumhe , mein tumhe kuch nai hone doongi , aayi baath samaj mein ?" saakshi asked angrily
veer hugged saakshi " teek hai "
guys...
tell me how it is
I need feedbacks



PART 1 - 7

Edited by magati - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very touching, sad to hear Veer's condition...dono bhai behen ka pyaar for each other kitna zyadda hai...
I hope there's some cure for Veer's condition that makes Sakshi happy...varna woh apna janamdin celebrate nahi karegi...
ab itni achi story ke update...jaldi update ka request and other story update ka request to banta hi hai na...
take care...continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh nice idea ... Awesome start ... Sakhshi has a twin brother. .. Veer is sounding very sweet ... But awe he is suffering with some heart problem ... Arjun was feeling jealous when he saw Sakhshi and veer together ... Something is burning haha... But thanks to God jaldi hi pata chal giya usko ke dono bhai behan hain... Kahin ye Pyar tou nahi ... I m smelling ... Hahaha ... Plz continue it soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So beautifully written & emotional starting.
Loved the twins talk...
Very touching story...
Do continue & thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ofcourse you gotta continue that 👍🏼
Another story and totally different this time..which is very interesting and emotional as well..loving it 😛
Continue soon and thank you 🤗

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