FF: Precocious Rawte. chapter 26, p.67 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awsome update..

Addu is so cute..

Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome di...
Superb!!!!!!!!!!
Addu... Kya dimag he... Ek cigarette se pura lodge uda diya.
Keep it up...
Waiting... Cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry..I m late..

Awesome update...

As usual...the one and only Addu rocks...

Cont. soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Addu is so sweet
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waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
addu os so smart...Arjun ka no. redisl krke unko help krdi...:-)
wah...kya trika dhunda hai band bjane ka...isliye kkhte hai smokng injurious to health... 🤣 🤣 🤣
shukr hai...Minister maan gye ...aur unofficially fake file bnwana good idea com.
awsm update...:-)
hmmm..for jasmine addu cn do smthng lyk spltng milk on her instead of drinking in morng tym...as she also hv only one dress ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 18 :

Chotu sprinted inside the conference room.

Chotu : Sir, they took a taxi and it dropped them in front of a cheap lodge. & they checked in that lodge. I've sent some of my men there to keep an eye on them.

Riya : Toh, let's go and arrest them.

Rathod : OK, team...

Arjun : Not now, We'll wait till the morning. When they call us for the ransom we'll go there and arrest them red handed.

Riya : But sir, it's too dangerous for Addu. Let's surprise them and arrest now. Then we'll interrogate them. It'll be the best option.

Aisha : Interrogate karke kuch nahi milga...Yeh sab ke piche jo vi hain, he did it anonymously. Look he is using a phone that we couldn't trace..

Sakshi : Aab yeh sab ke piche koi aur kaise ho sakta hain? We've always talked to 3.

Arjun : Tell me one thing , why those ordinary thieves are interested in Lala and a classified file like Sector 17?

Saakshi : Because they promised somebody with it.

Rathod : and he's giving them a good amount of money so that they risked of kidnapping a ETF officer's son.

Arjun : Exactly. So we have to bring that man to the book who is behind all this.

Roshni : Haan, aur uss aadmi ko tum log mere haathon main choroge...

Rathod : Haan... I'll let you borrow my gun also...encounter karr dena saalon ki.

Arjun : Ok, so here's the plan...Chotu, send 2-3 of our men as boarder in that lodge and tell them to keep an eye on them. I want some people around the area, to follow their movement...if possible keep someone as auto or taxiwala..that they could hire them.

Chotu : I've already done it sir. Two officers checked in that lodge.

Arjun : Ok, now inform local police for backup..At morning they'll gonna call us to inform about the exchange venue. I want our men around that place, so that after exchange they can't leave the place.

Riya : but sir if they smell the danger...they are wicked criminals...

Rathod : They won't. because all of the people would be from our side.

Aisha : But if they call us into their place?

Rathod : then after we brought out Addu we'll pull down that place. Riya, Shree...

Riya : Commissioner sir ke ghar..

Rathor : Ok, then guys have some rest..we've to rescue our boy. & Rawte, take Rosh home. You both need rest..

Arjun& Roshni : I'm fine.(and looked at each other).

Roshni : I'm not going home without my son. No way...

Sakshi : But..

Arjun : No Sakshi, none of us can't go home today...we can't think that place without him..

Rathod : Ok, then take a break & go to your cabin.

Aisha : I'll order dinner, Ri, come.

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Arjun took Roshni to his room and made her sit in the couch. He also sat beside hr. Roshni leaned on the couch and closed her eyes. She was worried about her son and was feeling restless. Suddenly she felt another set of palms took hr ones into their embrace and the thumbs were rubbing lightly on hr knuckles. She felt the restlessness and guilt in that touch. He is also worried about his son. She looked at her husband, his welled up eyes had guilt.

Arjun : I'm sorry, Rosh...I..

Roshni : Addu ko iss waqt kya karr raha hoga, Arjun? Ghar pe toh mere ya tumhaari saath khelta tha..

Arjun : He's fine Rosh, & tomorrow morning he'll have breakfast with us, don't worry.

Roshni : I hope mere baccha thik ho...

Arjun : (hugged her) he would be, Rosh. I promise.

Sakshi knocked and peeped in.

Sakshi : Arjun, Roshni. Come, have dinner.

Arjun : Rosh ko le jao...I've no appetites..

Roshni : I don't have either..Sakshi, tum log khalo...

Sakshi was about to say something while Chotu peeped in.

Chotu : Sir, lodge main kuch hua hain...

Arjun : (straighten up) What?

Chotu : Sir who...bahar aaiye, sab ko ek saath batati hoon.

And he went away, pulling Sakshi with him.

Arjun and Roshni followed them to the lounge where all are gathered.

Arjun : Kya baat hain Chotu?

Chotu : Sir, who kidnappers ki haalat kharab hain...they are injured..

Rathod : How?

Chotu : Sir, after checking in, they were climbing stairs to their room, and both men fell down from the 3rd floor...

Arjun : How?

Chotu : Kele ki chilke pe slip hoke..

Riya made a strange sound, suppressing her giggle.

Chotu : And a while ago...something happened in their room. They were screaming loudly. When manager went to ask, they made some excuses.. that one of them is scared of cockroaches, but they smell of burning hair and cloths..

Roshni : Kahi who log mere bacchee ko...

Rathod : Nahi...aise kuch nahi kiya hoga. Chotu pata karo Addu..

Chotu : I've already did sir. That girl took him to another room after that and my man heard baby's sound coming from that room. He's fine. Roshni di, khana khalo, nahi toh subha jab main un logon ko yahan le aaunga, tab tumhari ghuse aur laath se un logon ko dard nahi, gudgudi hoga.

Rathod : Aur Rawte hum sab ko vi refueling ki zaroorat hain...kal subha bohot kaam hain. Toh have dinner with us. Agar tum dono nahi khaoge toh in main se koi nahi kha payega. Come, join us.

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Jasmine brought Addu to another room, keep him on the bed , sat beside him and started smoking her cigar. Addu was feeling sick with that smell and he started moving restlessly. Jasmine ignored it and finished her cigar, then she adjusted herself beside him and lied down.

Addu saw her closing her eyes. Now he looked at her, she closed her eyes and kept and hand on her forehead. Addu saw her breathing became deep. He thanked his lucky stars that Jasmine didn't switched off the light. He really scared of darkness. But he was feeling lonely and boring alone here. He remembered how his dad used to put him on his chest or mom patted him to sleep. Telling him stories or about case or sing some bedtime song for him. He was missing his parents. What if they never return him to them.

Addu felt like crying when he noticed a little movement from the corner of his eyes. A little brown colored thing is moving at the edge of the bed and that thing was approaching to him. He became curious to it and tried to grab it, but it moved away. He tried again and it moved further. This time he found a pastime, he started playing with it, or specifically was trying to grab it.

In this little boy-cockroach chase, the cockroach flew up and landed on jasmine. Before Addu could figure out where it had gone, he saw Jasmine moved a bit. Addu immediately flipped around and closed his eyes. He don't want to be scolded or killed by this lady.

But he felt that bed was shaking as Jasmine was moving and suddenly she started screaming and jumping on the bed; she was scorching in places of her body .Addu opened his eyes to see why she is doing it and suddenly she jumped down from the bed , and was screaming and trying to remove her shirt. She definitely screamed as loudly as Goga, that within no time, Addu heard knocks on the door. Jasmine opened the door and ran outside, still screaming in same intensity.

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Goga was sleeping peacefully, while Billu received a call from his clients for last moment's arrangement. Then he freshen up and was about to took a pill while he heard a blood-freezing scram, he realized it as jasmine. He immediately called Goga and rushed to the next. And they found boarders of that floor already standing at her room's door.

They were knocking the door and calling Jasmine to open it. All of a sudden a screaming Jasmine sprung out of the room. She was jumping, scratching and slapping on the places of her body. All men gathered outside her room was gawking at her, Billu and goga was surprised most on her sudden action. They neither could believe their eyes nor could move their gaze from her. She was topless!!

Jasmine sensed she was outside her room when an aged boarder put an shawl on her. Suddenly she found a number of eyes staring at her and for the first time in her life she felt ashamed. She slumped down on the floor while Billu caught her and took her to the room. Goga and some of the boarders followed them.

The lodge managed came inside with a droopy eyes. He was irritated.

Lodge Manager : What happened again?

Billu : Don't know? Jasmine, what happened?

Jasmine : coc..cockroach!

Lodge Manager : Not again!!

Jasmine : It went inside my shirt and...and

She started sobbing.

Billu : (patted her had) It's ok Jasmine. Tum tablet lo aur so jao.

All left her alone with Addu. She wore her shirt, it lost most of its buttons and only two was left, she sighed helplessly, freshen up and again sit on the bed. She took the bottle of the sleeping pills.

Addu looked at her hand holding the bottle, this was near his leg, h took this opportunity and kicked her hand. It made her leave the bottle and it went up on the air. some tablets fell on Addu, some on the bed and some on the floor. It made the frustrated Jasmine furious and she was about to slap ADDU.

Jasmine : (raised her hand) Shaitaaan baccha!! Avi maar dungi tujhe!!

Addu could felt the rage into her voice and he was frightened. He nervously smiled at her, showing his gums.

Jasmine looked at the boy for a brief moment, sighed and started collecting those tablets and put them into the bottle. Then she sat on the bed when Addu rolled to her and tried to catch her hand. She looked at him and took him into her arms. She tightly held him to her heart and patted him.

Jasmine : You are missing your mom, na?

Addu made a hum and a crying expression.

Jasmine : Me too...bina maa ke rehna bohot mushkil hain, I know...Don't worry, tomorrow I'll took you to your mom. I promise.

Addu fisted her shirt and again made a sound.

Jasmine : So jao, subha mumma se milna hain na.

She started patting this baby to sleep, keeping him on her chest. For the first time, something changed inside her when she felt those soft heartbeats against hers. She was feeling peace inside her. She don't know why but suddenly she wished for having someone like this little thing into her life, who could wipe out all stresses in a moment. Today she recalled her tender, happy days with her mother and also that day when police arrested her mother for killing her dad, that scoundrel and she became completely alone in this cruel world. She remembered Roshni's question, "DO YOU HAVE ANY FOGGIEST IDEA HOW A BABY FEELS WHEN IT IS SEPARATED FROM ITS MOTHER?" Yes she had. That feeling was always within her. and now she made another baby go through that and this time she made a sin because this baby is far helpless than she was.

After I kicked that bottle, I saw jasmine fuming at me while I offered her a smile. That must've mellowed her down . She started picking up those tablets while I managed to hold some of them into my fist. Then she again sat on the bed with that bottle and I again tried to take that bottle , but she took me into her arms and asked me if I'm missing my mom or not. I tried to say , " Isn't it obvious, silly women? Why you guys kidnapped me?" and then she hugged me and I felt she is not that bad she shows. She put me on her chest and started caressing my back like mom does every day and I didn't remember when I fell asleep.

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Now, tell me how it was....

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update👏
So they have found out about the lodge... great😃
felt a little sad for jasmine at the end...
eagerly waiting for addu to return to his parents now😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice one

loved it

thanx for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
So sweet dera awesome
I loved it beautiful
Addu kitna shaitaan hai 😆😆
I really felt bad for jaismine
Her past was really horrible 😭
Waiting for ETF to be in action
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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