Arjun Case SS: The Devil's Trap, Chap4, Page 27 24/01 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Well, Tina, your Chapter 1 has come along nicely, and whoever it was who has kidnapped and/or bumped off Anuj seems to have framed this trusting, desperate Arti with that bloody shirt. I expected that there would have been some sort of message for the wife - is she Shireen or Kamini? - by now.

If they do not want ransom and were taking revenge on him for something, why mail his shirt to his wife? What reason can they have for intimidating her? On the other hand if he is not dead, this might serve some purpose, by frightening her into doing whatever they want her to do. Let me see!

Shyamala Aunty
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Keep up the good work Tina.

I swear you come up with the best case and this one has me at the edge of my seat already.

Loving it so far, but please don't make us wait so long, update soon.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Well, Tina, your Chapter 1 has come along nicely, and whoever it was who has kidnapped and/or bumped off Anuj seems to have framed this trusting, desperate Arti with that bloody shirt. I expected that there would have been some sort of message for the wife - is she Shireen or Kamini? - by now.

If they do not want ransom and were taking revenge on him for something, why mail his shirt to his wife? What reason can they have for intimidating her? On the other hand if he is not dead, this might serve some purpose, by frightening her into doing whatever they want her to do. Let me see!

Shyamala Aunty

😳 I made a mistake when choosing Anuj's wife name😳
Actually Kamini and Shireen are all the same person😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

Keep up the good work Tina.

I swear you come up with the best case and this one has me at the edge of my seat already.

Loving it so far, but please don't make us wait so long, update soon.

Thanks for the PM.


😳Lol itna matt flatter kar mujhe☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
nice
story but m on cell so coment ni kr skti
Edited by Luci333 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Heyya tinu..sorry for being soo late 😳
Interesting update..sakshi found something...wanna know what was that and how it will help them in the case 😛

Oopsy arjun is in anger...arti toh gayi kaam sh..hope the whole ETF team founds out the truth soonish 😃

What i like most in all your case story is that everyone is given equal roles to play in the case solving 👏

Awesome update..continue soonish and thank you for the pm 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Very nice
btw hoping 4 lil arakshi moments
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
first of all sorry for late comment did'nt get time coz of diwali
was nice update what was that sakshi found
pls pm me for next part also 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
superb start tina dear:-)
so dis tym victim is shakshi's frnd husband...nd nw first suspect is Reeta.
Lets see hw Arjun nd team solve dis case...by d way ye shakshi ko kya dikhgya jo bina btaye investigate krne nikal pdi..

lets see...nd dis tym don't forget me dear for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
An interesting and unique plot
Please do continue
P.s i have commented on ugly truth but have not recieved pm for last part is it too late?
Xx

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