Shot Five ~ Beyond Forever : page 23 & 24

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Kareena1994

@Kareena1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Awesome update
loved it
dustin choelo sent her to etf
waiting for next part
update soon
thanks for the pm

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Vampu dear Awesome

Maza aa gaya pad ke

Super interesting

Baapre dustin ne beja tha riya ko '

Amazing Continue soon 😊

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

it was awesome, blossom and mind blowing update dear.

love riya pov.

love this arjun.

even a mere of arjun thought brought happiness on riya face.

in fb rathore and riya talk was shocking.

in fb

OMG she was a spoilt brat n Ricky was her frnd n she is doing all this to knw about him.

Wht the...!!!

Dustin Choelo sent her to ETF n wanted her to make Arjun fall in love with her...but why...?????

i hate him.

so thats why riya is doing all this.

precap looks interesting.

continue soon.

and thanx for the pm.

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Ankita..
like button not working...
thanks for d pm
short one..
awesome
so rakesh related to sikander
n riya..
aww
arjun bro...
feelings..

sam bro as chief
very well written
lovely
waiting next...
winter...!!

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

shocking update
this is getting more and more interesting day by day
loved it
waiting for next part
cont soon

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

hi ankita🤗...

awesome!!!

but tell me one thing why dustin coehlo wasnt to trap arjun ???😕

ye pyaar ka naatak karwane ka iraada kya hai uska?

update soon😃

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Awssuuum Vampy..though it was suppossed to b romantic but u ended up putting Suspense nd suspense...😆 Koi ni!! Lovd it..Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soon!

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Krinal

@MissC

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Interesting concept and very mysterious story!
Gosh how can Riya do this to Arjun!
He'll be so angry but broken as well when he finds out about it.
So this is why she was trying to create a distance from him.
But what'll the commissioner get from all this?
Update soon