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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

unresed my comment on pg-7

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Now that is what I call a plot. Kudos!
Update soon!!

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Superb update Love Ariya moment. What did commisioner want by doing this to arjun? Precap seems interesting. Thanks for pm . Conti soon

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hey...interesting parts, Vampu!

So this is the reason Riya is feeling guilty and consequently creating a distance from Arjun.

And Coelho asked her to play this game!

Aur woh bhi pyaar ka game.

Very very intriguing story line dear...waiting for more:)

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archi

@hunny1993

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Vampu jab mein tumari story padti hu to ek bar padne se samaj me nehi ata dobara padna padta hai

Its really so much mysterious

Plz continue nxt part soon

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shafa mohamed

@shaff

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

awesome update dear

but im still in confusion

continue soon

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benaz

@benaz

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Hey this is an awesome story. I just read both parts and this last update was filled with such suspense. I want to know what made Arjun angry in the precap.

Looking forward to your next update!