ArNi OS :Arjun Ki Mohini

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Heylo Friends...😃

A gun was held to my head demanding a treat in the form of an ARNI OS by Ms Payal.The treat in question was for my tweet that got Retweeted by Shaleen😳 Hope You Like It...Jootey chappal sab welcomešŸ˜†

Payal, this one is for you...


Character Sketch

Arjun Rawte : Businessman


Roshni Rawte : Arjun's wife

Payal Rawte : Arjun's sister


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Mohini: Arjun's muse and love obsessionšŸ˜‰





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Arjun was in floating in the clouds somewhere in Heaven. His mind was light as feather and his heart filled with pure joy.A beautiful Apsara step into his room carrying a gold and precious stone encrusted jar and glass and slowly walked towards him giving him the most sensuous smile and swaying her hips deliciously.She smelled of all the fragrant flowers of earth and heaven.As she neared him Arjun saw her as awestruck as he was the first time she had appeared before him.Her beauty never ceased to amaze him.Her milk and honey complexion mesmerized him every time he glanced at her.She poured him a glass of whatever it is they serve in Heaven and offered it to him adding with it a dash of shy smile. Arjun got dazed some more and took the glass from her making sure his fingers grazed her hand as much as possible.The Apsara became more coy and Arjun could take it no more.He pulled her hand and tried to draw her to himself,"Swami...chodiye na!" she said.Her voive quivered with fear and anticipation which made Arjun pull her harder."Mohiniii..."

"Kya kar rahe ho?" spat Roshni irritatedly, slamming a cup of hot tea on the tea table.
Arjun sat bolt upright in the armchair he had dozed off in waiting for his morning tea which Roshni took forever to prepare.

He had been pulling at the hand of the life size ceramic statuette with outstretched hand standing next to the armchair.

"Kuch nahi...shayad so gaya tha," he answered embarassedly unable to look at the annoyance and irritation in Roshni's eyes.He quietly began to gulp down the hot tea.
Glaring at her husband Roshni turned on her heel and marched off to the kitchen.She threw the tray into the sink muttering angrily."Phir Mohini! Yeh naas piti Mohini pata nahi kab peecha chodegi!Aur iss aadmi ko toh bilkul laaj sharam nahi hai.Ghar mein patni ke hote hue doosri auraton ke peeche bhaagta hai.Bhagwaan, yeh kaise saza waali zindagi di hai iss behuda insaan ke saath." She wiped her tears with her pallu and started cooking.

As a mark of protest Roshni put three spoons of laal mirchi into Arjun's lunch which she then packed into his Lunch Box.

The moment the pots and pans had started clanging in the kitchen Arjun had fled to his room to get ready for work.

After a hectic day it was time for lunch.Arjun pushed his files away and placed the box in front of him.He served himself from the fare Roshni had prepared and dug in hungrily.The curry scalded his mouth like it had caught on fire and he jumped in his seat looking for water. Ah phooh Ah phooh he muttered his eyes watering.

"Kya hua,Jaanu?" The moment Arjun heard the honeyed voice all the burning fled from his mouth.The fire brigade is here, he thought giving Mohini a huge smile.

She rushed in and seeing him struggling to pour water for himself, poured it herself and held it to his lips.He had broken out in a sweat and she wiped it with her dupatta. Arjun was back in the clouds somewhere in heaven.

"The food looks lousy.Does she know to cook anything?Forget it.Lets eat out". Mohini tried to pull him out of his seat.He pulled her back and made her sit on his lap."And waste precious time getting there, ordering and waiting for the food to arrive?" he whispered naughtily grazing his lips against her ear.

"Then are you planning to stay hungry?" asked Mohini nibbling his nose.

"Here.Feed me this food,Mohini.Tumhaare haathon se zeher bhi amrit ban jayega!"

The lunch hour passed blissfully behind Arjun's locked office door.

Roshni was feeling very guilty for making Arjun go without food that day.She was miserable the whole day.
He had returned from work and was now comfortably splayed on his favourite arm chair scribbling in the huge red scrap book open in his lap.
He always kept that book under lock and key and never allowed anyone to even peek in it.Roshni was sure it was filled with Mohini's pictures.She badly wanted to burn that damn book.

She brought him his evening tea and placed it near him this time a little carefully."Khana khaya tumne?" she asked him pretending to be disinterested.

"Haan.Khana hi pada.Tumne itne pyar se jo khilaya." smiling vacantly staring intently into the book."Maine khilaya?" "Haan,Mohini.Aur kaun khilayga
mujhe?" Roshni wanted to slam the nearby flower vase on his head.She marched into the kitchen and moment later pots began singing again in the kitchen.

When she came out of the kitchen a minute later the armchair was empty.Arjun had fled to his room.

After a usual strained and silent dinner Arjun went up to sleep and Roshni to her kitchen to finish up the chores.


When Roshni joined her husband in the room he was as usual happily muttering in sleep.It was the usual."Mohini...this and Mohini...that" Roshni spent another miserable night beside her husband who was losing himself in another woman's arms in his dreams.

This was the happy married life of Arjun and Roshni Rawte and it had been this way since they were married a year ago.

Continued below...
Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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She couldn't take it anymore. After packing him off to office she went straight to her room and pulled her suitcase out of the closet.She filled it with her clothes and other things.She placed the house and cupboard keys on the table on his side of the bed .She then went her sister in law Payal's room and knocked loudly.

Payal was a college student who also worked part time teaching animation at a nearby computer centre.Sleepily she opened her door,"Bhabhi, what happened?"

"Nothing.Only that I am leaving home.Tell your Bhaiyya if he is conscious enough to notice my absence". replied Roshni angrily.

"Bhabhi, don't do this.Don't leave home this way.Bhaiyya loves you so much", pleaded Payal with her Bhabhi.

"You must be blind as a bat then", retorted Roshni and walked off.

Payal followed her pleading but Roshni wasn't having any of it.

She walked out of her marital home.

Payal ran to the house phone and frantically called her brother.

"Mohini...", answered Arjun filled with bliss.

Payal slammed the phone down in anger.She left for college in a huff.Let him find out himself, she thought angrily.He deserves this.

Evening came and the house was deathly silent."Moh...err...Roshni?" Arjun called into the empty house."Chai milegi kya?"

He searched the whole house and finally figured out she was gone.Despair rose in him as he sat on the bed thinking of her and their life together.

Arjun was a businessman and a very successful one at that.But fortunately or unfortunately depending upon how you see it he was also endowed with artistic inclinations.He was a poet and a gifted artist.He frequently escaped into fantasy worlds and saw the real world with rose tinted glasses.

Roshni was Arjun's wife chosen by his parents.She was born and raised in a business family that had little use for sensitive feelings and outlook. Theirs was a practical family where frivolities of all kinds were strictly forbidden.The men worked hard and earned a living and the women worked hard and looked after home and hearth. Roshni strongly believed in these values.

Two such diverse individuals were binded together in holy matrimony. And now that bond was about to be broken.

Roshni had called a joint family meeting to complain about her philandering husband.Arjun was summoned to her family home and he walked in with trepidation. All members of both families were present and looked on tensely. Roshni sat near her mother sobbing. Arjun looked at her pleading for understanding but she didnt even glance at him.

Arjun's father ordered his daughter in law to say whatever was on her mind.

It was the cue she needed.She got up and at length decribed Arjun's every trangression and sin against her in complete detail.

His parents looked at him in shock.His father in law stared at him in disappointment. Roshni's brothers wanted to beat him black and blue.

Roshni slumped down on the sofa at the end of the recital and continued sobbing in her mother's lap.Arjun again gazed at her willing her to look at him but she would not have mercy on him.He felt miserable.

Both his & Roshni's mother charged at him at the same time.

"Kaun hai yeh Mohini? Pehle kyun nai batay Arjun?" demanded his mother

"Arey us kulakshani ke saath rehna tha toh meri beti se shaadi kyun ki? Kya mila uski zindagi kharaab karke?" screeched his mother in law.

"Batao Arjun.Bol Arjun.Kaun hai Mohini?" 360 degree angle and dhin dhin dhan dhan background score as a heart broken Arjun stands speechless in the middle while being assaulted by these oldies who are then joined by other oldies.

Every time he bit into that juicy Tandoori chicken leg he never gave thought to the time that poor chicken must have spent roasting in fire.He felt exactly like that as of now."Dont do this to me,Roshni.Dont make me narrate my love life so publicly.They'll sent me to a nut house," he pleaded silently to his wife.She kept ignoring him.

"Ruko! Mai batati hoon kaun hai Mohini!" thundered Payal and every one went silent. She marched into the room.She had the red scrap book under her arm. Arjun's heart slammed in his chest.Roshni curled her lips as if she smelt something awful.

"Lo Bhabhi.Dekh lo.Yahi hai Mohini," she handed the book to Roshni.Roshni pouted and turned away with a "Humpf"

"Lo na.Ek baar dekh toh lo." Roshni first glared at her sister in law and then at her husband and took the book and opened it.

Her mouth fell open.

Pages after pages Arjun had drawn her in various avatars from a heavenly apsara to a Kashmir ki Kali.The paintings were so beautiful they belonged in a renowned museum.Roshni till that time had never realised what a beautiful woman she was.Arjun's strokes gave her that celestial and divine look. Anyone who glanced at the drawings would find it very hard to pry their eyes off the paintings.Even more beautiful were the lines he written below each work of art.They were all addressed to her, his Mohini.It filled her heart with so much love and warmth.She looked up at her husband with renewed love and respect.He looked back at her with blazing passion.

Payal turned her bhabhi towards a mirror and said,"Yehi hai Bhaiyya ki Mohini." Roshni burst into fresh tears.She realised how cold she had always been to her die hard romantic poet husband.And now she had dragged him here to humiliate him infront of so many people.She could not bear the guilt.

Arjun's mother snatched the book and saw what was in it.She look amazed and exasperated.She began screaming at her son."Bheja kahin girvee rakh diya hai kya? Haan? Apni hi byaata ko chori chori se dekhne ki kya zarrorat hai? Patni teri hai ya padosi ki? Yeh sab baatein usi se kaha kyun naahiii?'

"Aur tum Sun Bai. Ek baar usse pooch toh leti yeh mari Mohini kaun hai? Suitcase uthaya aur chali aayi maike.Aisa koi karta hai kya?" Roshni sobbed
some more.

"Roshni" hearing her husband calling her she looked up.

"Mujhe maaf kar do,Arjun.Mai tumhe kabhi samajh nahi paayi.Tumpe itna ganda ilzaam laga diya." Roshni said tearfully.

"Maine bhi toh kuch samjhaane ki zyada koshish nahi ki na.Meri bhi galti hai" he replied.

"Ghar chalo,Roshni"

Without caring about her in laws or her uptight stiff necked family Roshni rushed in to Arjun's arms.He too embraced her passionately.


And they lived happily ever after.And this time passion and romance ki koi kami nai thi!


Inspired from an ancient movie I had seen which moved me immensely. šŸ˜†Hope you liked it!😳



Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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unres
zuby ji šŸ¤—
ye kya tha my mouth wide open šŸ˜†
i m just rofling 🤣
first i thought mohini aap khd ho šŸ˜‰
den 2nd part me samaj aa gya dat rosh was mohini šŸ‘
ye oldies aisi hoti h
lol pehle khud bhaiya ko data 😭
pir khud ā­ļø
aww beautiful pic 😳
me toh ho hi šŸ˜›
bhaiya ki tareef ahem ahem
literally rofling
rosh cursing bro šŸ‘
very well written
jhatke hatkešŸ˜‰
bhaiyya ki behen hu so gun to šŸ˜†
so sweet n cute os wow
lovely
tussi chaa gye ji..
ps. post dis to bhaiya..
Edited by Payal_156 - 11 years ago
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unres kr ditta
zuby ji hats off for d so different work
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😲 😲
ye kya tha 😲
awesome 🤣 🤣
superb 🤣
very cute os 😃 šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

unres kr ditta
zuby ji hats off for d so different work


Treat pasand aaya na?😳 Chal! You happy I'm happy!šŸ˜† You saved ArNi ki doobti nayyašŸ˜‰
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Originally posted by: shreya09

😲 😲

ye kya tha 😲
awesome 🤣 🤣
superb 🤣
very cute os 😃 šŸ˜†


Thanks Shreya😃
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my expressions while reading it...
first: SHOCKED😲
second: wat the...🤣
third: AWWW..so cuteā˜ŗļø

loved it
awesomešŸ‘šŸ‘
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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aww...such a beautifuuulll OS...loved it...i can guarantee it..that i m not gonna forget this OS...this story for a long time...

aww...i so badly wish to get such a die hard romantic nd poetic husband in future...*smiles dreamingly*


love d it to th core...
poor arjun...koi usse samajh hi nahi paya...but even he should've expressed his feelings...nd romantic approach to roshni na...

lolz...loved his mom's dialogue "teri hi patni hai...kisi padosi ki nahi" ROFL

keep writing

love
Aisha

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