ArAkshi SS: I'll be there for you(?) CH4 PG13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Res.. Will comment after reading it .. will unres in diff post.. 😆

Edited by amswathi93 - 11 years ago

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PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hellooo ji..sorry im soo late in commenting 😭

haaye re..yeh kitna bada surprise hain...my gf ji is writing an SS without even me blackmailing her..badiyaan hain ji 😆

Ofcourse you should continue with it...im sure it will be a totally amazing one 😃

Wait wait tum toh already continue kar rahi ho nah 🤪 🤣

Coming to the update..soo Arjun and sakshi dost hain issme..kya baat hain..i totally love that 😳😳😳 and they are soo comfy with each other..thats great 😛😛

Im totally loving it..kripa karke jaldi update karo meri gf ji...aur tarpao mat 😎 😆 😆

Love the name arohi..soo sweet and cute 😃😃

lots of chocolate merciii for you ❤️ 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

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First of all a big sorry for using the word 'ajeeb'. Me and my hindi.🤢..😕 Sorry yaar did not want you to feel the 'bad wala ajeeb' way when i wrote that.. Kaan pakadke sorry..😭

Sameer entered the conference room and dejectedly sat on his chair. As everyone had their worried gazes on him, one person was only looking at the door.

Fell in love with these lines. 🤗That is Miss. Sakshi Anand for you. The sentence conveys the kind of relationship that they share.😳 I got the essence of the whole relationship with that single line. 😳 Kudos sakuu... 👏

Sad ending..!!!!😲 How can it be sad. With my extremely limited imagination i can visualize only a "happily ever after" ending.. 😃 With both of them realising how much they need each other in their lives .. 😳 But that is because writing sad stuff needs more creativity and imagination and i'm sure you're gonna nail it.. phir bhi sad ending..!!! 😭 I'm all tears already.. 😃 Sad ending zaroori hain kya.. 😳 Iok..!! carry on with the sad ending idea but only on one condition..😉 You'll have to provide a happy OS after you end this.. A cute one.. 😆 Deal..!!???😃 I know you've agreed.. so party sharty for the new OS🥳🤣

Enough of my rambling... It was an awesome update..👏⭐️ continue soon sakuu.🤗...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Beautiful sukku

arjun state after his moms death beautifully described😭

So aarohi is his sister 😊

Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Awesome...love the bond btwn Arjun-Saakshi, they understand each other so well...lovely

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Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Very nice update dear...
This kind of a relation between Arjun Sakshi is really interesting..
I mean...a strong friendship...
So Arohi was his sister...cute...

Cont. soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hello...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SORRY...sach mein 50 PMs hain abhi...which means 50 nsorries...!!! Hey bhagwaan ji...pehle to itne updates nai milte the...I used 2 get bored and ab jb padhai sir pe hai to dekho mere sare writers ko jaise kisi ne high alert pe daal dia ho...Update pe update...!!! Well Ill enjoy all of them ...slowly and steadily...phir chahe months hi kyu na lag jae...
Well coming to the update...It was amazing...!!!!!!!! AS ALWAYS...reply chotu hoga for obvious reasons...abi its 4 am here n i have my coa in d afternoon ...n usse pehle sona , uthna, padhna bhi hai...so...
BUT amazing story...n WHAT DID U SAY ????????????????????????
SAD ENDING ???????????? you better tel lme from before hand...ek aur attack nai jhel paenge...you write so well ki it seems so real toh ill better skip the last chap...bt no sad ...
humari bhi koi image hai...veryyy serious and chup chap types you cant just break it by making me laugh and cry neva u want by your awesome work...!! Log kya sochenge ???