Ariya OS : I'M WITH YOU. pa 17/18/19 OCT 8 END - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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" Hamesha aap ko unke saath rehena hoga , aur ha unhe kabhi bhi akle mat chodna , unki marzi se jiyo aap , jo vo chahti hai , vahi karo... unka bolna bahut jaruri hai Arjun ji , unke Dil mai kya hai ye jaana hoga... "
" Ji Dr. meri pooro koshish karunga ..."
Dr paths his back & abt to go from there..
" Aur ha unhe aapki Sagai ki bare mai pata nhi chalna chayie.."
" Ji.."
Arjun goes to meet her.. She siletly seating on Bed..
" Riyu//" he caals her , but she does not look at him.. He seat next to her & slowly pull her on him , now her body rest on him..
" Riyu kuch to bolo... plz..."
But she only look somewhere...
" Baat bhi nhi karogi apne Arjun se...?"
That name bring her back , she raise her haed & look at him...
" Arjun..."
She hug him tightly...
" Arjun mai mar kyu nhi gyi Maa ke saath?"
" Riya " he put palm on her mouth..
She romed his hand & says..
" Dekho na , kitna caha hota na ki mai bhi mar jati , ab mai kya karugi... pata hai mai na dream dekh rahi hue ki aap mere pass hai aur maine aapko hug kiya hai..." she smile sheeplessly & start crying badly , suddely she let out big scream & crying more..
Arjun just heleplessly looak at her...
Sameer is watching all this..
" Agar tumhara Dil tut bhi jaye Sakshi to mujhe parva nhi , lakin mai mere dost ko mar mar ke jeete nhi dekh sakta.. " he says to himself & wipe his tears
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

After som time Riya sleeps but she hold Arjun's shirt tightly.. Arjun also sleep beside her...

At Night...

" Arjun utho ghar jana hai na.."
" Arjun open his eyes & sees Riya is still sleeping & Sameer wakes him up...
" Per Riya ????"
" Mai hue na... chill"
" Hmmm "
" But call me if u want any..."
" Ys Arjun..."
Arjun goes Home..
Precap :
Riya vaishes somewhere & Arjun founds her near Lake ..
Riya try to walk in Water...
Arjun slap her & comes Home...
Arjun decides to stay at Sameer's Home for Riya..
Sakshi & Arjun's Mother unware abt this..
Shree is Happy to see Ariya together ,
Shree tells Arjun why Riya broke up with him & Arjun gets angry..
Riya is in own world..
P.S : TRY TO UPDATE TOM NIGHT.. ACTUALLY MAI CAFE SE UPDATE DE RAHI HUE... PLZ DN'T ANGRY FRNDS.. TRY TO UNDERSTAND ME.. AND YS TOD IS MY mOM'S 13TH bARSI & I MISSES HER LOT ... AND IM AWAY WITH MY LOVED ONE TOOO.. MISS HIM SO MUCH I NEED HIM MOST... 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Heart touching updates dr.
OMG Riya is in depression.
Awww Arjun still love her so much..!!!!
Samsha's segment was cute...!!
Feel bad for her. Her each word held so much pain..!!!
Precap looks damn interesting..!!!
Continue soon.

Take care dr.,,,!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Aww Mannu 🤗 Take care yar...
Nice part...
So Riya is depressed and she dnt know Arjun is engaged... wat will happen if she comes to know... wat happened btwn Ariya that they broke up??

update when u feel OK no compulsion,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
super awesome ..
u made me speechless.

such a fresh new concept on arjun, riya and sakshi..


loved ur writing...


please continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Unres--
Awee manu..dont feel alone...main hoon na...
ur stories always mad smiled on my face..
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whenever i fell alone..i always read ur stories...
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angery vo bhi tumse...naaa
i lv u manuuu...u r so sweet...n my faverate writer...
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take ur time...
n about story..its awesome..no word to described how much i m happy after seeing ur post..but realy felt sorry in last...
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riya lost her mother n her condition is so wrose..realy felt bad..
omg arjun lv riya but he enggage with shakshi...
but the resion behind this...
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sameer is so caring n nice frs...
wooo arjun still lvs her so much n she tooo...
hop both r together soon...
thank u manu for such a wanterful story...
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lvv u n miss u...

precape seems realy scary...waiting for ittt update soon...Asap sys...
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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Really nice & totally different concept story

Plz continue soon

Don't b upset dr bcoz our dr one never like us 2 b upset ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
nice update...
arjun still loves riya...

riya alone ... shree's concern for riya...

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
hi manali🤗... awesome os!...riya's mom died😲... but happy that arjun is with her😊... felling sorry for u ...tc dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept...😊😊😊
Riya is getting in depression...
She don't know about Arjun's engagement...
What will happen if she comes to know...
What happened between Ariya that they broke up????
Loved Raesha segment...

Precaps seems very interesting...
Continue soon...Plz plz plz PM me...

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