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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello All ,

I know my signature says currently passive and I haven't updated my Stories like over a month now..but now that I have some free time I will probably start writing again

This Post is just about what I feel about the serial and its my opinion and you feel free to agree or disagree..I really needed to vent it out

The Show started with a bang , The first promo was enough to raise curiousity in my mind and so it began ...

The ETF team was introduced and all of us fell in love with the characters- Some with Rathore , others with Riya , Many with Shree & Chotu and How could someone not fall for our Arjun ..

It was the first time that I followed writers of the Show too Anshul & Deb too

100 + episodes and a year after

1. The character of Riya isn't there and is missed till now . Her interactions with Arjun , her masti with Shree and Chotu . I am glad that the writers gave her a heroic exit

2. Anshul and Deb left the show and it is a great loss as all characters were created and envisioned by them and with them gone all characters have gone for a toss

3. Sameer Rathore- The ETF chief who is actually missing on the show now , no clarity on where he is or if he will return but do I blame him? . I blame the writers who took the story forward for an ETF chief is every time proved wrong by the Second in command even when the former challenges the latter . I really don't like the way Rathore is always proved wrong .

I don't have anything against Arjun solving the cases for my Arjun Prem is too strong but not at the expense of any other character

4. Chotu well is hardly there and I thought in the serial killer episodes a commando should have been required the most

5. Liza has finally started to make her presence felt - is this because of lack of other actors not sure but If I remember correctly in the episode where Actress was killed why could she being a forensic doc identify the poison in nails .Her & Shree Story well hasn't even started and no Nok Jhoks is shown between them .

6. Ayesha - My favorite lady on the show , was a undercover agent, fought with Arjun and then the graph went down . She is an ammunition expert so should not the CVs explore that angle too .Her Relationship with Rathore is now gone for a toss . They should now show that Ayesha can too carry out separate investigations and doesn't have to accompany Arjun everywhere

7. Shree- Chalo iska saath koi panga nahi kiya ...

8. Sakshi - Everyone hot topic of discussion , When this character had entered we were flooded with the news that romantic track hoga etc etc . Few months down the line and only a 6 month extension I wonder romance kahan se aayega . First they need to get her character improved in the serial because the character has a lot of scope for growth .

All the characters had made Arjun the serial I liked but after one year I do feel a disconnect but being a hopeful loyalist I seriously hope that it all improves , its the only serial I watch and will continue to do that till it ends

Leaving apart the characters one year down the line and I can count Arni Flashback on my finger tips - They need to show more of the past . Sikander is still a mystery for all of us and it's just twice he has been mentioned properly . With only 3 months left I really don't want that the Sikander should just get over in 2 episodes or so .A Criminal who actually was strong enough for Rawte earlier how can he be so easy to catch .The access to level 5 well that's another open end ...

I don't know how many will agree but the quality of episodes have gone down atleast for me , we do get few brilliant ones in the middle but overall the quality has degraded , I mean its pretty easy to guess the killer now days and I don't mean the serial killer series because thanks to tellychakar you already know the villain

So wrapping up - Writers and actors left , Characters need to be improved , Sikander and Roshni need to present I just wonder is our Show Jinxed

P.S - I Miss Suraksha Chakra !!!

Feel free to comment and let your POV know but don't start bashing

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

😲 It's almost an OS😆😛

Will read and comment after work😉

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-
Hello All ,

I know my signature says currently passive and I haven't updated my Stories like over a month now..but now that I have some free time I will probably start writing again
Finally she's back, now waiting for the stories😳😃...

This Post is just about what I feel about the serial and its my opinion and you feel free to agree or disagree..I really needed to vent it out

The Show started with a bang , The first promo was enough to raise curiousity in my mind and so it began ...
Mine too, i was attracted since the very first episode, it was so brilliant, all characters so lovely and even story was nice, i remember Arjun's entry, where he slapped that jerk of minister(i think)...
The ETF team was introduced and all of us fell in love with the characters- Some with Rathore , others with Riya , Many with Shree & Chotu and How could someone not fall for our Arjun ..
i fell straight for Arjun, he had something special about him😳
It was the first time that I followed writers of the Show too Anshul & Deb too

100 + episodes and a year after

1. The character of Riya isn't there and is missed till now . Her interactions with Arjun , her masti with Shree and Chotu . I am glad that the writers gave her a heroic exit
Yep still remember when she died, that was one of the worst and most shattering episodes till now
2. Anshul and Deb left the show and it is a great loss as all characters were created and envisioned by them and with them gone all characters have gone for a toss
Yep since they were the original writers, maybe they knew what to do with each characters, and now that they are gone, the new writers mainly working more on cases than any background of each character
3. Sameer Rathore- The ETF chief who is actually missing on the show now , no clarity on where he is or if he will return but do I blame him? . I blame the writers who took the story forward for an ETF chief is every time proved wrong by the Second in command even when the former challenges the latter . I really don't like the way Rathore is always proved wrong .
I also feel that if they had made him really a worthy chief, not someone foolish, he would have stayed
I don't have anything against Arjun solving the cases for my Arjun Prem is too strong but not at the expense of any other character
Well Arjun can always remain the main character, but i dont see the need to make other characters stupid just to show how intelligent he is😕
4. Chotu well is hardly there and I thought in the serial killer episodes a commando should have been required the most
Lol, Chotu is even worst, at times he doesnt even do anythign but stand... For god's sake, he's not a furniture, make him also do some action and all
5. Liza has finally started to make her presence felt - is this because of lack of other actors not sure but If I remember correctly in the episode where Actress was killed why could she being a forensic doc identify the poison in nails .Her & Shree Story well hasn't even started and no Nok Jhoks is shown between them .
Like you i feel only because many characters are missing, that's only how Liza has been acting a lot lately... but the problem is when we really need her, she's absent... and remember once Shree was doing her work😕 and as for their love story, we dont even get one minute nok-jhoks between them , love story is very far fetched😛
6. Ayesha - My favorite lady on the show , was a undercover agent, fought with Arjun and then the graph went down . She is an ammunition expert so should not the CVs explore that angle too .Her Relationship with Rathore is now gone for a toss . They should now show that Ayesha can too carry out separate investigations and doesn't have to accompany Arjun everywhere
Yep she's an awesome, and very strong lady... One is bound to give her all the respect. i remember when she first entered, she was very proud and all, and i loved her attitude... and please use her, make her do something at least... she has her own brains, why not make her lead teams at times, though of course Arjun will always remain her senior
7. Shree- Chalo iska saath koi panga nahi kiya ...
Yep apart from Arjun, this is the only character which is well built...
8. Sakshi - Everyone hot topic of discussion , When this character had entered we were flooded with the news that romantic track hoga etc etc . Few months down the line and only a 6 month extension I wonder romance kahan se aayega . First they need to get her character improved in the serial because the character has a lot of scope for growth .
Now coming to our bubbly journalist, her entry was lovely, and even though she did joke too much, i still dont understand why the CVs had to make her lie😕😕 It destroyed her character even more😕
Though lately the CVs have made her slightly calmer now, i dont know why but i dont trust the CVs at all😆
All the characters had made Arjun the serial I liked but after one year I do feel a disconnect but being a hopeful loyalist I seriously hope that it all improves , its the only serial I watch and will continue to do that till it ends
Hmmm like you it's the only show i watch, so basically i'll remain with it till the end😳
Leaving apart the characters one year down the line and I can count Arni Flashback on my finger tips - They need to show more of the past . Sikander is still a mystery for all of us and it's just twice he has been mentioned properly . With only 3 months left I really don't want that the Sikander should just get over in 2 episodes or so .A Criminal who actually was strong enough for Rawte earlier how can he be so easy to catch .The access to level 5 well that's another open end ...
what i dont understand is that of course it's a crime show, but why cant they show slight bits of Arjun/ Roshni/Sik every two weeks... Even one minute on them every week will do, at least we'll know the hows, whys, when Roshni was killed and all... but nothing, they went quickly at one time with Level 5, but suddenly they stopped everything😡
I don't know how many will agree but the quality of episodes have gone down atleast for me , we do get few brilliant ones in the middle but overall the quality has degraded , I mean its pretty easy to guess the killer now days and I don't mean the serial killer series because thanks to tellychakar you already know the villain

So wrapping up - Writers and actors left , Characters need to be improved , Sikander and Roshni need to present I just wonder is our Show Jinxed

P.S - I Miss Suraksha Chakra !!!

Feel free to comment and let your POV know but don't start bashing

and finally i feel our show is jinxed, but then i'd probably say it's 4Lions who are jinxed😛

and something more, since ideally they copy paste a great majority of cases from other american shows, i fail to understand why even then they dont get the time to work on each character😡

I too miss those safety tips😭

i wish that by the time, the show comes to an end, it doesnt turn out to be something totally disappointing

Edited by Tina2603 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very well written post di👏
well i agree wid u in almost all points
sam bro d chief of etf is look like never existed in d show now
riya well her presence had a different charm
all charactes r unique itself wid all deir personal lives😛
ayesha well she is Lady dabbang love her too much
well potrayed
shriza going too gud smoothly in their characters wat i felt😊 (apart frm their ls )
hmm chotu is missing many episodes where needed
his presence definitely make a difference
sakshi well she had a past too which needed to be revealed😲
hmm sikander😡
ARNI well as shaleen bro himself reply to me dat no flashback dat tym
wen we will get lets see eagerly waiting
hmmm some Episodes r really very much awesome⭐️
still in s⭐️ome episodes we get confused wat i felt like in water episodes though msg is clear n well
😊
really dont know wat store for us as now time is taking a toll
watever it is we all watching from start
n show it till d end😉
no doubt missing suraksha chakra badly
well wene😉ver anyone leave d show in mid it effects d show at many extent😳
either its case of writers or actors
my pov pls dont start bash pls😉
Arjun Rocks
ps. longest post of mine ever😲😲😲😲😃

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

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Posted: 12 years ago

You right this is same thought I have as well. If they got extent ion only six month so,why they not start working on past stories which the writer left in between( I don't know the writer very well because always comes in Hindi and I don't know Hindi. programme comes with subtitle but producer, writer, production house name comes in Hindi and I understand Hindi to listen but written difficult ) like sakshi past, arjun have to catch sikander and most important the episode the shooter aim him where it gone? Who was that and if he aim arjun why not shoot? If they start progress in that way build interest again. In these day we feel liking graph come down , no arakshi scene, etf team have only ladies left, with arjun Ayesha is more active rather than other, we miss , sameer's dammit rawte, arjun kuch to choot raha hay rathod, samjhae ya samjhoan etc and most important arakshi nokjhoke and glares to each other eye locks everything is just finish, so many other things as well these are the Jaan of the arjun programme but now days Jaan nazar nahi aati, hum phir bhi her week besabri say intezaar kartay hain, let's hope something better comes in upcoming episode 😃

Edited by Rehana25 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

Its sad but all your points are true...

The show grabbed my attention right with its first promo and I am glued to it since then...I havent missed one episode so far but have to confess that the past few episodes have been disappointing...

Previously I never used to get up from my place till the episode ends but I think it was the auto driver episode that i myself couldnt believe that i switched channels and also went to do some work in between!

I mean it looked like they had nothing to show rather than the psycho's repeated killing...all that mad things of making her his bride and pouring water and then killing the girl!

That day, i felt that seriously they have a serious problem in filling up the episode with proper scenes!

But i dont know why they are leaving out essential tracks that they could easily incorporate...the Sikandar track is yet to be explored...Arjun had stolen the hard disk and was seriously trying to get level 5 information...but now, thats entirely forgotten!

Arjun-Sakshi track is another total goof up! Sakshi was introduced as a famous crime reporter and now that is entirely forgotten...there was so much to explore in that track...nothing happened except for a unnecessary lie and we still wonder what was the secret behind all that acting!

Rathod's sudden disappearance and Raesha's beautiful track stopping is another major fallout...

Shree-Liza's track also had so much potential and could have been the fun factor which never happened!

Anyways, just keeping my fingers crossed and wishing that something positive and good would happen making my most favorite serial interesting again!

The show has set a high standard and a unique bench mark for itself...hope it goes back to that position and remains there till the very end!

Arjun is very special and dear to me...lots of good things and never want the show to go down the rough patch...hope everything turns up good!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tina2603
😲 It's almost an OS😆😛
Will read and comment after work😉

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 12 years ago

thank u for the permission siya...😃 here is my some thoughts in reply. though what u said all is full correct. after many days when i saw sunday epi was thoroughly disappointed. something was missing...was it rathore or chotu? was it the case? was it disgusting portrayal of the killer? i dont know, but show is ruined.

finally someone making this...

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-
Hello All ,

I know my signature says currently passive and I haven't updated my Stories like over a month now..but now that I have some free time I will probably start writing again

This Post is just about what I feel about the serial and its my opinion and you feel free to agree or disagree..I really needed to vent it out

The Show started with a bang , The first promo was enough to raise curiousity in my mind and so it began ...

The ETF team was introduced and all of us fell in love with the characters- Some with Rathore , others with Riya , Many with Shree & Chotu and How could someone not fall for our Arjun ..

It was the first time that I followed writers of the Show too Anshul & Deb too

100 + episodes and a year after

1. The character of Riya isn't there and is missed till now . Her interactions with Arjun , her masti with Shree and Chotu . I am glad that the writers gave her a heroic exit

i miss the trio scenes. i thought after liza aisha enter there will be chotu shree liza aisha scenes, but disappointed. liza was not visible in epis properly.

2. Anshul and Deb left the show and it is a great loss as all characters were created and envisioned by them and with them gone all characters have gone for a toss

maybe after their exit show went downhill. my thought...

3. Sameer Rathore- The ETF chief who is actually missing on the show now , no clarity on where he is or if he will return but do I blame him? . I blame the writers who took the story forward for an ETF chief is every time proved wrong by the Second in command even when the former challenges the latter . I really don't like the way Rathore is always proved wrong .

first we had problem sameer was not given enough screen space. arjun was doing all the work and rathore was quiet. then maybe CVs listened to us and sameer was more talking...but he was always proved wrong. i hated it...he is chief, his only work to speak against arjun? though there are some scenes where rathore supported arjun, but very less. somewhere i believe BK left show becoz of this...again my thought.

I don't have anything against Arjun solving the cases for my Arjun Prem is too strong but not at the expense of any other character

4. Chotu well is hardly there and I thought in the serial killer episodes a commando should have been required the most

the biggest problem of this show is 1 yr had passed and no back ground story of the characters. in the initial epis there was hint of chotu's 11.30 wali...where is she? what is shree's story? i remember after riya's death there was a case the person lost his memory and was in a assylum. shree was sympathetic toward them which is unusual. what is his story, any sad story? what is chotu's story? what is liza aisha rathore arjun roshni sakshi's story? why sakshi's father is in hospital? why all that happened to roshni? was sameer is love with roshni? how arjun sameer becm friends?
every charcter keep gayabing...aisha sam shree chotu sakshi liza...all of them and always.

5. Liza has finally started to make her presence felt - is this because of lack of other actors not sure but If I remember correctly in the episode where Actress was killed why could she being a forensic doc identify the poison in nails .Her & Shree Story well hasn't even started and no Nok Jhoks is shown between them .

except the first epi, no shree liza scene. i thought now there will be shree liza chotu scene, but nope.

6. Ayesha - My favorite lady on the show , was a undercover agent, fought with Arjun and then the graph went down . She is an ammunition expert so should not the CVs explore that angle too .Her Relationship with Rathore is now gone for a toss . They should now show that Ayesha can too carry out separate investigations and doesn't have to accompany Arjun everywhere

after her entry, maybe some scenes/ cases where she did something of her own...first that case where she went to the woman's house to warn her, and another when she again becm nadiya to dig some info from drug dealer...anything else? we only know she had problem with her father, but why? she didnt go to meet her father operation?

7. Shree- Chalo iska saath koi panga nahi kiya ...

8. Sakshi - Everyone hot topic of discussion , When this character had entered we were flooded with the news that romantic track hoga etc etc . Few months down the line and only a 6 month extension I wonder romance kahan se aayega . First they need to get her character improved in the serial because the character has a lot of scope for growth .

sakshi...from where to start? why she is in ETF? what she exactly does? why she is so ignorant of her own safety during roaming between encounter? she is journo so why she is scared of dead bodies? may loop holes, and all of them is correct. dont tell me i am bashing becz i am not.

sakshi had many back story...she is so famous crime journo, but why she left job? why her father is in coma (correct me if i am wrong) , why she entered ETF? arjun sakshi love story will start with sikandar story, but the thing is will the story start and develop over night?

All the characters had made Arjun the serial I liked but after one year I do feel a disconnect but being a hopeful loyalist I seriously hope that it all improves , its the only serial I watch and will continue to do that till it ends

i cant see the show get ruined with every epis.

Leaving apart the characters one year down the line and I can count Arni Flashback on my finger tips - They need to show more of the past . Sikander is still a mystery for all of us and it's just twice he has been mentioned properly . With only 3 months left I really don't want that the Sikander should just get over in 2 episodes or so .A Criminal who actually was strong enough for Rawte earlier how can he be so easy to catch .The access to level 5 well that's another open end ...

arni...yes. we see first meeting, some words of roshni bas, the end. how they got married? how they fall in love? what happned that fateful day when she got killed?

and about sik...i was expecting the case of sik will run along other cases. but disappointed as usual..long list...

I don't know how many will agree but the quality of episodes have gone down atleast for me , we do get few brilliant ones in the middle but overall the quality has degraded , I mean its pretty easy to guess the killer now days and I don't mean the serial killer series because thanks to tellychakar you already know the villain

the over all show is ruined. the cases? the members? dont know...but something is missing.

So wrapping up - Writers and actors left , Characters need to be improved , Sikander and Roshni need to present I just wonder is our Show Jinxed

P.S - I Miss Suraksha Chakra !!!

same here...so helpful thing and ended eventually.

Feel free to comment and let your POV know but don't start bashing

i really dont think i bashed someone...if someone think this i care a damn.

ps nice post

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 12 years ago

I totally agree wid you

sadly show is loosing its charm.

about roshni & sikander, em not worried about them. they are side stories

but chotu n Rathod is more important😊

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
thank u for the permission siya...😃 here is my some thoughts in reply. though what u said all is full correct. after many days when i saw sunday epi was thoroughly disappointed. something was missing...was it rathore or chotu? was it the case? was it disgusting portrayal of the killer? i dont know, but show is ruined.

finally someone making this...

i really dont think i bashed someone...if someone think this i care a damn.

ps nice post

and ya bang on your post siya😃

Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago