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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Such a beautiful story tinu😃

short but very emotional and very well written... 👏 👏 👏

looved it😛😛

thank you for the pm and this amazing story 🤗 🤗

Edited by PoohLover - 12 years ago

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

hey tina🤗... u know i too loved this song😃😃😃... u know tumhre AV's hai na 😉 unhe ek min tak dekhati hu😆... and os was so awesome...!!! n the last para was👏👏👏...too good!!!... hope aisa ek scene serial mein bhi mill jaye toh bahut hai 😃

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awesome os di
lov it
beautiful song
vm n banner tahi di rocks
already watch it
tina di
very well written
title super

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

short and sweet one dear...

no words...

well written...

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

And where is my wala series ...pooor time i was waiting for it

But it was beautiful !!

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

haww...i loved it tina...i m sure dat th dampness on my cheeks too were tears..

lovely OS...

keep writing dear...

love
Aisha

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Lovely & Emotional OS...😊😊😊

Thanks for PM...😊😊😊

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priyanka

@priyu03

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Amazing OS
like Sakshi's POV...
Last part was nice
loved it

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

sad one indeed...but it was good...

It was all cute as it started, sakshi dreaming and thinking about his sexy voice...

The way Arjun and sakshi looked at each other, all helpless...

specially those lines at the end...

very apt...

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Awe...that was beautifully written Tina. I loved it, and the VM was just perfect for this OS, or vice versa...

As always it was a treat to read one of your Arakshi works.