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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hello...
Amazing OS...
Really liked how you wrote Sakshi's POV...
Last part was the best ...!!
when arjun was looking at her...dt was emotional...really liked it...
also liked the lines u gave at d end...
really loved it ..!!
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Sakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ohh I loved it! Aaj itbe achhe achhe stories read karne ko mil rahe hain! I should hurt my back more often!

It's sad yet it is still giving me hope for some chances of Arjun allowing her in, helping to heal him. Just him letting go of that mask for one second was enough for her to understand what he was feeling..

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awww such a poignant lovely OS...

loved it TT!

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laila

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Posted: 12 years ago

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short, simple but cute

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sarita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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beautiful vm
i love this song

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through

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Posted: 12 years ago

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It was such a beautiful os di.
Sakshi's pain was so well written. Hope someday arjun will reciprocate the her feelings. :-)
Thanks for the pm.

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Santhosh Banda

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Well Written... Superb.. 👏

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Livania Govender

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Posted: 12 years ago

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written brilliantly. Loved the song. Dil ka rishta is one of my fav movies

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Shezi19

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Posted: 12 years ago

Good effort but please don't be ended sad we like happy ending

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