The Wait (Ariya FF) Part-68 Updated (Page-164) - Page 67

Originally posted by: Somkhu

Amazing update

Thank you

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Hehe nice ariya moments. Chalo khadoos sota nhi hai that too 2 hours 🤣😍 yep peace is a person like home is a person as well

Rathore don't let Arjun bully riya into running or whatever. She's your student, if khadoos wants to hijack her he needs to speak up 😉 I think Arjun didn't like other guys speaking to Riya. I mean she's a nice person with social life unlike you know who...

Arjun is here to keep an eye on Rathore who's threatening him. Dekhte hai who finds that person first

Rathore will eat Arjun alive if he will bully Riya 😭😂 yep Riya has a social life unlike someone 😂

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose

Hi there,

Recently started your story and literally finished all the parts in one go..so you can imagine how hooked one has to be.....to be THAT engrossed! That magic your story has, it's just too too good, like how you weave the plot, grammatical wise, sentence wise everything is at par..and there are very very few writers who gets me this into their fiction.

I got to know that this story is being in progress since a few years, really hope you are planning to now continue posting the fiction and finish it also.

How many parts are remaining if I may ask?

Other than that! Very good job buddy just keep posting like this!

Cheers!

Hii thank you so much for the compliment..it means a lot ❣️

Yup I started the story a long back ago but left it hanging so I'm on my way to finish it this time...

And about the finishing I haven't planned it yet but I think I will take it until their confession...

Thank you again and keep reading 😙

Originally posted by: muskan760

Hii thank you so much for the compliment..it means a lot ❣️

Yup I started the story a long back ago but left it hanging so I'm on my way to finish it this time...

And about the finishing I haven't planned it yet but I think I will take it until their confession...

Thank you again and keep reading 😙

Here I am being a little greedy and hoping..can you stretch it a bit and show some parts of post-marriage also..will be lovely to read those too!!

Waise, 2 log phans gaye:

Ek neki karte (Arjun) aur doosra kaand karke (Dayal).

Bahut shauque hn na chief ko test karne ka? Asaan nahin hota, banana padta hn? Really? Asaan talwaar chalana hain, mushkil toh use qaabu me rakhne me hn.

On second thoughts, achcha hi hn. Sab ko ek monitor chahiye hota hn jo ego, attitude aur skill ko complacency se bachaye.

Khair atleast sachchai saamne aayi aur woh bachchiyaan bach gayi.

Originally posted by: IfritAmbrose

Here I am being a little greedy and hoping..can you stretch it a bit and show some parts of post-marriage also..will be lovely to read those too!!

haha i would love to write Arjun's romantic phase in marriage .. let's see if i can take it that far

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Waise, 2 log phans gaye:

Ek neki karte (Arjun) aur doosra kaand karke (Dayal).

vo dubara neki nahi karega khas karke Rathore ke samne

achha i will try but you have to be patience with Arjun