ARIYA-FF:The Unrequited Love. Chapter20/pg 41 PM sent [COMPLETED] - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Aks13

Sorry for late comments dr.

Both the updates r super duper fantastic...!!!

Loved Nani n Aditi's segment. Its sweet n emotional.!!

Wow thy all share strained relations with their mom...!!!!

Akshay n Madhu's moments were lovely..!!!!

FB was beautiful...!!! Wow Arjun also loved her...!! He was concerned for her n that's why he came early..!!!

Loved bro-sis meet. That's really sweet..!!!!

Awww Dhruv n Aditi's part was beautifully written...!!!!! So, mr. Dhruv fell in love with her at first sight..!!!! Loved the way Ariya helped thm for their private meet...!!!

Waaooo Arjun had built a gazebo for Riya...!!! If he loved her so much thn why doesn't he understand her n trust her????? Why he doesn't get this simple point that she can't be the reason of his mesiries????

Wow Riya is Arjun's fiancee... OMG he bahaved rudely with her coz he thought that she's the reason behind his father's death...!!!! Is he insane????? How can he even thought like that????

Wht the!!!!! Arjun accused her for his father's death...!!! Feel bad for her.!!

I hope Arjun realised his mistake before it's too late.

Its going great..!!!! Hats off to u dr...!!!

Loved it to the bits...!!!!

Haha, the funny part of my updates, is that somehow they end up with lots of answered questions.😆 Don't be sorry, at least you made a point to comment. I know this time i am very late to update, Karoo to kya karoo (Raj style) I am juggling both work and studies, that I get only the weekend time to update. I Will update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Wow
Its awesome amez update
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
that was an emotional good bye for Riya... she is really hurt...
FB was sweet... but what happened that changed their life upside down...
Arjun knows Riya is innocent but blaming and distancing himself from her to protect her...
so Someone else was also there when Ariya's dad's died..hmmm
Arjun trying to find that out...
SO Arjun hv not removed his engagement ring but kept it with him tied in that chain... Aditi she saw it!!!
Loved Riya Aditi bonding...
well loved the way Nani confronted Arjun...
Aww he s having nightmares abt Riya being in danger and he called her... Gosh i feel bad for them...
update soon
Edited by Leki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Again an incredible update dr..!!!

The FB was so beautiful...!!! Awww thy were so happy n so much in love...!!!

Wow she shared such a strong bond with everyone that made it more difficult for her to say good bye to thm...!!! That segment was so senti yar n beautifully written...!!!

Arjun bcme a mere spectator n let her go frm his life...!!!! He was in pain too just like her thn why didn't he stop her????

His gestures n that ring around his neck proved that he still love her n believed her thn wht was the reason behind his indifference towards her????

Wow Aditi also noticed Arjun's broken self n that ring... I hope she will do something for these two who r hell bent on destroying their lives...!!!

Nani n Arjun's convo was so emotional..!!!

Wht was written in that pic?????? Whom was he protecting her frm????

OMG there was somebody else beside those three on the cliff n he/she also hurted Riya at that time...!!!

Why Arjun didn't share this with anybody?????

Awww Arjun had a horrible nightmare n bcme worried sick for Riya...!!!

BG song was lovely... I love that song...!!!

It's getting way too interesting as well as exciting update by update...!!!

Curious to read further...!!!

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
nice part...
arjun still loves riya... pretending of hating her to save her...

riya too was attacked on that night...

arjun still wears that ring... hiding from everyone...so sweet...

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dear... so arjun doing it on a purpose... but from whom he is trying to save riya n what is the reason behind dis...
cant wait to read more... continue soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Hi everyone.
No I'm not up with any updates yet. I will update tomorrow.
This is just to thank you all for taking your time and reading my story and then commenting on it.
A special thanks to those readers who are still thick to this story and wait for me to update.
Thank you so much all. It means a lot to me. I always get jitters before I give any updates.

Aks13, Khemanisarita, Leki, devildiva21, Unishaz, Christeee, Aabish02, Anushass,Nakshatra92, Megha, Jorja, Santhu the king, Madmadona, Benaz, Jdots, Pinkerbell,
And of course you Sakshi and a new reader Zubiya92

And those silent reader who hit the like button. Thank you so much. Please do comment as well.😉

Off Topic :My first edit on Arjun. How's it?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haww i thought u updated!!!!🥺
Cool Edit yar 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yar...!!
so riya finally left the house.. feeling bad for her...!!!
loved her scenes with nani.. that was very heart touching...!!!
and her and aditi's bonding.. its lovely...!! love how they more are like sisters...!!
and arjun... he loves her.. he still loves her but then why is he doing all this? aww he still has the engagement ring as a chain...!!!
so aditi saw him crying... hope both gets together...!!
woah.. someone also was present on that cliff at that time???😲 arjun is doing all this to protect her???
loved his concern for her...!!! and how he called her after that nightmare just to ensure that she is okay...!!
continue soon...!!

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