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abhya/akanksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb start dr.

Why was Riya crying n why was she so depressed?????

Awww Arjun was so concerned for her.

Arav is so cute.

OMG she was allergic to almods.

Phew Arjun saved her at the right time.

Looking frwrd to it!!!!

Continue soon.

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sarita

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow
amazing start
love it

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb start...

Concept is really interesting...

Riya depressed for some reason and Arjun worried for her...

Loved Nani's nd Arav's relation with Riya...

Ariya's relation is mysterious...

Update soon... PM Me...

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

superb start yar...
very hatke concept...
hmm so arjun is tensed for riya ... but she s a guest???
why is she sad??? why was she crying...
love the afection showed by nani and arav on riya...
thank god arjun came on time and injected her to save her...
beautifully written and described...
continue soon...

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856040

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow

awesome start

arjun so concerned for riya

update soon

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Aabish_02

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part
cont soon
plz pm me when u update

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Jonashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13
Superb start dr.
Why was Riya crying n why was she so depressed?????
Awww Arjun was so concerned for her.
Arav is so cute.
OMG she was allergic to almods.
Phew Arjun saved her at the right time.
Looking frwrd to it!!!!
Continue soon.

Thank you so much for taking your time and reading this fiction.

Yes, this part of the story will come but till then you have to wait. sorry!

She is allergic to nuts therefore she ignored the cookies,but didn't escape the Almond milk. May be in the haste of finishing the milk with Arav,she didn't realise what sort of milk she was drinking.

About Arjun, he is a kind of guy whose actions are louder then words.

Arav is an air of happiness in the family.

I have put up a collage of the Raichand family member's and some yet to be.

I will update soon.

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Jonashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: devildiva21
superb start yar...
very hatke concept...
hmm so arjun is tensed for riya ... but she s a guest???
why is she sad??? why was she crying...
love the afection showed by nani and arav on riya...
thank god arjun came on time and injected her to save her...
beautifully written and described...
continue soon...

Thank you for the lovely comments.

You'll know this sooner, why Arjun has referred her as a guest.

Thanks again, I'll update soon.