ARiya SS:inteezar ke inteha last part pg 22, 23 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i m posting a character sketch now..

so that u can clearly identify the characters..

Acp arjun rawte:



super hot cop.. his anger has been melting a bit and he had started to listen to his heart now.. thanks to his angel..


Acp samerr rathod:



same as show..shows indifference to arjun bt cares for him alot.. he wants him to move ahead and live a life he deserves..


Suryakant rawte:



arjun's dad.. the one we know.. hates arjun for taking the decision of becoming a cop..bt now there will be a major change in him..



Savita rawte:



arjun's mom..the sweetest person...actually all mom's are..



Abhinav suryakant rawte:



arjun's younger brother..loves arjun too much.. wants to be like him.???

will he succeed???

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

It was Sunday bt etf had a case..




so all were working..





He met his team.. bt some1 was missing.




He wanted to greeted by her chirpy voice and




beautiful smile..




so he decided to meet rathore and ask about




her..




he went to rathore's cabin submitted the file of the



mission..




Rathore: good job arjun..




Arjun: rathore wooh kahan hai?




Rathore:woooh wooh kaun???




kiski baat kar raha hai..





Arjun: tu janta hai mein kiski baat kar raha




hoon..kahan hai wooh...??



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rathore: wooh actuall..wwoooh actually





Arjun: rathore wooh actually




kya thik se bolo wooh kahan hai..?




Rathore: tum kyon pocch rahe hoon rawte?





Arjun: kyon nahi pocch sakta?





Rathore: nahi tumhe toh wooh kabhi pasand nahi




thi na toh aaj kyon pooch rahe hoo???





wooh jahan bhi ho tumhe kya??






Arjun: mujhe kya??




Mujhe ussee milna hai




tum batao ke wooh kahan hai..?





Rathore: yeh address hai ja kar dekhlo..




Arjun looked at the address and shocked




Arjun: wooh yahan kaise??





Rathore: jake ppoochlo...





Arjun: mein 2mahine kya bahar gaya yahan toh




sab badal gaya,,



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Arjun never wanted to go to this place..



bt still he gathered all his courage and went..





All his old memories flashing in front of his eyes...




he felt lke he is living back his old years...





He felt like he was watching a film..




frame by frame



scene by scene




all the moments of his life was flowing in front of




his eyes..





He still remembered every inch of this house..




the laughs, the gigles, the sadness, the roars..





he finally reached the main door..




bt what he saw in the house was a dream..





a dream he always saw,



a dream he wished to be in real forevr...





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he saw his father, mother and his younger brother



all were happy, laughing and giggling..





He remembered his moments with his bro..



they were playing cricket..



Flashback...





Arjun: abhi thik se bat padko..




Abhi: ha dada .. chaliye ab na mein 6 marunga..




And abhi hitted a 6 as he said..




Abhi: dada mein 6 mara..




Arjun:yes abhi u did it,.





Abhi: dada ice cream..




chalo fridge mein se nikal te hai..





Present:



Arjun : aai hamesha pakad leti thi hume ice cream


nikalte..



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Bt again a surpise was waiting for him..




something happened he never in his best of




dreams thought..He heard a voice...





"Aai baba chaliye khana taiyaar hai..



abhinav bhaiya aap bhi chaliye..




baba khane se pehle ki davai le li na apne..???




Aur aai aaj na hum garden mein walk karne bhi




jayenge,, doc ne kahan hai na apko.."




Abhinav: par aajj aap mere saath anewale thi na




movie ke liye..





Ha thik hai raat ko chalenge..




chaliye table par ayeye..





Arjun was shocked to see her in his house..





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Arjun was shocked to see her in his house..





Arjun: riya ..yahan mere ghar mein??





He took out a surprising sigh..





She was happily serving his family and all having a





gala time..




it seemed like she is a part of his family from




years.. knowing each and every small thing about





his family..arjun entered and abhinav saw





arjun.came running to him..hugged him...





Abhinav: dada...aap aa gaye finally...





Arjun: abhi kaisa hai tu?





Abhinav: bohot achcha dada aap kab aye mission




se?




Arjun: bas abhi aya hoon..





His mom came and hugged him ..




it was a mother-son reunion aftr years..




they both were sentimental and emotionall ...





Arjun: aai ...kaise ho aap???




(he had tears in his eyes)





Aai: kab se teri rah dekh rahi hoon..




ki tu ab ayega tab ayega..





chal khana khale hum sabke saath..




pata nahi itne dino kya khaya hoga..




Arjun backed out seeing his father..




and turned his face to go out..





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Arjun: mein chalta hoon apna khayal rakhna..




And he turned to go




Suryakant rawte: arjun rukega nahi?





He was dumb stuck ..




he never thought that his father would ever call




him by his name..




he always used to call hm acp rawte..





He turned to face his father..




his father came and hugged him..





Suryakant: I m sorry beta..




aaj tak ki har baat ke liye I m sorry..




Arjun: nahi baba..




aap naraz the ki meine apke baat nahi mani..




apka sapna adhura reh gaya..





Suryakant: nahi arjun I m proud u





I m a proud father of acp arjun rawte,..





Abhi: dada meine ips clear kar liya hai..




ab mein bhi apki tarah ek officer banuga..





Arjun: par tujhe baba ke saath business mein..





Suryakant: business ki tension





meine, riya aur teri aai ne



baant li hai..




Precap:




Arjun -riya convo..




why is riya here.????

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wooo riya in arjun's house but why????
i m totaly confused update soon...
Finaly arjun feet his family lVly part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part...
arjun enquiring about riya??

riya in arjun's house...

waiting for the next part...

update soon

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