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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Awesome update...😊😊😊

Suspense...Suspense...Suspense...Suspense...Suspense...Suspense...Suspense...Suspense...

😕😕😕 😕😕😕

Kitna suspense hai...

Precaps seems scary as well as interesting...

Plz plz plz Continue soon...Thanks for PM...😊😊😊

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Arjun is shot????😲😭

Vampu, Vampu mera sar chakra raha hai! What a mind boggling case!👏

Heart beats were fast.Iski topi uske sar uski topi iske sar😆

So Arjun is a spy and he used Riy to break into FBI? But I am certain he has a very valid reason.

Aish-Sam fit into all this how?🤔 Who is behind Sam? Has Arjun come to investigate someone who turns out to be Sam?

Mujhe yeh Towliya bhi kuch gadbad lagti hai.😕 But loved how Arjun got on her case🤣 Chubby!👍🏼😆

Yeh Dr Lisa apni waali Lisa hai?😃

Please reveal soon😃

Very fast paced thriller👏

Update soon!

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

amazing update
with lots of thrill n suspense
arjun is a spy
and used riya for his work
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Ankita 😡
wat is dishuh
i m now smacking my head now..
arjun bro spy
riya work under him wokay
sasha upto !?
who framing dem !???
suspense n thrilling
huh
my like button not working
font na btane ka badla 😭
update soon
u know nah i love patriotic stories
well thanks for d pm too

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

res

kal unres karoongi

unres

first of all a big hug to you

and thanx

for giving us such a wonderful story.

it was awesome and thrilling.

so arjun is a spy.

love ariya segment.

is arjun reaaly loves riya?

and who is the boss of riya.

and what was sam hidinh?

i am little confused.

but continue soon.

and thanx for pm.

P.S.-

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

AwwooChuumm Update Vampy! Luvd it...Lovd d thrill as well as ArIya momentz! The Concept is really vry diffrent!! Thanxx 4 pm! Continuee Soon! :)

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HawasKePujari

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

oh!! Wo0oow 🥳
you are my BB fan!! BB see another fan of urs 😛
of dear! I am loving to hear this from you! Thanks you dear!
Haha, for knowing what happened you have to wait😆
sure i will try to update soon!!
Thanks dear 😃

@bold what the???😲

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HawasKePujari

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

i read it last night but commenting now...sorry for late reply

from where to start? from first update...VQ kitne long update krti hain ! i should not complain bt phone ki band bj gayi yr, tera ye ss and amri ka deception prte huye...oops uska res bhi baki hain 🤣

ok ok back to ur update...ariya in live in, and riya loves him like crazy. cute...and then in cafe arjun trying to say smthing. riya techie in FBI? wow cool yr...and then arjun saw nadiya in big trend mall, with her kid !!! W*F...and same his BFF from past? hmm...

ok when i was reading first part i was thinking this...u described big trnd mall, new york cafe and the streets like u were there. kya USA visit kiyta kya madam?

then arjun nadiya...or should i say aisha meeting. and they shared a past, which is yet in darkness like many things in SS. riya thinking arjun will ditch her, and that exactly happened. she is broken.

in 2nd update...there is more to what meet in eyes...arjun is spy who using riya? damn...and looks like sam is link in all this mess, and i think that boss is using sam for framing arjun/ FBI maybe...i dont know if i am right as there is absolutely no way to see through this suspense...its really frustrating for me as i am record impatient person, but i am excited to see. and now arjun aisha both involved int his mess, and riya came to know arjun is spy! arjun is shot...now the question is who is boss, who working for him? is arjun actually against country? what will happen next?

and about sad ending...chill let the story find its way. sad or not, we will love it.

and update soon. love u muaah

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

ahaan maine murti ko speechless kardiya 😆 haan..!!!!😕 vampu en devil ko speechless kar diya😆😉
abe page mai sirf 8 comments post kar sakte hain! Toh kaise karti ! 😭 next page pe continue karti
hahahahaha hass mat.. sabko shocks se maar rakha hai..!!!😡
sabka yai haal hai! Shocks toh banta hai mere update main 😉
tum bhi kamal ki ho! Har waqt lobb🤢 wo kya hai ne me love to lobb..!!!🤪🤣
itne sare question!
Jawab ke liye kripaya intezaar karein 😛 kitna intezar kare
karo karo wait karo! wait hi kar rhe hai..!!😈
Thanks murti ! Enaa long comments☺️ omg i made vampu blush?😲