ARAKSHI SS : HAUNTED PAST...PT 14A updtd(pg 42) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Woohoo ... Thanks dear for the update ... It's awesome again ... You nailed it ... Arjun's guilt and his care for Sakhshi ... Aww he is so sweet ... And wow he is going to celebrate her birthday ... That's pretty cool idea ... I really hope ke Sakhshi forgive him ... But ya as Arjun said ke usko right hai gussa karne ka and he is prepared for her anger ... Chalo ab agla update jaldi se karna plzzz... Thanks once again :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
I will be updating both my stories tomorrow guys. I might even give you all one more arakshi . Anyways thanks to all for your amazing support. I am very busy with studies now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: magati


I will be updating both my stories tomorrow guys. I might even give you all one more arakshi. Anyways thanks to all for your amazing support. I am very busy with studies now.

Thanks dear ... Wow one more Arakshi story ... All the best for ur studies :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys I am updating now

PART 4


She was sleeping peacefully holding his hands

Suddenly , her hold tightened , he felt her getting tensed , he started patting her head " shhh , its ok saakshi , you are safe " he kept saying
She turned and slept again

He also was falling asleep but he was thirsty so he decieded to drink water and got up and started moving towards her kitchen
He was drinking water when he heard her scream

He ran towards her bedroom and the view shocked him
She was shaking with fear in her sleep and was continuously saying " mamma,...mamma"
He went towards her and caught her hand she got up and hugged him tightly and said " save me please , save me , don't leave me alone , its scary , mujhe bohut dar lagta hai "

Shhh...its ok, its ok saakshi , relax , I am here only , don't worry I won't leave you alone ever, just relax and go to sleep "
"Common sweety , you need to rest , just relax and let me worry " he spoke even more softly
Hmmm" she said and started sleeping in his arms itself
He allowed her to sleep in his arms for 20 mins . He saw that she had slept
He slowly kept her down and again sat in his place

Main tho sirf roshni ke jaane ke baad bechain sa hoga hoon par yeh bichari ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki apne mom aur dad ko khone ke baad yeh kabhi chain se nai soi , tum itna muskhura kaise sakti ho saakshi , I am sure your parents will e proud of you " he thought
Aaj mere wajai se shayad tum apne parents ko disappoint kar deti, mein tumse promise karta hoon saakshi main tumhe fir kabhi haar maane nahi doonga " he sweared and slept for sometime

She got up smelling cofee and remembered all that happened yesterday and got angry again




So how was it guys
I am sure it was a bit disappointing guys but I promise next part will be better than this

PRECAP : saakshi fights with arjun and he makes her realise that she is doing wrong by not celebrating her birthday
Edited by magati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was very nice,the way Arjun was taking care of sakshi and trying to calm her...absolutely fantastic,continue soon whenever you are free with studies though🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Loved the update, esp. worried arjun! cant wait for the update, ArAkshi fight :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Nice start arjun did wrong with her sakshi is very shattered good idea please update soon. Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Thanks for the update ... Aww Arjun is so sweet and caring ... But I m waiting for the next part coz wanna c Arakhshi fight and the celebrations of her birthday :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 5


SHE WOKE UP SMELLING COFEE
she remembered her fight with arjun when she left ETF
kya chahte ho tum ? yahi na ki main kal aaun ? jaroor aaungi " she remembered her words and took out her mobile to see the time
he deva , 10 baje , mein tho kabhi 10 tak nai soti hoon , mamma ki yaad aakar 5 tak har roz ut jaati hoon " she said
she never slept good sleep at all , her sleep were always disturbed
she was just thinking all these when arjun brought her cofee
good morning saakshi " arjun said sweetly and gave her a smile
she was shocked that arjun smiled at her
tu sachi mein pagal hai saakshi , iss akadu ne tujhe kal kya kya nai sunaya , hamesha mamma aur papa ko kuch bhi kehta rehta hai aur fir bhi tu iska sapna dekh rahi hai " she chided herself
koi sapna nai dekh rahi ho tum mein sach much yahaan tumhare ghar mein hoon aur maine tumhare liye coffee banaya hai . lo peelo " he offered her the coffee he made for her she was shocked that he was first in her house , he smiled at her , he also made coffee for her and most of all she was not day dreaming , she took the cup from him , she was still confused and then she remembered the car and he was in it , his shouting and then her fainting
tho woh ETF ki gaadi thi " she asked
he closed his eyes and was preparing himself for her anger
to tum mujhe ghar laaye , kya mein jaan sakti hoon tum mujhe chodkar wapas kyun nai gaye ? " she ashed
ofcourse , meri story tumhe pata chal gaya na tho sympathy dikhane reh gaye honge ya fir issliye ki jab mein utu tho tum mujhe neecha dikha sako ki kaise tumhare waje se mein zinda hoon right ? she continued
chalo aaj for a change mein tumhari dialogue bol deti hoon , agar tumhaara drama katam ho gaya ho to tum jaa sakte ho " she said
main tumhe ETF mein milti hoon , waise tho tum sab kuch sochte ho na tho tumhe meri izzat ka khayal nai aaya , yeh ek bhade ka ghar hai mera khudka nai ,log kya sochenge mere baare mein ki main raat bhar ek aadmi ke saat thi , oh yes , mein yeh kaise bhul sakti hoon ki tum mere baare mein kaisa khayal rakhte ho , mere parents ne tho mujhe aise hi paida kar diya hai right ? she asked him
he knew it that he had to face all these bt he never thought about her like that , he was worried about her , the condition she was in when he found her , he was scared that she might try to take her life again , thats why he didnt leave her , he hadnt thought of anyone else but her last night
but he knew that she was in no mood to listen to him so he stayed quite and let her continue
intn sab kuch jaane ke baad bhi tumhare mooh se sorry nai aaya " she said angrily
he opened his mouth to say but she cut him off saying ab sorry bolne ki koi jaroorat nai hai "
main sorry bol bhi nai raha tha " he said and she was shocked
ofcourse , tum sorry kyn bologe mere jaise disgusting person se , mere jaise ladkiyon ke saat jo kuch bhi hota hai hum wahi deserve karte hai right " she said very angrily
just then bell rang and he went to open the door and brought in a parcel
yeh kya hai " she asked
yeh tumhare birthday dress hai " saying so he opened her dress to show her he didnt look at her once also , he knew she was boiling with anger
wow , achi dress hai na tum par achi lagegi , tumhare paas iss colour mein koi dress nai hai isliye maine yehi dress suggest kiya" he continued
oh god , mein tho bulhi gaya , maine matching bangles nai laaya , but i think tumhare paas kuch tho hoga " sayins he went to her dressing table and looked for bangles and liked one kada and said hmmm yeh iss dress ke saat suit ho jayegi , tum yehi pehena ok " he said looking at her now
she got down from bed took the dress from him and threw it on the floor
tumhar paas matching ear rings hai kya " he asked
shut up " she screamed
tum khudko kya samajhte ho , mujhe laga ki tum doosron ke dard ko mehsoos kar sakte ho par mein galat thi tum selfish ho tumhare liye tumhare dard ke aalava aur kuch bhi dard nai lagta, tum jaante ho apne ma ko apne aankoh ke saamne kho ne ka dard kaise hota hai , jab tum 18 saal se apne papa ko pukaar rahe ho aur woh tumhe sun bhi nai sakte tho kaisa lagta hai , mujhe apne birthday se nafrat hai samjhe acp arjun rawte " she screamed
tum khudkarz ho arjun , you are very bad " she started crying
he felt hurt seeing her cry
tumhe pata hai dard ke saat roj muskurana kitna mushkill hai " she asked
tho kyun muskhurate ho ? kisko bewakoof bana rahi ho ? khudko ya apne parents ko ? he asked
tumhe jaan boochke chodkar nahi gayi thi tumhari mom , majboori thi and i am sure ki agar aaj bhi tumhare papa zinda hai tho woh sirf tumhaare liye , par tum kya kar rahi ho sabko bewakoof bana rahi ho , jooti muskhurat se , kabhi socha tumne tumhari mom ko kitna bura lagta hoga tumhe raat bar chikte hue dekhkar , kitna helpless feel karti hongi woh apne pari jaise beti ko tadapte hue dekhkar , mein maanta hoon hi tumhare birthday ke din sikander ne unhe aur tumhare papa ko khatam kar diya but i am sure tumhare mumma aur papa ne tumhari birthday ko doom daam se celebrete karne ka kitna plan banaya hoga , zara socho saakshi tumhari mom ko kitna bura laga hoga ki tumne pichle 18 yrs se apna birthday nai manaya , woh tho khudko hi blame kar rahi hongi na , aur tumhare papa , socho woh kitne helpless feel karte honge jo tumhe aanat aashram mein rehna pada woh bhi unke hote hue , aaj agar tum apna birthday manaogi toh tumhare mom ka dard shayad thoda kam hoga " he said
saakshi mein jaanta hoon ki tum mujse naaraz ho par shayad tumhare mom tumse zyada mujse naaraz hongi agar aaj yum apna birthday manati ho toh shayad woh mujhe maaf kar dengi , baaki tum par hai , taiyar ho kar aana mein hall mein wait karunga " saying he turned to leave
arjun " she called him , she went towards him and stood right in front of him and they wer lost in each other's eyes and she hugged him and started crying
shhh. saakshi ...bas ,,,,,,,,,shhh " he said and pushed her back and made her sit on bed
he sat on his knees and cupped her face and said " aaj tumhara birthday hai saakshi aur birthday ke din thodi na koi rota hai " he smiled
i will wait for you in hall , meri kahi hui baaton par sochna aur fir tayyar hokar aana " he said and left closing the door

half hour later
kya woh woh dress pehenkar aayegi " he thought when her door opened and she wore the dress he gifted her along with the kada he had chosen
he was spell bound
she looked very beautiful
kaise lag rahi hoon mein arjun , mamma kush hongi na " she asked
tum bohut khoobsoorat lag rahi ho saakshi , blkul pari lag rahi ho , aise lag raha hai seeda aasman se direct utarkar aayi ho " he said
and she smiled at his complement
aise hi muskhuraya karo saakshi bhohut achi lagti ho " he continued
thanks " she was very happy he had complemented her for the first time today
chale , bohut der ho gayi hai , ETF mein tumhare liye surprise hai " he said
kaisa surprise arjun " she asked
surprise ko kehne mein kya mazaa hai chalo kudh chalkar dekh lo " he said
arjun " she called
haa bolo " he said immediately
tumhe lagta hai ki agar mein apna birthday nai manati tho meri mamma ko bohut bura lag raha hoga , tho tumhe nai lagta ki tumhe yun udhas dekhkar roshniji ko bhi bura lagta hoga , apne advise ko tumhe bhi tho follow karna chahiye na ? she asked
aaj meine pehli baar tumhe muskhurate hue dekha , tumhe muskhurana chahiye arjun , bohut ache lagte ho aur waise bhi tumhar muskurane se roshniji ke liye jo pyaar yumhare dil mein hai woh thodi kam hoga " she said
he walked towards her and smiled and said " aaj se mein muskhuraunga saakshi "
ab chlein ETF office , tumhe apni surprise nahi dekhna kya " saying so they both left for ETF office


so how was it guys
hope you like it
please do comment if you like it
i'll update the next part soon but cant say when
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh cool ... Sakhshi ka gussa and Arjun ne kitne achhe Samjhaya Sakhshi ko ... Wow he gifted her a dress and Sakhshi wore that dress and Wah Arjun will smile ... Great ... So I m waiting for the next part ... Surprise party for Sakhshi's birthday ... Plz update soon and thanks for this part :)

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