|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Tina2603

i was thinking about it since yesterday, i feel that it's Sakshi who's really gonna die😭

and you wrote something like that, and finally Arjun gets his revenge only to lose something again😭😭😭

Tahi ki bachi, what's with this sad story, i'm gonna pull your cheeks😭😭😭

It was awesome and lovely😊

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

jaan...yeh tunne kya kiya? kyun kiya?? kaise kiya?

Sakshi ko hi maar diya...I hope its not over...she will be back na...

Arjun will grab her back from death na?

tell me yes yes and only yes

cont soon!

Brilliantly written dear..loved it~

Originally posted by: NSohi13

Oh it's very much emotional and touching ... I m crying Tahi :(
But you wrote it so well...

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Beautiful and emotional
brought tears in my eyes.
Finally,Sikki is dead...
Wont be able to write more.
It was intense in emotions.
Superb.

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Same rule for me..

Comment only after U bring Sakshi back!😛

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

jab se maine IF join kiya hai...tum sab mujhe total girly girly banane pe tule hue ho...

earlier i hardly used to cry...nd in my family i ws th toughest of three galz...nd now...every now nd then...u galz make me cry...

this ws sooo emotional dhriti...

sorry cnt write more...
my hands are shaking...fingers are not curling any more...

plz continue soon...

i wanna read it more...

nd wat was dat...th above note...

why r u discontinuing all ur stories...dnt u dare do such stupidity angel..

love
Aisha

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

no words to express...m speechless..i really hope its not the end...its just the begenning of smthng new...this was one of the most touching stories in this forum...pls pls pls do bring sakshi bck FOR SURE...n after this emotional update u r bound by our request to update ASAP ...!!! n if possible pls pm me...will b waiting b quick 😊😊
thanks...

Originally posted by: sarunarshi72

oh my god! That was amazing. I actually felt their pain. U are an amazing writer. Beautifully written.

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_

Phew! I almost had a heart-attack and was prepared to come after you with a hockey stick, but ah.. I read the next lines and phew..

So, you're going to be a sweetheart and finish off the ones you started, right? Err.. PC, Perfect Two, Muse of fire, the reckoning and purgatory masquerade! Phew.. Kuch choota toh naahi?!

Khud ki heart attack mereko kyu gift kar rahe ho Zaleem? Damn your memorizing skills! Har roz badam khaate ho ya badam ka doodh? 🤣

Anyhow.. I just realised I'd been holding my breath until I read the last bit..

Noo.. Please tell me she's not gone! And that he's not going to be shattered once again..

Happy's the ending's..

Frankly... I don't know yet! So keep that hockey stick ready.. by chance kuch ho jaye toh! 🤪

Loved it to bits, seksy! And you say, you can't write serious stuff?!!
Honestly, this one's one of the best I've ever read on AF!

ermmm... seriousness ki queen, kuch jyada nehi ho gaya? 😉

Still thanks! 🤣

Pah! I know it all depends on your inphamous Fifty.. Well, lets hope for the cutie-pie Tahi to take over for a while when u pen down the next bit..

Exactly... you do know me well! 😎

Originally posted by: Nikita121

Beautiful
cont soon