TWO SHOT OS:Loat Aayo tum...update last part pg4 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

48

Views

14.5k

Users

31

Likes

166

Frequent Posters

rocking_gal thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#31
res for first part
phirse pad ke edit karungu...
lakin yeh Arjun humesha riye ke peeche kyun rehta hai...
phir se dandth diya na...
itna diff...strange...
Riya outburst nice...
more after i read it again...
sry for late comment...
rocking_gal thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#32
woww...
apna bahut hi romantic stories likthi ho seriously...
aisa hota kya,di...???
sachi Mein sacha pyar na nahi marta atleast aapke stries Mein heheheh...lovely...
yeh kya Riya to Riya rathore nikli...
lakin bheejari past and present Mein aagaye peeche her na mushkil hga na...
loved Arjun and rathore cheek convo...
Arjun xplaining himself rathore caring for his nd aisha love symbol Riya his daughter wow...
loved the way Arjun wanted to bring and what he did to get her back...sweet...
Arjun ki Riya waapis aaye hi gayi...
nd she,doesn't even mind the age diff woah...lovely...
she again proposed him...Riya u rock...
di,superb stry aisa hota hai ya nahi i don't know but hayyeee pyaar Mein sab possible hai...heheh
Pankhuri96 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Very cute os di.
Ria ka punarjanam
wow!!
Kash serial me bhi dikhate...
Awsm awsm
1993.ssg thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Fantastic update So Riya rathore is the rebirth of Riya mukhejee . Thank for the pm
unishaz thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#35
dimag ghuma dala yar.. Nice ending dear..
saritak thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome ending
love it❤️
Aabish_02 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesome ending
loved it
riya is rathod daughter
finally arjun confess his love
thanks for the pm
rizwanaa thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#38
superb ending
so riya was reborn as riya rathod
its true when 2 souls are meant
to be together no one can
nor anything can separate
them
n ariya are meant to be together
loved it!!
nice os
thanks a lot
ll_megha_ll thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#39
R

unres

😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭😭😭 😭 😭 😭😭😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

i am literally crying.
it was such a wonderful and lovely os
i am speechless yaar.
so riya has re birth.
she is sasha daughter.
loved ariya talk.
finally ariya together.
beautiful os.
thanx for pm.
and keep writing on ariya
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
sharmaayushi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#40
awesome story yar
the concept is new
the way u portrait the characters were amazing
so finally arjun and riya became ariya
great
continue ur such awesome works
thnx 4 pm and such a lovely update

Related Topics

Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: muskan760 · 8 years ago

Hey guys I'm here with the prologue of my Ariya story, though the title hasn't been yet decided but i hope you will enjoy it. Prologue :Life is

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima · 6 months ago

Prologue The night was heavy. As if the air itself carried the weight of unspoken truths and unfinished emotions. A storm was brewing—not...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: VindhyaMounika · 1 years ago

Arakshi SS: Chance By Kismat Prologue, Part 1 and 2 Part 3: Arjun kneeled before lifeless Sakshi, who didn’t even blink from past 5minutes. She...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima · 7 months ago

Part 1 The ETF office had always been a place of tension, urgency, and adrenaline, but today, an unusual silence loomed over the space. The...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: Navyasree08 · 3 years ago

Hey all iam Navya , this is my first fan fiction, iam so obsessed of our beloved arakshi ,i almost read all ffs of arakshi ,now I thought of...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".