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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
great update...!!!
ohh no aisha injured...!!😲
ab to sam kisi ko nai chodega...
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
hey nice one pls continue... and pls send me pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one waiting for next..

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kahaani adhure pyaar ki.. arjun

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Teaser n ch1 mein farak hai...anyways, awesome!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hayee..khatam kar dia???
samara..pm v nai kia dear???😭
ooww...m looking fwd 2 this eagerly...
pppllzzz jaldi update karo..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry guys for d delay. now a days bit busy in my admission 4 further study.
and to add d charm my phone started to hang bt now all is well.
i try to post my work asap.
sorry once again for delay.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry guys for delay.
I'll try to give u long wala updt.
so enjoy chapter 2.



CHAPTER- 2

Aisha get shot in process to save Rathod.

Rathod screamed- "AISHAAA!"

Aisha sees d pain in his eyes n wishpered slowly- "thnk god u r safe"

Now Rathod is no mood to leave anyone. He started to bck fire at naxalite not even bothering abt his lyf.

Aisha- "sir wat r u doing lets go or u will get hurt."

Rathod did nt say anythng n moving towards naxals.

Arjun- "Rathod kya kr rhe ho wapas aa jao."

But now its too late for him to cme back n soon he was surrounded by naxlite.

All etf can only see him being held captives as they r out f ammunition n enemy r much stronger den etf.
so Arjun odered all to back out n again cme bck with proper plan to save thier chief n end naxals.

Arjun- "hum bad me rathod ko lene aaenge. sakshi Aisha ko first aid karo."

As he talked abt Aisha all f dem get froze on thier track n turned to see her n as expected no sign f Aisha.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER:3-

All f dem turned to see Aisha n as expected she was nt there.

Few min ago--

When Aisha sees dt her love her life is being held captive only one thing was running on her mind dt to save his sameer at any cost. So she escaped frm d eyes f her team mates n went to follow naxalites.

But someone has rightly said dt work done in an impulsive moment only add miesery to work. So happened in dis case.As when She was following dem she was caught. She was afraid not bcoz f naxalite bt now She has to face an angry Rathod.She was kept in d same room where Rathod was already present.

Aisha to glaring Rathod- "sir plz try to understand me. Main to yaha mistakenly aa gayi hu."

Rathod- "mistakenly. Bewkuf bana ne ko koi nahi mila."

Aisha- "Sir main kyun aap ko bewakuf banaungi."

Next is wat she heard frm Rathod made him speachless.

Rathod- "ha. She is here with me. Okay i'll send u d cordinates. Cme soon."

Aisha- "sir wat was dt ?"

Rathod- "its plan Aisha dt u totally forgot to follow."

Aisha- "which plan sir."

Rathod just only raised his eyebroes wen Aisha realised how grave mistake she has done in an impulsive moments.It was thier plan dt Rathod will b held captive n den naxalite will take him to thier camp side n frm there he'll send the cordinates f his whrabts. Later Arjun with extra back up force will attack on dem n catch all naxals.But Aisha totlly forgot plan n now she is getting d glares frm Rathod.

Aisha- "sir iss tarah se ghurna band kariye kuch kuch hota hai."

Rathod irritedly "kya hota hai."

Aisha- "kuch kuch hota hai Rathod sir aap nahi samjhoge."

Rathod- "Main nahi samjhunga. Tum soch nahi sakti iss waqt main kya feel kr raha hu."

Rathod- "tumhari iss bewakufi ki wajah se humara plan kitne khatre me pad gaya hai."

Rathods word hurt her. She is here to save him n wat he is doing. Now he can see tears in her eyes' corner.As he stepped towards her she turned to gate n started to call someone.

Aisha- "koi hai? Koi hai yaha."

One naxalite cme n asked her matter.Kya hai itna kyun chilla rhi hai. Asked naxalite.

Luking back at him n dem face naxali n said, "mujhe inke sath nhi rehna hai. Ek to main yaha ink liye aayi or uper se mujh par gussa kr rhe hai."

naxali-- "chupchap yahi baith samjhi."

Rathod pull Aisha towards him n dt naxali went away.

Rathod- "Aisha kyun plan bigadne pe tuli huyi ho."

Aisha didnt said anything n snatch her hand n went to sit in a corner.
Edited by Samara92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
stop this minor shocks yaar..

please bada wala update do
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Do chapters post bhi ho gaye n pata bhi ni chala...! :/

Plz, long update next time! :)

Anyways, awesome updates!

Continue soon!

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