ariya: nafrat ki aag part 9 pg 34 11/30 *pm late - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
scary yaar
whos the couple ??
very eager to know wht happens
pls pls continue and pls also add me in PM list
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Amazing concept... feeling bad for that girl... who is that monster??? Arrgh... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
concept is awsum...
but feeling bad for that girl...
that.boy arghh...he is such a monster...
who are they both...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Amazing concept dr.

Feel really bad for the girl.

Tht guy is really a monster 😡 😡.

I really want to kill him 😡 😡.

Cant wait to read more.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Di
nyc start
gud title
so scary
do cont dis n ur wrk soon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
what a suspence? nice start
i hate that guy
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Part 2

He stood her up by pulling her hair…. She was screaming in pain and teard fell down from her eyes and he said, "chillao aur chillao… me chahta hun ki tumhari cheekh use tak pahoche… use bhi pata chale ki kisi apne ko dard me tadpte dekhna kya hota hai"…. By saying this he threw her on the bed… and he proceeded to her… she was pleasing him to stop, but he didn't listen to her… he took of his coat and threw on the floor... and forced himself on top of her….then he turned off the lights… so there was a darkness and her loud and heart wrenching screamed was heard…. "aaahhh"…..

Shree turned off the screen by the remote… everyone was watching this cds in the conference room….in that CD, that guy's face was not seen… only his back was visible…. aisha was sitting next to Rathod and was really worried and scared… she was shaking her legs… Rathod noticed her…

Shree: bas sir itna hi hai…

Rathod: Aisha tum theek to ho?

Aisha: ha sir… sir wo Ri…

She was about to ask Rathod something at that time Chhotu's phone rang… he talked on the phone and informed the ETF…

Chhotu: sir… mere informers ke mutabik sikander ke purani kapdo ki mill me aaj rat kuchh bahut badi deal hone wali hai… hume waha se uske khilaf koi na koi sabut zaroor mil shakta hai…

Arjun: good job chhotu… Rathod shayad aaj raat hume sikander ke khilaf koi strong sabut mil jaye… to atleast hum use interrogate karne to bula hi shakte hai…

Rathod: I don't think so Rawte… wo bahut shatir hai… itni asani se humare hath nahi lagne wala fir bhi hume koi angle nahi chhona chaiye… kya pata shayad aaj hum ise desh ke sabse bade businessman ke peeche chhupa asli chehra sab ke samne laa shake… shree tum headquarters backup ke liye phone karo…

By saying this Arjun, Rathod, shree and Chhotu was leaving the room and Aisha stopped them…

Aisha: aur sir wo Riya….

There were real concerned and worried in her voice for Riya… everyone was looking at her and eachother… she was waiting for her answer…

Arjun: Rathod me nahi chahta ki Riya aur ise CD ke bare me ise waqt kisi ko kuchh bhi pata chale…

Rathod: I understand Rawte… tum fikar mat karo… (looking at Aisha) ye baat sirf aur sirf humare beech rahegi… kisi ko koi bhanak tak nahi padegi… nahi media aur nahi humare senior ko…is that understood everyone?

Everyone agreed with Rathod but Aisha… she was really worried about Riya, looking her pity condition in that cd… she was helpless so as Riya…

Aisha(to herself): oh god… plz help riya…use takat dijiyega ki wo ise hell se bahar aashake… waise bhi in sab me wo bichari bina wajah pis rahi hai… bina kisi galti ke wo ek jahannum se bhi battar zindagi ji rahi hai… nahi jee nahi rahi mar rahi hai… mein samaj shakti hun riya ki ise waqt tum pe kya gujhar rahi hogi… par mein bhi majboor hun… I'm sorry mein kuchh nahi kar parahi hun… I'm sorry…

And Asiha broke down… and she cried silently… Rathod came back to conference room and he saw Aisha was crying… he went to her and put his hands on her shoulder… aisha wiped her tears and stood up…

Rathod: mein janta hun Aisha, ki tum riya ki wajah se bahut pareshan ho… par mein bhi lachar hun…

Aisha: lachar! Aur aap!!?? No sir… lachar aap nahi Riya hai… dekha tha na aapne use use cd mein… kitna dard tha uski aankho me… waishi janwar ki tarah wo har roj uske sharir ko nochte hai… kuchh kar nahi pa rahi hai wo aur aap kehte ho aap Lachar ho… kisi bekasoor ko bina galti ke koi saja nahi deni chahiye phir Riya kis baat ki saja bhookat rahi hai… pyar karne ki!? Be inteha... unconditional love karne ki saja bhukat rahi hai… aur aap kuchh kar nahi shakte kyun ki aap lachar hai? Right

Rathod: ise waqt tumhare sawalon ka mein koi jawab dena sahi nahi samajta… aur waise bhi yaha ETF ka chief mein hun… aur tumhe bhi mere orders follow karne hoge… go back to your work now…

Rahtod left from there… Arjun heard all the conversation between them…

Same day at night… ETF team with help of some local police help, attacked on the old mill of sikander… where they were supposed to find some illegal activities… as they reached to the mill, there was nothing… the mill was empty…

Chhotu (shocked): ye kaise ho gaya… mere informer ne pakki khabar di thi key aha kuchh gadbad hone wali hai

Shree: par ise mill ko dekhkar lagta hai ke kai salon se yaha koi aaya nahi… kaise informers hai tere chhotu…

Aisha: informers sahi hai… yeh dekhiye… (she found a card… whcih says I'm back… and his signature "S" in red color)

Arjun took that card and torn out

Arjun(anger): iska matlab wo humare sath khel khel raha hai… usne jaanbujhke apne informers ko ye galat information di…

Rathod: damn it!!!

Arjun: abhi bhi nahi sudhra wo… lagta hai uska dose badhana padega…

Nextday morning….

At some beach… Arjun was running crazily… at one point he stopped… he was breathing heavily, and bent down to get some breath… Rathod came there with 2 glass of cutting chai…

Arjun: iski zaroorat nahi thi…

Rathod: janta hun… apne liye laya to socha tumhare liye bhi le chalu… janta hun pehle jaisa rishta nahi raha humara par ek co-worker ki hesiyat se hi lelo…

Arjun took one glass from him… and both sat on the bench near by, and was looking at rising sun… both of them were quiet and drinking their chai…

Arjun: tum to kabhi chai nahi pite the… fir aaj kyun…

Rathod: bas aise hi… socha ki kuchh change hojaye…

Arjun: change… huh… phir se wahi bate yaad kar rahe the na…

Rathod smiled at arjun that even now Arjun understood what he was thinking… he wasn't surprised… its just that the definition of their friendship is still same…

Rathod: haa rawte… (after little pause) Riya ke bare me soch raha tha…. Kya sach me use tumse pyar karne ki saja to nahi mil rahi hai? Chahe wo aaj ki baat ho ya 5 saal pehle ki…

Arjun and Rathod both went 5 years back in the past…


thats it for now guys... plz plz plz read it and comment here...

thank you...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
ooohhh god poor ri
dat girl s she..whs dat animal
sikandar naa
lv aysha's concrn 4 her
well a wmn dfntlyy stand andr 1 's pain
who send dis cd 2 etf
now sik is back aahan
arjun and sam hv cuttn
deu ri 4m past
wtng 4 more
plzz cont soon
Edited by naughtykittyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
superb update :) loved it
aisha was really so worried for riya
so arjun doesnt want anyone to know about riya and CD
so the girl in CD is riya and the guy who did al that to her is sikander
feeling so bad for riya 😭 poor girl
so apparently according to aisha riya is suffering for loving someone or may be arjun
arjun and sam scenes were lovely
even rathore is thinking riya is suffering for loving arjun
what happened 5 years ago?
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
superb update...
omg so the girl is riya... and sik has kiddnapped her???
and ye kis saza ki baat kar rhe h? why has he kiddnapped her?? because she loved arjun???
feeling so bad for her... she is in so much pain... :(
aur ye 5 years phle ka kya kissa hai???
awww aisha was so worried for her...love the way she replied to sameer...
arjun sameer scenes at the beach were lovely...
continue soon...

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