ariya: nafrat ki aag part 9 pg 34 11/30 *pm late - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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start soon plz plz plz plz plz
plz plz plz plz plz
ham pe daya karo tum hamare bhagvan saman ho ab etna to keh diya to chalo ab dedona ek lam...ba update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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where are u ketne mahino ho gae update nahi mila plz update do na es story ka
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello friends... sorry for late update... and thank you very much for such a nice comments... plz keep reading and posting comments here...

thank you!!!

Part 3

5years ago...

Some village in rajasthan... At Mahadevji's temple...

A 20 years old girl, wearing light pink, yellow and white chudidar salwar, was going to the Mahadevji's temple with her friends... she also had a puja thali in her hands and was climbing stairs without shoes... she was very happy... a mild wind was blowing her hair but this coldness made her happy... and a sweet, dimple smile appeared on her face... she was very beautiful girl... she reached to the temple and covered her head with her dupatta... then with true faith she worship lord Shiva... she offered milk, water, bili patra, flowers and fruits...

That girl: pandit ji... ye lijiye... aaj mera 16 wa somwar hai... Yani aakhri somwar... aur isiliye me aaj mahadev ko maha parasad ka bhog lagana chahti hun...

(some men brought mahaprasad and gave it to pandit for Bhog... pandit made a bhog... and came back to the girl and put tilak on her fore head and gave her a prasad too)

Pandit: riya beta... aapne puri shradhdha ke sath ise 16 somwar ka vrat kiya hai... aur dekhna mahadevji aap ko man chaha var zaroor dega... kush raho beta...

By saying this pandit left and Riya was blushing and coming out from the temple... they were going down from stairs...

Ridhi(one of her friend): are riya... tu to abhi se sharm se lal ho gayi... jab wo samne ayege to kya hoga tera...

Vrinda: mujhe to lagta hai ki riya palke utha kar dekh tak nahi payegi unhe... sharm ke mare palke itni bhari jo hojayegi...

Riya: chup raho tum log... aur wase bhi jab dil se dil bate karte ho to aankhe khuli ho ya bandh... labz zaban pea aye ya na aye koi fark nahi padta... aur hume pura wishwas hai ki mahadevji hume bahut hi pyar karnewala pati denge...

At that time a wind was blowing little faster and riya's dupatta flew away in the air and dropped on someone's face... she was running behind the dupatta and stopped when it fell on someone... she agitatedly went near him and pull her dupatta from his face... When she removed her dupatta from his face both of them eyes met... he was tall, dark and handsome guy, wearing black suit and black glairs... her heart beats was increasing... there was something about that guy which made her attracted her even at very first sight...that guy was also very admired by her beauty, and simplicity... it was love at first sight...

After a while that guy broke the eyelock and said, "aap ka dupatta"

Riya: thanks

by taking her dupatta... she was returning to her friends but she was still looking at him and she missed one step and was about to fall... but at right time he hold her from her waist and pulled her toward him... her chest crushed against his... and she was also holding his arms and he was holding her from her waist... both of them were very close to eachother...

guy: aap theek to hai? (was still holding her)

Riya just nodded her head... both of them were lost in eachother... at that time some men came there and separated both of them from each other... they attacked on that guy... Riya screamed and her friends also came there and stood by her... she was screaming and telling those men to stop but they started to beat him up...

One of those men punched on that guy's face, and he started bleeding from his mouth...

That guy (roared): ye kya battamizi hai?

In the reply another man tried to punch him but this time he quickly hold that goons hand and he punched him so hard that he fell on the floor unconscious... everyone shocked to see that... there were 7 goons and he was the only one man... after rest of six men attacked on him and he bravely opposed and fought back to them...

At police station of some village of rajasthan...

A police inspector was sitting on his chair and had put his legs on his desk and some other constables were gathering around him and they were laughing and having fun...

Constable: are saab ee dekho ke SMS aayo hai... humari sarkar ke bare me...

Inspector: aso ke SMS aayo hai... padhiyo to zara...

Constable shibu: jii saab...

Ek baar 1 Ladka aur Ladki aaps me bahut prem karte the...Ladki ke baba sa ne pata chal gayo... to usne gusse me aake bijli se chalne wali aari ko apni ladki ki gardan pe rakh diyo...wo aari ladki ko katne hi wali thi ki achanak...LIGHT CHALI GAI.

Paas me khada wo ladka chillayo...A**** *****T JINDABAD..!

Matlab ee hai ki... Agar sachcha hai aapka pyaar, To sath hai Aapke... RAJASTHAN SARKAR... ...!

Everyone started laughing on constables joke...

Constable puram: harami bhare pade hai sare...

Inspector: harami se yaad ayo... humare DCP saab nu kaam ho giyo ke nai hoyo... uske harami sale ko jail se chhoda kee nahi... suvar phone karke matho fer deve hai...

Constable Puram: chhod diyo hai... kabka... pan piso na malyo hai saabji...

Inspector: kya... humra piso khagayo au harami DCP... (he called the DCP) hello DCP sir... ACP Sameer bolu hun... do aur case aayo hai rape ke aur wardat ki jagah pe aapke shale ke sabot milyo hai... ladkiya abhi bayan dene ki halat me na hai... baki uko pakadne ka warrant nikal shakta hai... (after some Pause) ae ki keh rahe ho saabji aap... mein ki kar shakta hu... me thehra sarkari karmchari... phir aise mauke dabane ko piso bhi bahut lage se... aur aap to jano ho ki ek imandar police wale ki kamai ki hove hai... aise me mai kaise sabka muh bandh rakh pau... upar se ise pehle wale me bhi aapne paiso na diyo to... au rise baar to 2 case hai... double piso lage go... aur ha sirji ise bar piso pehle bhejna... (after pasue) ji sirji... dhanyawad aap ka... (hung up the phone) shala humse hoshiyari... ACP Rathod se hushiyari... Hari ram pisa aate hi shale ko jail me bandh kar daiyo... ladki ki ijjat pe hath dalta hai kamina... Rathod sab bardast kar shake hai par aurat ni ijjat ke sath khilwad karne wale ko na bardast karego

Hariram: jii sirji...

Again his phone rang and after hearing from the other end his smile got vanished and he rushed out from the police station and took his car and left from there...

Rathod reached to the shivji's temple where those goons were having fight... one of those goons took out hockey stick and hit to that guys right shoulder... Rathod who was just reached there saw that... he was running crazily to save that guy... By that time those goon hit the hockey stick on his back... that young guy was about to fall from the stairs but Rathod reached on time and caught him and roared "Arjunnn"...

Arjun got his balance and in few minutes he became alright and Rathod and Arjun both beat those goons...

Rathod then calls his police station and sent those goons in jail...

Rathod: arjun tane jyada chot to koni lagi...

Arjun: no its okay Rathod... I am fine... pata nahi kaun the ye log... achanak hi tut pade

Rathod: pura ka pura shaher mane to bawro lage hai...

Arjun: bawro? Ye kya bol rahe ho Rathod... at least mere samne to normally baat kar

Riya came to them : excuse me... I am sorry... wo meri wajah se aap ko ye sab...

Rathod: aap ki wajah se?

Riya: ye sab mere bhaisa ke aadmi the... meri protection ke liye... jab bhi koi aadmi meri kareeb ane ki koshish karta hai to wo unke sath marpit karke unhe bhaga dete hai... pehli baar in logo ko kisi ne haraya hai

Arjun (very arrogantly): tab to unke naseeb me ye haar barbar aayegi...

Riya (confused): ji me kuchh samji nahi...

Arjun: simple hai... (by going closer to her) agar mein barbar tumhare kareeb (and arjun pulled her towards him so sudden and she hit into his chest and because of his sudden action she got scared) ata rahunga to wo mujhse aise hi ladte rahege aur mein aise hi unki haddiya todta rahuga... to ab tum samjee ya (kissed on her cheecks) samjau...

Riya (got angry and very forcefully she pushed him away): battmaiz aadmi... kya bkwas kar rahe ho tum? Dur rehna mujhse warna tumhara ise shaher me rehna mushkil kar dege mere bhaisa...

Rathod: dekh chhori...mara dost tane apno dil de chukyo hai... bawli na ban... mare dosta jaiso chokkho var tanne puri duniya me koni male... ane rahi bat thare bhai sa ki to uski chinta tu koni kar... uko mein nipat lunga... wiase naam ke batayo thare bhaisa ka?

Riya: abhi bataya hi nahi hai... par jab sunoge to chahere ka rang udjayega... Mere Bhaisa... Shankar sinh Solanki... aur mein unki chhoti bahen Riya Solanki...

Arjun and rathod both looked at eachother and exchange a look...

Rathod: tum Shankar sinh solanki ki bahen ho !? achcha hai.. waise me ACP Sameer Rathod aur ye mera dost Arjun...

Arjun (angry): tumhare bhaisa ko ek message dena hai... rathod

he signaled rathod and rathod left from there... and arjun went closer to her and riya tried to move back but before that Arjun grabbed her and kissed on her lips passionately... she was trying to release herself but arjun didn't let her go... he became more wild and bite her lower lips very hard... warm tears rolled down from her eyes... after sometime he broke the kiss but still holding her arm... Riya was shivering with fear, her heartbeat was superfast... there were tears in her eyes and her lip was bleeding duet to arjun's bite... arjun wipe the blood from her lip with his thumb

Arjun: keh dena apne bhai se mene tum par apni mahor laga di hai... me tumhe lene aaunga... tumhe apne solah somvar ke vrat ka phal mil chuka hai... aur mujhe gussa mat dilana

By saying this he released her and he left from there... riya was still scared and became numb... rathod let her friends and other people go which he had blocked for sometime... Riya was in shocked... and her friends came to her and consoling her...


thats it for now guys...

hope you all like it... and plz pzl plz leave your comments and hit like button...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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here is the pic of Shankar Sinh Solanki- Riya's brother


Edited by aptl123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.
Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read all the updates together... first two updates were a little confusing but the third was great...

so something happened between arjun and sankar and riya was the victim...

continue soon would love to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome wonderful update
16 somvar ka fal mil Gaya

He forced to kissed her tht is not fair

They lost in each other tht gud

Kush to chut rha haiii...


Thanx 4 pm me

Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is that riya in that cd???
pls say NOOO
feel bad for that girl
nobody cares abt that girl except ayesha
what's going on yaar???
ariya 1st meeting was nice
what are sam &arjun upto???
why arjun is behaving like this with riya???
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally a update
superb yar...
ariya first meet was awesome...
riya ne somwar ke vrat rakhe n ast day hi ariya met cool...
woah sam ko kya hua???😲 lol arjun asked him to talk normal in front of him😆
woahh rii ka bro sounds dangerous... arjun ne kya fight kiya unse...
love at first sight haan...first meet mai kiss...
feeling bad for riya... poor girl was so scared...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
y does arjun treat her that way?
does he hate her?

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