|| SS : Muse of Fire || Ch 2, Pg 4 - Page 5

Originally posted by: _TaNi_

reesss

me first

_______
Oh MY gudness..wat an awesumt chapter to read

Loved it

Haaye Arjun ji in his hot n happening khadus avatar

n i loved Shree Chotu 's side comments

ayana : My god ..this gal stole d update for me

loved her from d very first chapter

Loved d dialog's u wrote for her

n d last one:"Tumhein sudharne k liye"...LOL

liked the research she did already

waiting for more

continue soon Tahi

Love

Tani

Originally posted by: sips_crazy

Suprise would be a understatement ...

I am shocked that u updated soo soon..pakka se phele hi likha hua hoga !!😆😆

Coming to the update Bombastic ...i can so imagine Elena when u described her...

The killer reminds me of Yin and Yang wala psycho onaly a little more sinsiter ...😡😡..

But i am actually wondering how will you build a story around the scarred ...and of cousre Arjun ji ko sudharna bhi toh hai ...

I already love this one ...and much i do the others ...

Brillant again Love

Continue sooner

oohh!! good going tani di!!

Whoa.. Curse my luck and poor eyesight for having missed this one.. 🤪

But yes.. Your lady does seem like a female Arjun.. Only, she isn't..
She's going to be a pain in his neck, I can feel it..

Bring on the dhishoom dhishoom.. Pleej Hotwa ke do chaar ghoose padvana iske haathon.. Dili tamannah! 😉

Waiting.. waiting and waiting.. Samjhi nahi? Hotwa ko bolun samjhane?! 😉😛

update kab milega...🤢

just read both the parts..
nice story..
waiting for the next part..
update soon..