|| SS : Muse of Fire || Ch 2, Pg 4

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

dhasu ayanna i like her ...

female arjun :)

muse of fire is a apt name for both

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

awesome... so atlast tornado met volcano...

and her last dialogue i lovd it 😉

lykd the female version of arjun...

i thnk she has sme past connection wid dis "scarred" maybe her someone was a victim...

precap sounds interesting...

tom and jerry show begins 😆

update soon

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hi dhriti di🤗...

asusual ur kinda update😉...hmm lady version of acp arjun rawte...😉...

damm toh hai...i do my homework😉😆...loved it😃

liza knew ayaana 😃...she is nice 😉 till now but when it came to arjun...already firework started bw them😆😆😆😆

shree n chotu were half relieved with ayaana ...well if she is a bomb...i wolud like to watch it😉...

arjun ko theek karne aayi hai😃 ...update soon di🤗

Edited by life93 - 12 years ago

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Dude... This is epic! I can't wait to read more!

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Tahi with a T

As soon as you described Ayaana, i instantly thought of Angelina Jolie and her characters from Lara Croft crossed with Mr and Mrs smith.. i hope that didn't offend you.. i meant it as a compliment..😊

Anyways i loved this chapter... it was really funny and love Ayaana's character..

Continue soon😊

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Prerna

@daydreamer...

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awesome update...

last line was the best...

waiting to see how arjun deals with her...

continue soon di...

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Sorry couldn't reply on the previous update.
Well Tahi ne likha hai to normal entry of our leads are least expected😉.Wah!!!Bang on entry.Arjun Rawte ka Female Version.Great.Now he'll come to know the % of his rebellious nature.😆😉Mirror Image jo aa gai.👏Agent Ayaana Shroff ,I like the name.👍🏼Rathod asking Rawte to behave with her as if he is gonna listen.😆😆

"Tumhe Sudhaarne K liye."Epic line I must say.👏👍🏼God bless Sameer Rathod.He's definitely gonna have frequent headache now.😔Thanks for the PM dear.😊

P.S.:My dear Tahi,when are you going to update the other stories😆

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Great update..
Loved it:)
Female version of ACP Rawte!! :p
She has come to bring Arjun in right path..thats what she said..
It gonna be interesting..
Continue soon..