my surprise bday-shana last epilogue pg 23, 24 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey just read last two parts...!!!
superb yar...!!!
awww shaa ke gifts...!! <3 shoo cutee...!!!
their convo was lovely...!!!
aur sabka surprise was amazing...!!!
sana ki wish was ❤️
continue soon...!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally this is the last part... feeling sad.. bt i think


this has to end so smething new can be started...


Epilogue 3-final part...



Sana: shaa chalo kahan jana hai?



Shaleen: chalo…



He opened the car door for her…and led her to



the place where thy were supposed to reaching…



he tied a silk cloth on her eyes..and took her to



the place..



Sana: shaa please kholo na patti…



Shaleen: I vl just 2 minutes…



He lifted her in his arms and started walking..



Sana: thank u my legs were hurting so much…



Thy reached the place and he opened her eyes…



Her mouth was opened in shock and tears



flowing down…


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She just hugged him tight..they stayed in a hug



for few minutes..he rubbed her tears..



Sana: its beautiful baby yeh bday is the best..i got



the most precious gift of my life..…. and so much


love..

Shaleen: ur every bday will be more special than


ever... and my love will always be multiplying …



bas u keep smiling always..



They both settled down beside eachother..



Sana: tumne shoot ke baad rest nahi kiya na?



tum yeh decorations kar rahe the jab I called u?



Shaleen: haa..bday surprise..for my special girl



Sana: shaa mujhe aaj tak itni sarin gifts kabhi



nahi mili and u knw I dnt require all this.. mujhe



sabse best gift toh kal hi mil gaya tha..


my love..my life partner..


Shaleen: par phir bhi.. kal mein tumhare saath


time spent nahi paya nah. So chota sa



compensation..tumhe bhook lagi hai tumne party



mein kuch khaya nahi?



Sana: haa bohot..



He had ordered all her fav food…



Sana: mera fav hi hoga I knw..lets eat..



They had their dinner.. and decided to have a



walk on the beach…holding hands.. so close..no



fear of hiding from anyone.. they were just


walking… he suddenly stopped..



Sana: kya hua tired ho gai? kal shoot jaldi hai?


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..😊
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He went on knees pull a small box from his


pocket..took a ring..



Shaleen: sana will spend ur entire life with me ?



Kya tum mujhe apni life ka part banaogi?


Taki mein proudly keh saku I have best partner


in my life..i m the luckiest person on this planet.



will u give me a return gift on ur bday?



will u take the responsibility of samjhofying me



for the entire life???



will u be mine and make me urs for ever??



She was so overwhelmed by his love and



gestures.. she felt today is the queen of the



world..she thought to play for while



Sana: no '. Nahi/'.


.i think we are perfect match each other..



(he only heard the first nahi didnt hear the last



sentence)



shaleen : wat nahi? U dnt want this ..???(he was



really scared)



Sana: itna sab kuch hone ke baad u r asking me'


and i said we are perfect match each other..


of course shaa I vl spend my entire life with



my duffer'ab samjhe ya samjhaun..




Shaleen: u scared me..




Sana: kyon mere pyaar pe trust na tha?



Shaleen: apni kismet pe trust nahi tha to get u as



my life partner..



He got up and put the ring on her fingers'she



saw the ring, loved it ..



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Sana: shaa itni expensive ring?



Shaleen: tum bhi toh meri princess ho..



Sana: tumne apni sare savings .. why shaa?


Tumhare feelings samajne ke liye iss ring ki zarorat nahi hai mujhe..



Shaleen: janta hoon par I feel good to gift u



smething like this..



Sana: aur subah ki gifts.. yeh dress yeh shoes..



Shaleen: ajeeb ho tum girls complain karti hai


mera boyfriend gifts nahi lata aur tum ho ki..



Sana: ha kyonki mein nahi chahti mera future



hubby mujh par abhi itna sara spend kare..



remember first dream.. Mumbai mein ghar..


wooh kahan se ayega?



Shaleen: wooh bhi aa jayega.. thoda chota hi sahi



par zaror ayega..



Sana: I knw.. I believe ke zaror ayega.. par tab



tak no expensive gifts for me… jab mujhe chahiye


hoga I vl ask for it..and fir toh tumhara bank


balance mera hi hai jab chahu haqq se kharch


karungi...



Shaleen: ok baby anything else..



Sana: ha …



Shaleen: kya?



Sana: I lve u…(dimpled smile)



Shaleen: I love u too…



They hugged each other…



beautiful day completed with so much beautiful


memories..


memories of love, togetherness and best proposal….



Sana: tumhe return gift nahi chahiye kya?



Shaleen: tum ho mera sabse bada gift..



Sana: right…



She went closer to him..put her hands around his



neck..pulled him to her..he placed his hands on



her waist ..they locked their lips together..



What a perfect beginning to such a beautiful



relation…the best thing.. after official proposal



and beautiful ring.. a perfect kiss to begin with..



to tell eachother that they are made to be perfect



couple.. for ever till eternity..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwsssmmm... ending
loovveedd... it
sooo pure filled with sooo much loovveee...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb cute and very fine ending to super dhasu story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super awesome amez update loveit thanks for pm

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