my surprise bday-shana last epilogue pg 23, 24

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hey friends i wrote a os on shaleen's bday so this time i m preparing another one for sana too,... story will cme latr if u like the introduction...

just a little bit of background'.


its few days more to go for sana's bday'..aftr sana left the show almost 8 months have passd.. all have moved on..bt the friendship and the warmth is still the same.. mrunal, shital, ritu has very well gelled down in the group'. Bt still every person does create a place in your heart that no one else can rule' there is indeed a special place sana has created in lives of all'take it from behzad to chotu,,,,even the girls have become friends to her..bt the most important place she has made was in shaleen's heart'

they had been doing a lot of workshops in past..even before the shooting began..so time spent has created lot of memories for both of themm..though they do not say it they had always being the more special to eachother than the others..and they knw it well in their hearts..

No wonder hw much busy they are on the sets ..they took out time for each other.. they chat, discuss, help in work, ..share each other sorrows and double the happiness... friendship at its best..

will sana get a surprise on her bday that she will never be able to forget? will this bday give her smething she would always remember?

the suspense will be unfold soon on her bday...if u all like the teaser then i vl update few parts bt the surprise will be on the bday...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls continue this
will be waiting 4 the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice... waiting for u to continue... plzzz don't forget to PM me the update...
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waitng for it...please continue soon
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Nicee!!!
i'll be waiting for it <3
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wow shana story awsum...
prologue was superb...
continue soon.. eagerly waiting for the story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...
Beautiful concept.
Loved it.
Jaldi start karo.
Mujhse aur raha nahi jaraha hai.
Pm zarur karna.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey friends i m back with a part of this os... i have still nt decided hw many parts i divide it.. bt zyada tang nahi karunga and i promise surprise wala part on the bday will be the longest one...
till thn paish hai apki khidmat mein...
part1
it was again a regular hectic shoot of arjun' they got a break for sme minutes.. so all were busy checking their phones, ipads for the messages from fans , friends and families'just few day before shaleen' bday passed so he was looking at his bday snapps..just one snap took all his attention,,,yes it was his and sana's snap/..
shaleen: my dimpled girl.. my baby...


his mind and heart wandered on the day of his bday. hw tough that day was, it was almost gng to be evening and still he was shouting.. bday excitement was there bt work commitment was also important for him.. finally he has gvn his last shot' thn pack up..

shaleen: ok guys in 2hours reach at the party venue..i vl be waiting..

others: yes'

they were all the venue chating, old friends have also being there.. all were busy cherishing memories of past, hvng fun.. finally a girl called him..

hey shaaa'(obviously sana calls him shaa)

shaleen: so miss beautiful smile is here finally' I thought u vl cme tom..

she hugged him tight..they have always felt a spark whn they meet.. even more aftr she left..

sana: happy birthday shaaa..

they became a little teary..coz they met aftr long time.. work had kept them too packed to meet..she was outdoors and he was busy shooting..

shaleen: thank u baby(he always call her that once they became friends)and thanks for the tweet,, I really felt special..

sana pose up to him..like hw do look..?

shaleen: awesome, beautiful just out of this world as always'chalo sab se milo cme..

sana: thodi aur tarif karo... phir.. i m special na..

shaleen: the most special... let me see u properly.. this color soots u nice.. your hair too good.. assessories perfect...

pulling her closer...

shorts thodi badi nahi mili..she shot him a glare..

shaleen: just kidding.. all in all and awesome.. bt pata agar tum apne pajamas aur tee mein bhi ate na toh bhi u would be the most beautiful girll...

sana: ha i feel so good... finally mr delhi ne meri tarif ki..

shaleen: hey roz karta hoon.. come on yaaar..meri sare lines khatam ho gai ab chale andar..

sana: chalo badme dekhlungi tumhe.. kahan bhage ja rahe ho.

shaleen: tumse baagne ki himmat na baba na mujhe thode bday's celebrate karne hai..

finally they went inside...

they again got busy he with receiving guests and she ws busy chating wid arjun team nd other friends..though they stole frequent glances'

the party continued the cake cutting, he remembered hw every1 was looking at them whn he asked her to stand beside him while he cut the cake.. and next when she fed him the first piece..

lots of memories making for life..and the day was over'..a smile crept on his face..

he came out of his flashback whn sid shaked him'

sid: where were u lost?

Shaleen: kahin nahi..

Sid: bday pics dekh raha hai' my god teri and sana ki pic fans have reacted so crazyly..

Bez: hoo it shows hw much they miss ariya ' and hw they want riya to be back'.fans love the most precious one'waise sana bday aa raha hai plans kya hai? Kuch surprise dete hai usee.

Sid: ha bilkul' she gave me a wonderful one on my bday'the best cake ever..

(I here by assume that all others i.e. bez, sid , ketan(chotu), even gorky sir ((director ke akheen waise hi tez hoti hai)) feels that shana have feelings for eachother beyond just good friends..and nw even sheetal and ritu knws abt it'and sana's friend priyal gor too feels that sana do have feelings for him)(hamare asssumption pe hi toh duniya kam hai)

Shaleen: she is a special one uske toh kuch bohot khaas karna chahiye..sochta hoon kuch.. uski favs.. teddy bears, chocolates, flowers(orchids) ,perfumes, lip bams,,..

Tabhi gorky sir.. shaleen.. shot ke liye ready'

Shaleen: yes sir..

All again get busy in the shoots'they regularly discuss abt the surprise party bt end with no plans'

so here it is ab agee kuch plan kar rahi hoo jaldi hi update karungi par please achche comments bhi do...

Edited by pinkerbell - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow so cute update dear...

I love the ariya specially shaleen who remember her each and evry thing...


Hmm pinkerbell u have done good homework on ariya...

I love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update dr.

As always loved the concept so so much.

Shana moments in FB r so... lovely...

I m really excited for her birthday caz mine too is on the same day. So double celebration for me.

Thanks for pm dr.

Please continue it soon.
Edited by akanksha1371986 - 12 years ago

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