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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's superb Di. Sam n arjun are frands cool nice concept continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superbone re//..
last part was amazing...
boar...alive..heheh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry 4 late cmmnt dr u know why
Bt yeh kya dassu update hai
Continue yr
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi pari🤗...awesome story dear😃😃😃 loved the arjun n sam as an army man...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi... thanks for liking my story...thanks to all those who liked and gave their precious comments...
that meant a lot to me... keep showering your likes and comments...😃
here i have second part...
hope you like it...😊

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Part 2

Arjun soon went to his team and joined them.

"shshsh... psst.pssst..."

"kya hai sam?"

"tere haath abhi bhi maile hai cleanliness freak..." Arjun could hear sam's chuckles.

"oh yeah.. I just forgot to wipe it across your chickna chehra sam... just imagine gore gore chehre pe kaala kaala stool.. haha"

"very funny. Tu mere aas paas bhi nahin aa sakta hai Rj"

"ander jaate time to saath milenge hi na sam..."

"ya ya..."


"shit sam. Those bloody bas***ds are out. I can see 10 from where I am... plan 2 action."

As per arjun's words, sam with 10 members moved further to their left while Arjun to their right. They made a single line semicircle and all had their guns ready.

But everything they planned seemed to fail when they noticed the terrorists moved in complete opposite direction, to other side of the valley.

"Rj.. I am getting through sergeant Chandra...what was his name dammit!!!! Whatever. I cant get to him"

"neither can I sam. Sergeant Shreekant also is unreachable."

"Dammit!!!!!!! Whats wrong. Rj I ll go and see there. You lead these people."

"sam hamare paas zyada waqt nahin hai ki tum wahan tak jao. I am quiet near so I ll move oki... take care back here and start moving. If possible I ll breach their security and enter the village"

"you ll do no such thing Rj. Have you lost it?"

"what? My V??!!! no man. I did not get my lady yet. Search one for me. And who knows I may find her here in this village..." he chuckled

"shut up Rj... its not a bit funny. Don't you dare enter the village without backup."

"thik hai mere baap. Nahin jaaunga. Pehle uss troop ka haal to dekh lun... aur haan...Majhasati ek changli mulgi hudkayla visaru nako sam...(mere liye acchi ladki dhoondna mat boolna sam)" he grinned...

"tu veda ahes Rj(tu paagal hai Rj)...tu ekdum pagal hai" sam said exasperated.

~~~

"I don't know whats wrong with Rj.

Hamesha khatron mein koodne ke liye taiyaar rehta hai.

Har baat mein mazaak, masti...

Uff.. I just hope ki wo akela ander jaane ke baare mein naa soche..."

~~~

ai watan ai watan hamko teri qasam
teri raahon mein jaan tak lutaa jaayenge
phool kyaa cheez hai tere kadmon pe ham
bhent apne saron ki chadhaa jaayenge
ai watan ai watan hamko teri qasam
teri raahon mein jaan tak lutaa jaayenge
ai watan ai watan

The condition other side seemed to be worse than Arjun had thought.

He had just seen 10 people from his direct vision but he could not see those other 15 who had sneaked out in dark.

He quickly analyzed the condition. He saw sergeant chandrakant trying to pull his injured army men aside. Arjun saw about 6-7 people, groaning in pain.

"inhe kya hua?"

"Jai Hind sir. Tope chala rahe hai chuhe. Chup kar waar kar rahe hai wo log."

Arjun bent down to examine them. They all were heavily injured, either by bullets or mines. Blood was oozing out of their bodies.

Arjun immediately unpacked his bag and took out few bandages.

"sergeant, mere paas itne bandages hai. Un wounds ko temporarily wrap karo jis se blood zyada beh raha hai. We cant let anything happen to them.

Inlogon ki jaan hamare liye bohut keemti hai, bullets nikaalne ki koshish karo"

He pressed button in microphone

"sam, tere paas extra bandages hai? We need it.bohut log injured hai iss taraf. Extra yahan kisi ke haathon bhej..."

"I have extra rolls. Mere bag mein jitna bhi hai main bhej raha hun Rj."

"tere liye?"

"mera chod. Filhaal ye unke liye chahiye. Istemaal karle. Over n out"

"chandrakant, wo kitne log hai?" Arjun asked while wrapping bandages.

"sir wo kareeb pacchees log hai. Aur hamari toli mein se already 20 log ghayal hai."

"Shreekant kahan hai?"

"pata nahin sir. Usse baat nahin ho paa rahi hai hamara"

Few meters away from them...

A young sergeant was trying hard to bring down the men who were attacking them hiding behind trees.

He did not want his fellow members get hurt.

"maa... mujhe nahin pata ki aaj mera kya hoga. Mere watan ko meri zaroorat hai, aur mein uske liye kurbaan hone ke liye taiyaar hoon."

He saw that their enemy had a clear upper hand with an advantage that they knew about the area well. He had to divert their attention. He pulled out his gun and started firing at the direction from where bullets flew at them.

He ran across the clearing area continuously firing, ignoring all calls from his fellow army men. He fell down when first bullet hit his arm. With difficulty he stood and started moving, firing again

"ab...tumhare...hawale watan saathiyo"

he fell down again with second bullet.

He could see his friend crawling towards him.

"jai, no...please go away. They are trying to catch me. Just go and attack them..."

"no Shree... you ll need help. Main tumhare saath hun. Lt ko batana padega"

He immediately called his seniors.

Here Arjun- sameer heard a voice in their microphone, panic stricken. They had to strain a lot to hear it.

"sir.. sergeant Shreekant yahan buri haalat mein hai. Do goli lagi hai unhe. Apne saathiyon ko bachana ke liye unhone khud ko as distraction use kiya hai.

Sir bohut khoon beh raha hai, aur hamare saathi unlogon ko tackle kar rahe hai. mere paas utne bandages bhi nahin hai sir jis se main blood flow rok sakun"

"main aa raha hun. Officer chandrakant, you take care here. Main wahan jaa raha hun."

He had to crawl all the way and move towards Shreekant. Arjun shot two on his way and quickly removed bullets, cleansed the wounds and started wrapping bandages which could clot blood temporarily.

"tumhara dimaag kharab ho gaya hai kya? You thought of making yourself their bait?? Are you insane? Mar jaate to?" his anger was increasing.

Shree faintly smiled.

"sir, hum yahan humare liye nahin hai naa. Dusron ke liye hai. Iss watan ke liye. Agar main mere logon ko, mere doston ko, mere desh ko bachate waqt mar bhi jau to koi baat nahin. Yahin to hum seekhte hai na sir, issi ka oath lete hai hum... bas unlogon ki jeet kabhi nahin hini chahiye sir..nahiin honi chahiye"

Arjun smiled. The person in front of him was really daredevil. Desh ke liye mar mitna, burai ko khatm karne ki chah uske dill mein koot koot ke bhara hai...

But looking at his condition, he felt his anger rise against those leeches.

"you, Shreekant ko kahin safe jagah le jao. If possible, bakiyon ko leke ferry use karke paar karao. Paramedics uss taraf hai."

"nahin sir, main kahin nahin jaunga. Yahin rehkar aapki help karunga"

"paagal mat bano Shree. Yahan sirf baat tumhari nahin hai. Tumhe bhi hame cover karna padega and that ll cost others life. Aur agar tum pakde gaye to... no. as senior I ll not permit that. You are going back"

He saw few bullets flying at some distance and his anger knew no bounds.

"dammit!!! Sam!! Can you hear me. Main yahan se open daawa bol raha hun. You ll enter stealthily. By the time I enter the village, be there with few men. Over and out"

"ghayalon ko cover karo tum dono. Chandrakant, ab open daawa bolna hi padega. Hume kuch hojaye to bhi hamare saathi ander jaa sakte hai. Unn logon ko divert karna hi hoga. Ready ho sab?!"

sah chuke hain sitam ham bahut ghair ke
ab karenge harek waar kaa saamnaa
sah chuke hain sitam ham bahut ghair ke
ab karenge harek waar kaa saamnaa
jhuk sakegaa na ab sarfaroshon ka sar
chaahe ho khooni talwar ka saamnaa
chaahe ho khooni talwar ka saamnaa

sar pe baandhe kafan
ham to hanste huye
maut ko bhi gale se lagaa jaayenge
ai watan ai watan

Bullets started cutting the silence of night.

The valley which always witnessed beautiful ladies singing, blooming flowers, playing children playing carelessly, was now witnessing the flying bullets, spluttering blood and falling bodies.

Arjun was ahead of the team, leading them towards the village, killing almost everyone who came infront of them. When they reached the outskirts of village, they had killed almost everyone.

"sir, sab ko to hum ne maar hi diya hai na? ab hame Rathod sir ka wait karna hoga right...?"

"haan chandrakant. Wait to karna hi hoga"

"sir chotu"

"huh??!!" Arjun was confused.

"aap mujhe chotu bula sakte ho. Sab mujhe chotu hi bulate hai"

"tum aur chotu??!!!! Hahaha... tum to kahin se bhi chotu nahin lagte" Arjun giggled.

"haan sir pata hai. But kya karun? Chandrakant patil itna bada naam hai na? to sab chotu bulate hai mujhe"

"thik hai chotu. Magar mujhe kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai.. kuch to choot raha hai. Par kya?"

Suddenly he saw movement in near by bushes and saw two shadows.

He gestured chotu to follow him and went towards the bushes.

He drew his gun out and pulled out a man.

he pushed his gun in his mouth and spoke in gritted teeth.

"bol. Kitne aadmi hai tumhare saath? Warna tere khopdi se brain goli ke saath baahar aa jayega. Samjhe ya...samjhau?"

Suddenly, a bullet pierced arjun's left arm.

"aaahhh"

"Sir!!!"

"Rj"

The person in Arjun's clutches tried to run.

Immediately Arjun shot his leg and turned around and shot another person dead.

He crouched infront of injured and pulled his hair.

"bata de gaon mein kitne log hai tumhare saathi. Tu ne abhi dekha mujhe maarne main koi jhijhak nahin hoti. Wo kya hai na? agar watan ke liye main goli kha sakta hun to khila bhi sakta hun. Bata de warna?"

The terrorist cowered infront of Arjun. It was not daily affair for him to encounter a fiery looking Arjun. Blood trickling down his arms and was falling on ground, yet his left hand was quiet firm in holding him down.

He gulped hard and yelped when Arjun slapped him.

"hum, ander kareeb 30 log hai"

"chotu,tela tikde gheun ja... naytar me tela marun takin(chotu, take him away...or else i will kill him)"

~~~

Chotu took him away

"main thik hun sam. Ab ander chale?"

By then sameer and his men had reached them and sam was worried about Arjun.

"haan. Lekin uss body builder ko to aane do. Maine dono troop se kuch logon ko chuna hai. Humare ander jaane ke theek half n hour baad baaki log ander aayenge. Waise wo sergeant kaisa hai ab? Aur wo baaki soldiers? Bandages kam pade honge na??"

"fine. And wo Shreekant theek hai. Ek dum ziddi hai. Waapas jaane ke liye taiyaar hi nahin tha. Bandages to kam the par temporary chalgaya. Maine un logon ko uss taraf jaane ke liye keh diya hai.ab to bus un gaon waalon ko baahar nikaal na hai hame"


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ll be continued soon...
likes and comments please😊


PS: i am not very good at Marathi. i have pestered my sis
via sms to give me marathi translations to those dialogues. agar kuch galti hui hai to please mujhe maaf kardo😕
Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awsm it was pari!!
tum bahut acha likhti ho...superb yaar..
lost it wala part...oho!! he's really mad!!
shree...mmwaah...lv u baby!!
chalo..so ab finally sab andar jaynge!!👏
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

awsm it was pari!!

tum bahut acha likhti ho...superb yaar..
lost it wala part...oho!! he's really mad!!
shree...mmwaah...lv u baby!!
chalo..so ab finally sab andar jaynge!!👏
update soon..


thank you😊😊
n RJ😉😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aap bhut acha likhti ho
love it
shree arjun sam n all oyhers best
continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Seenavas:thank you😊

@Arjunkibehen:thanks behna😊😊

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...amanvirdi...:thank you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hatts off to u
U make me speechless then wht I write huh?
Hehe
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