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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ...amanvirdi...

awesome dear
continue soon
is it ariya or arni?????


thank dear for liking it...will continue soon...
It will be Arni comes ArIya...ArNi just on flashback...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: dmegha

Nice start..

Thanks for the Pm.
Continue soon.

thanks dear..will continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Back with a first update of this FF..hope you all liked it..hope it's not too late dear

Chapter 1

Mean time 5.30pm

Taxi driver called the girl who was sitting in his taxi from last five minutes after her journey..

Driver: Madam..madam hum pohoch gaye'utrenge nehi aap??ya kahi aur jana hain apko??

Girl come back from her flashback..

Girl: we reached!!??!!

Driver: haa madamjii'

Ladki driver ko paisa deke taxi se apna saman leke utar jati hain'

Mumbai'

Hotel Sunshine' ke saamne khari hain wo ladki'.

Ladki hotel ke andar jate jate maan hi maan finally I reached Mumbai ..come back to my homeland'come back to my city..to my home..to my family'Apno ki sheher..apne pehchan ki nagri'meri yaadon ki taasveer'.Paar apne ghar main nehi..eha iss hotel main'but I make sure dii I convince Mom and Dad..i know they loves me a lot'Appse jitna pyar karte hain utna toh nehi paar usse jiyada kaam bhi nehi'aur pher aap hain naa mere saath'main janti hoo app mera saath jarur denge jaise uss din diya tha apne'jaise hamesha deti thi..denge na diii!!!!!!!ek baar appse mulakat toh hoo'ekbaar apki sasural ki address toh miljaye mujhey..sidha apki sasural aa jayungiii'aur aapki patise I mean mere jijuse apke bohot shikayat karungi'wo mere baat sunenge na???

Eye saab sochte sochte ladki hotel ki front desk main Receptionist ke samne ake khari hoo jati hain'aur eye dekh Receptionist: How can I help you mam'

Girl come back to scene and tells her that she was booked a room for her'

Receptionist : Apka naam??let me check..

Girl: Riya Mukharjee

Receptionist: Room number 605..on 5th floor'lift se sidhe jake right main'and this is your Room key'.main boy ko dekar apki saman poucha deti hoon'.

Riya: okey..

6.00pm

ETF Office

Rathore in his cabin and gets a call from Commissioner Cohelo..

Rathore: Hello sir'

Com: Rathore I have news for you and your team'.

Rathore: yes sir'

Com: Recently I appoint two new officer for ETF'.unmain se ek kaal se ETF join kar rahi hain??

Rathore: New Officer!! Paar naye officer ki jarurat toh nehi tha'

Com: I know Rathore team main shayed naye officer ki koyi jarurat nehi..aur main eye bhi jaanti hoo workload kitna hain phir desh main baarte huye crime'isiliye eye officers ko appoint kiya hain maine' trust me she is the best'both are best'.i always choose best for ETF'they are well trained and perfect for ETF'..

Rathore: She??Female officer!! Wo bhi do do??

Com:No no one male and one female officer..but female officer join ETF tomorrow..

Rathore: Aur Male officer!!

Com: He need some more days'After one week'

Rathore: okey sir'

Com: I will send you their details [their qualification]'hope your team cooperate with them'

Rathore: sure Sir'jai hind'

Com: jai hind'.

And in Conference hall

Chotu:are baapre ajj kitana file hain yrrr..paper work mujhey bilkul nehi pasand'

Shree: wo hum saab jaante hain ki tujhey pepar nehi papar work pasand hain kyun Sakshi???

Sakshi gives him a agreeable look...And tell ismain puchne ki koyii baat hii nehi'.hain na Aiesha!!

Aiesha: Haan puch na toh nehi hain'paar pasand ho ya na hoo kaam toh khatam karna hii paregiii'after all it's a part of our duty'

Aur aise main office main ek file leke Police uniform main ek constable ate hain aur usse dekh'

Aiesha: dekhmukh..tum eha??

Deshmukh: Wo commissioner sir ne bheja hain..eye file dene'

Shree: file!!koyi nayii case hain kiya??

Deshmukh: wo nehi pata sir??

Sakshi: file doo..dekhti hoo'

Tabhi uha koyi ate hain aur bolta hain..aur pichese puchta hain tum eha deshmukh??

Deshmukh piche moorke uss insaan ko dekh wo Sir eye fil dena tha'

Wo insane: kaisa file??

Sakshi: Arjun hum wo hi puch rahe the'

Arjun wo file lene ke liye age baarte hain aur tabhi Rathore conference room main ate hain aur Deshmukh ko dekh bolte hain aa gayi tum dekshmukh..do file mujhey'

Deshmukh file Rathore ko dete hain aur bolte Assa Sir main chalta hoo..

Rathore file kholke dekhte huye use jane ko ishara karte hain..

Rathore file kholte hi pehla naam Riya Mukharjee'

From Research department of WPC-World police Community..well trained officer ..capable to join any force of world..gained success a lot in prev. yrrs '.

Wo aur bhi check karne lagte hain tabhi Aiesha: Sir koyii case hain'

Rathore look at her'

Aiesha apni ache dusre taraf kar lete hain..pher Rathore ghumke sabke taraf dekhte hain..

Arjun: kiya baat hain??

Rathore: Koyi case nehi aya'eye file hamare team ko join karne wali naye officer ka hain'

Chotu: Naye Officer!!!

Sakshi: wow that grate..koun hain wo'kaab aa raha hain???

Rathore: kaal join kar rahi hain'

Aiesha thora shocked hoke chillake: Join kar rahi hain..Female officer hain Sir?

Rathore: koyii problem hain Female officer se..Tum bhi female hii hoo'

Aiesha : nehi mujhey kiya problem hogi Sir..main toh baas isliye puch rahi thi ki '

Arjun Aiesha ko bich main rok: Paar mujhey problem hain'kiya hain eye har ek din naye naye officer..wo bhi female'ek toh hamara kaam bohot dangerous'uparse team main already teen teen female officer hain..abb chouthi ki kiya jarurat'

Rathore: jarurat hamara nehi..desh ki hain'Comissioner Sir ko lagta hain hamare team main workload jiyada hain..aur desh main barta huya crime unone eye officers ko appoint kiya''.

Arjun: work load kamega nehi ulta baad jayega' Aur eye officer jo join kar raha hain well trained toh hain na...ya pher humain hii trained karna padega!!! and give a angry and irritate look to Sakshi'

Rathore:Ohh come on Arjun..kiya problem hain...Sirf ek female officer hi join nehi kar rahi hain..Ek ACP bhi next week join kar raha hain'.aur dono eye Team join karne ke liye capable hain'Comisioner Sir always choose best for ETF'

Abb chotu: paar sir ek officer ek hafte pehle aur dusra ek hafte baad..ek saath join kyun nehi karte dono..

Rathore gives him a shut up look and tell Chotu wo log dost toh nehi hain na..jo saath saath ayega'aur eha picnic manane to aa nehi raha duty karne aa rahii hain'Abb apna kaam khatam karoon aur ghar jao ajj iss paper work ke alava aur koyii kaam nehi'

Chotu,Shree,Aiesha: okey Sir

Sakshi: Sameer I have question..

Rathore uske taraf dekhke: bolo'

Sakshi: Acctually I wanna know about their Qualification..and their name??

Sakshi se eye Sun Arjun aur irritate hoo jate hain aur uhase chale jate hain'Rathore use jate huye dekh jorse bolta hain'.

Rathore: Riya Mukharjee'And ACP Arvind Khurana'.well trained officer from WPC'.

Aur eye kehke Rathore bhi Conference room se chale jate hain'aur uske jane ke baad Chotu bolta hamara team toh ilastic ki tarha barta jaa raha'Eksaath do do officer!!!

To Be Continued'..

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WPC-World police Community[mujhey nehi pata aise koyi association hota ya nehi paar ek government ke taraf se kuch ek ya do kabil officer's ko reward diya jata hain kahi baar aur sammanit karne ke liye eye certificate diya jata hain ki wo kisi bhi desh main kisibhi force main join karne ke liye capable hain].. _________________________________________________________________

And here i finished...hope you liked it...waiting for your most adorable feedback[your comments]...
Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Nice!!!!
So Riya is in Mumbai now..ohh it seems that she has some problems with her parents, and she wants to meet her di and jiju...
Riya and Arvind going to join ETF...
Chotu ko paper work pasand nahi😆
Ayesha not happy with a new female officer :P
And yeh Arjun bhi na, Riya k aane se pahele he usse problem hai and idhar giving irritated looks to Sakshi :P😆
ETF ko ilastic ki tarah stretch kar rahe hai😆
Lovely part, do contd soon :D
Edited by -BlazingWater- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
amazing update :) loved it
riya is in mumbai now
seems like riya has got some problems with her parents
awww chotu doesn't like to do paper work 😆
wow so riya is joining ETF
loved aisha's reaction on knowing that a female officer is coming
loved chotu's dialogue "hamara team toh ilastic ki tarha barta jaa raha" 🤣
can't wait to read more
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
di luv yhe update
ok is ROSHNI dead???
if I'm not wrong riya is ROSHNI's sister n she still doesn't know abut her death
baad mein acp arvingd aur riya ki prem kahani mat shuru krna
only ariya n sasha
luv irritated arjun n sameer
loved Ayesha's reaction
chotu'$ dialogue was awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice update
waiting for riya's entry
cont soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awesome update.
So riya is joning ETF.
Its an ariya story?
Please make ariya and sasha love story.
Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
nice part
so sakshi and ayesha are already in etf
ria dosent know that arjun is her jiju
and who is this new officer with ria
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
nice pm me when u update yaar

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