Unrequited Love - Ariya FF Part 5 Pg 10 & Chck 11

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

jus read awl updates in one go..
Dey were jus fantastic...
Lovd dem...
Eagrly waitng to knw da past nd how mystery unfolds.. I.e. Wht is da relation btw arjun , riya nd roshni??? Nd who is dat new charactr...
Continue soon :)

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

OMG...!! What an Update!! WOAH.. Their kiss was MAGIC!!

But then... ARGH!! ARJUN!!😡

Glad Riya came out..! She needed to!! Now Arjun will get what he lost..!😡

So Rosh is Rii's SIS!! Wow!!😲

How are Arni related if Ariya were married like That?! 😕

And who is Mr. Mysterious?!😉

LOVED it! Waiting...👏

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Incredible update dr.

Loved the way she confronted Arjun for hi behaviour towards their daughters n her.

Riya's emotional outpour was heart touching.

Wht was he talking about??????? Which responsibility she didn't fulfilled?????

She was broken after her outburst. Feel really bad for her.

Wht did she do to deserve tht kind of behaviour frm him??????

Loved the way he comforted her n in the spur of the moment kissed her too but in the nxt moment he bcme his usual self. Wht the!!!!!!!!

Wow Riya slapped him. He deserved that.

Loved the way Roshini talk to him him for his behaviour towards Riya.

Wow Riya leave the house with their daughters.

Loved the note.

FB part was amazing.

Thy r so much in love thn wht happened??????

How is he related to Roshini????????

Nw who is the new man???????

Is it Sameer or somebody else??????

There r so many ques dr.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

Continue soon.

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sharmaayushi

@sharmaayushi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

hey read all the parts together
loved it please continue soon
and please pm me too
eagerly waiting dear.

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Khushboo

@kaybee23

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Wow awesome update!

Finally Riya spoke up against Arjun!

Glad he realized how much he hurt his life and that he's trying to amend it now

Wonder who this new character is...love the way he was comforting her...wish Arjun was doing that

Can't wait to see who this new character is and how the story moves forward! :)

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part dr.

Continue soon.

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

OMG i read last chapter

i never fail to miss d story of urs

dis s going interesting

So Ria finally left him

i m seriously luking fwd to Arjun's relation with Roshni n Ria

i used to think dat he loved rosh n den after she died , for the little angel sake he married Ria

but after reading last chapter ...my thots changed

he loved Ria

i m confused rite now

n i m waiting to know wat d story has for me in d next update

n who is d guy in last chapter

waiting for more

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benaz

@benaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Totally enjoyed this FF of yours. Can't wait for the mystery to further unfold and with the new character things look more interesting.

Update soon :)

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Kainat

@callmemaybe...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

hey samaira

i really love this story of yours

everything you wrote till now is just beautiful

you are a very good writer i must say

arjun and riya's both daughters are super cuties :)

i really hope everything between arjun and riya becomes fine soon

please update soon

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Krinal

@MissC

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Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Just read all the parts from part 3 and all of them are absolutely amazing!
The story's getting really interesting!
Please make everything alright between Arjun and Riya, and please don't say that Riya had a past or something like that.
Update soon 😊