Unrequited Love - Ariya FF Part 5 Pg 10 & Chck 11 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Lovely part..Aroush and Ariya are adorable...
Waiting to why is Arjun-Riya's relationship so strained...
do contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hi,
I'm Anu.I really wanna thank you for writing this story.
I like your writing skills and read all three parts in one go!! Really commendable work buddy..
I love Arjun and riya couple a lot and as I'v missed watching them on screen together cause I was not following Arjun when Riya was there I love to read ffs about them.Thanks alot for giving us this...!!
would love to read more soon.🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Wow dear this is so much touched


I love it

Today read it one go...

And I say fabulas work


Hey just add me in ur pm list


I really want to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Very nice dear !!
But what had happend in the past ...
And also what is the problem between Ariya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
very beautifully written

lovely chapter

really liked Arjun 's bonding with the kids

n ria with kids wwas perfect

now i have to put my questions: wat actually happened? y is arjun so indifferent towards all of dem??

want to know all the stuff

waiting for future parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Part 4

A beautiful sunset that was mistaken for dawn...!

Toot Kar Chahna Zaroori Hain

Pyaar Mein Inteha Zaroori Hain

Hum Toh Dariya Ke Do Kinare Hain

Darmiyaan Faasla Zaroori Hain

Yeh Kadi Shart Hain Mohabbat Ki

Bewafa Se Wafa Zaroori Hain...

The ETF team was in their office solving the case... Riya was updated by it thanks to Shree... And she was always there to give any info... Though she wasnt a big part of the team, yet there were people who couldnt function without her...!

Riya made some snacks for the kids and kept some fresh strawberries as both her daughters loved strawberries... And ofcourse, she was dealing with not 2 but 3 kids...

It was Ayush Khaterpal... The new enterant in ETF.. In a short time, he managed to make a place in everyone's heart.. He was exactly like Shree... Like both were carbon copies... The team often wondered if they were "kumbh ke mele ke bichde hue bhai.."

Ayush was sprawled on the sofa set with a lappy and huge headphones in his ears.. .Riya turned around to see Aroush and Ariya busy staring at the tv screen watching cartoons...

Riya sighed and after laying the table, she went to call out to Ayush and her kids... But all of them were soo busy..

"Rii, Ahhh kya huaa..?"

"Ayush, chalo utho... Maine kachori banayi hain tere liye... "

Removing the headphones from his neck, Ayush sat upright coz Riya pinched him on his arm...

"Mere liye Ri.."

He asked blinking his eyes...

She hit him on the shoulder... "Dramebaaz..."

Before Riya and Ayush could come to the dining hall, Shree was sitting eating a plate full of Kachoris... Riya wasnt suprised to see him here.. These gadget freaks had lock systems which only they knew how to operate allowing them to enter all the team member's house...

Ayush jumped on Shree literally snatching the plate.. Inspite of the fact that there were still many kachoris in the dish, Ayush had to grab Shree's plate...

Shaking her head, Riya went taking some strawberries in a bowl for Aroush and Ariya...

Takin them on her lap, She made them eat while they were busy watching Tom and Jerry...

After feeding them she got up too see the dish clean... Ayush and Shree had eaten it all...

"Mere liye kuch nahi rakha tum dono ne...??""

"Awww Rii baby, shoorryy.. Bol tujhe kya chahiye hum layenge..."

"Tum dono baahar jaake laoge..?"

Riya asked staring at them knowing well neither of them would get up for a few hourse till Arjun returned... Ofcourse Arjun's phone gave them his location...

"Nahi, nahi mera matlab home delivery..." spoke Shree...

"Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.. First clean this mess..."

"Oye meri hygeine freaak, pizza khayenga naa please..."

Riya was feeling hungry and wanted to be with her friends so she obliged.. .And her friends being bhukkads of the century ordered 3 large size pizzas with 2 bottles of coke ... It was delivered in 15 mins and all three of them sat down to eat... Riya took two slices and kept the plate before Aroush and Ariya... She wanted them to eat by themself... But NO.. Stubborn Rawte kids...

"Muummaa dedoo naa "

Aroush made a pouty face while Ariya opened her mouth, which Riya couldnt ignore... Both had mastered the act of puppy dog faces which could melt anyone...

Ayush and Shree got the pizza boxes and all of them sat infront of the tv feeding each other and the kids..

"Cheee" they would call out to Shree

and

"Ayi" was for Ayush...

Ayush made Aroush sit on his lap while Ariya was sitting on Shree's lap... They didnt realise that it was almost 8 PM.. Sitting and watching Tom and Jerry with the kids, playing with them, time passed in a jiffy...

Suddenly the door bell rang, making Shree and Ayush jump... Ayush stared at Shree... Riya looked at them asking them who it was... Shree hurriedly checked the phone to see Arjun Rawte's phone nearby... He whispered to Ayush "Arjun Sir" .. Riya immediately stood up to open the door... Ayush and Shree Picked Aroush and Ariya in their arms and were runnin upsatirs...

Aroush and Ariya were giggling away to glory seeing Chee and Ayi running so fast ... They thought Ayiii and Chee were playing...

Arjun entered the house... Lookin at Riya who was heaving like she ran.. He was about to ask Kya Hua but stopped himself in time... He looked around for Aroush and Ariya.. Riya answered his question "Woh oopar hain.." He nodded his head and without sparing her another glance he went to his room to freshen up...

Riya stared at his retreating back then left to lay dinner for everyone... They had pizza but playing with Aroush and Ariya, pizza was long digested.. And then it was Ayush and Shree - jitna do khalenge thought Riya...

Arjun came out and sat on the table.. .He was waiting for Aroush and Ariya to come downstairs.. But they didnt know that he was here... Riya saw Arjun seated..

"Angel Princess Ayi Cheee all come down.. Dekho Papa aagaye..."

Shree and Ayush cursed Riya for calling them.. They were planning on sneaking from the terrace... They came like thieves slowly holding Aroush and Ariya. Almost hiding behind them...

Shree poked Ayush ...

"Abey Ayush itna kyun dar raha hain... Hum hamare bestie ke ghar par hain..."

"Main kyun darunga Shree...Main Main toh..."

Shree stopped and gulped as Arjun stared hard at him... Arjun stared coz these two didnt even realise Aroush and Ariya struggling to go downstairs...

Aroush and Ariya screamed loudly ... Which made both of them shut their mouths for a minute...

Shree elbowed Ayush who spoke loud...

"Aroush Ariya dekho papa aaye hain..."

They stared at Ayii and Chee as if sayin "we know that... You are scared... Not us..."

Ayush and Shree looked at each other... Definately Arjun Rawte's kids... No need of a DNA test... Freein themselves for Ayush and Shree they ran dowmstairs screamind Papa Papa...

Riya smiled lookin at her friends... Arjun toh Arjun ab toh bachche se bhi darne lage the yeh donoo...!!

Arjun kissed them and made them sit on the dining table... Riya indicated Shree n Ayush to come downstairs... They came and sat at the other end of the dining table.. Maintaining a far distance from Arjun... Smiling inwardly she placed the dishes on the table... Seein the yummy dinner both Ayush and Shree's mouth started watering and they forgot all about somebody called Arjun Rawte...

Riya came closer to serve Arjun but he stopped her with his hand... Turnin her face away she served Aroush and Ariya and sat beside to feed them... Ayush asked her to eat but she refused makin an excuse of feeding her kids...

Aroush and Ariya didnt ask Arjun but silently ate and laughed when their dad stared at Ayi and Chee who were droppin food everyehere... Both the husband and wife were glarin at Shree n Ayush for messin the table... They stopped for a milli second but carried on...

Soon Arjun finished his dinner and Aroush n Ariya too finished so they followed Arjun... Tryin to spend time with him..!

Shree and Ayush finished their dinner and wanted to leave since Arjun was at home... Rathore also called them askin them to get some info on the case... Aroush and Ariya were upstairs so they found it the best time to leave... They didnt want to step into the lion's den.. Bhalayi isi mein thi ki khamoshi se satak jao... And they did exactly that...

Before that they made Riya sit and eat... They noticed she ate from the same plate as Arjun did without even washing it.. They smiled at the love Riya had for Arjun but Arjuns behabiour made them wipe the grins off their face... Holding Riyas hand they tried to support... She smiled at them meanin she was fine... Only they knew how much fine she was... How much was hidden behind that dimpled smile... As Riya finished dinner they left kissing her on her cheeks...

She closed the door and immefiately got to cleaning business... Just as she was done, a cryin sound from upstairs floated around... She rushed upstairs to see Arjun sitttng with his laptop and Aroush and Ariya sitting infront of him crying trying to gain his attention... She looked at Arjun who seemed unaffected .. Frantic with worry she came closer to them askin them what happened...

"Kya hua babyyy..."

"Angel Princess bolo na mumma ko kya hua..."

She asked holdin them closer... In the affectionate arms of their mother they calmed down... She turned towards Arjun for an explanation...

" Riya mujhe ek important case hain... Inhe le jao..."

Riya wanted to reply back but bcoz of the kids she simple turned on her heel and left... Arjun was busy with some thinkin, pen rotating and typin away somethin on his lappy...

Arjun Rawte could provide his kids with everythin in this world except his time... He couldnt give that ... Not because he was busy. For reasons only he knew...!

Riya calmed both of them and played with them... She tickled them, had pillow fights with them til they were tired... Carryin them to bed, she put them to sleep... While narrating a story, Aroush asked her inmocently "Mummma , papa kitnnaaa kaam kalte hainn na.."

Ariya also turned towards Riya for an answer...

"Haan princess angel, papa polish main hain na ishliye. .."

She answered.. What else could she tell them... Soon they drifted off to sleep... A lone dried tear on Ariya's cheek angered Riya to no extent... Her patience was lost... The limit was crossed...

She would bear it if she was ignored but her kids... It was a normal routine for Arjun but usually Ariya Aroush didnt ask much of his attention.. They were happy with the little affection he showered on them... Riya realised that her kids were growin up and they needed their father with them... What use of stayin together and bearing all these when what she wanted was.not granted... She could as well stay separate..

She looked around and tears flew from her eyes .. She wanted to provide everythin to Aroush and Ariya... She looked at the huge portrait of him and the kids when he was holdin them in his arms.. Shree had clicked this picture... She thanked Shree for the candid images... Her patience had reached the limit... It was time for confrontation... She had enough...

"Har cheez ki had hoti hain Arjun... And aapne woh had paar kardi..."

She spoke to herself and takin one last glance at her babies, she left the room...

Arjun had closed the laptop... His concentration on the case long gone... The moment he turned away from Aroush and Ariya, he was restless... He knew he hurt them and hurt Riya as well ... He looked around for his daily cuttin chai but it was no where...

Supporting his head from behind he laid on the recliner... Silence all around... A minunte later, the door banged open... He thought Riya had come to keep the chai in the balcony... But no she was simply staring ... He could feel her gaze on him... His eyes flew open...

Riya's tear stained face and angry red eyes came into view... Her nostrils flared... He knew that she was here for answers... He cursed himself... Standing up he looked at her with a questioning gaze...

Riya came forward...

"Why" she asked in a firm voice audible to both...

Hhe silently turned his back at her...

This angered her more...

"WHY.." she screamed...


Note - Guyz.. I know i havent been updating... Wedding season in my family.. The next part will be posted on Sunday.. Forgive me for typos... Updated in a hurry.. PM's in the morning... Sorry Once Again.. Share ua comments ..

Love

Sara

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
that was such an amazing update :) loved it
oh so riya isn't that big part of the team
awww little angels love strawberries :)
shree and ayush are just like twinsies :)
ayush is such a cutie :) god i love him since KS days <3
god shree and ayush all the kachories and didn't even offer riya 😆
kids are just like arjun :)
both angels are super cute :)
awww kids call shree cheee and ayush ayi <3
shree and ayush ran upstairs knowing arjun came back home 😆
awww riya calls kids angel and princess :)
shree and ayush are really so scared of arjun 😆
dinner scenes were lovely
how sweet riya ate from the same place as arjun :)
ayush and shree really understands riya so much :)
feel really so bad for riya :( she is trying so hard to show that she is fine :(
omg cant believe arjun was ignoring kids like that :( like come on arjun your daughters are crying just to gain your attention and you aren't even saying anything
why is arjun behaving so rudely with riya and kids?
glad that riya finally decided to confront arjun
can't wait to read more
please continue soon


Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Why??? even i want to ask the same thing why is he being like this????? Trio moments with kids was nice... Poor Riya she is acting as if everythng is ok... Awesome update... continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
woow riya with kids were amazaing..

arjun behavoiur confusing
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Why?????
I also want to ask Arjun,"Why?"
Why is he behaving harshly and rudely with Riya and the kids?
She needs an answer and she will get it...
Aaayiii and Chee moments with Aroush and Ariya were too good...
Ayush and Shree understands Riya a lot.
Yeh Arjun ka dimag satak chuka hai?
Jab Riya and the kids Arjun se dur chale jayenge,tab un teeno ki ehmiyat samajh aayegi...
Riya couldnt see tears in her kids' eyes'.
She can get herself ignored,but,cant tolerate her kids' to get ignored.
Riya,girl.
I m with u.
Jao...
Arjun ko uske bhasha mein acchi tarha se samjhao.

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