Unrequited Love - Ariya FF Part 5 Pg 10 & Chck 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Dear!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it!!! Nyc start... Waiting for more!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice story , i love this,
Ariya's are already married wow.
great, continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey... so sorry for the late comment...
awsum start...
omg so much distance between them?? but why??
awww they are parents of two children... cute...
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update dr.

ariya r already married n hv 2 kids.

thn wht happened btwn ariya?

why their marriage is only for name sake?

why arjun blamed her for all his miseries?

wht r those miseries?

there is lot of confusion.

please clear ths confusion through ur updates.

continue soon.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hola guyz... Here is me with another part... I hope you like it.. There is a lot more confusion here... The mystery will be reveled to in the parts to come.. .Enjoy... Do share your precious comments... All of those who want a PM please send me a buddy request and like the next post... 😊


Part 2


Zindagi Guzar Rahi Hay Imtehano Ke Daur Se...

Ek Zakham Bharta Nahi Doosra Tayar Milta Hain...

A guy wearing a loose shirt and track pants stood on the balcony his hands resting on the railing... The stars twinkling.. The moon shining in the sky.. Just like their routine it was his routine to stand here for more than half of the night.. Well, this change was since a few years.. Sometimes she used to call him back to bed but then he jerked her away.. As much as she started comin closer, he used to push her away.. Until she changed the room. It was better atleast his heart didnt hurt seeing her crying away to sleep.. He knew she cried herself but he wasnt a silent spectator to it anymore.. She would weep in the confines of her room, surrounded by her pillows yet she could calm herself down when needed by the two angels beside her. .And here he was alone. No, he didnt blame her for everything.. But something pulled him back...

ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte as he is known.. The one person whose name was enough to create fear in the hearts of people.. The one person whose anger made people shiver.. .Rather pee in their pants... No, he wasnt a ghost but a very powerful person. .A very hardworking and honest police officer. He did not need to wear uniform or stars.. He himself was the brightest shining star in the whole department.. People saluted him for his passion towards his job.. It wasnt just a job for him.. It was his duty to punish the criminals... To seek justice for the poor.. He was a messiah for the oppressed.. And she came as a messiah in his life.. Yet, he failed to keep her happy.. To appreciate her efforts in keeping this marriage work... In her efforts to make this place a home.. And to keep his children away from all these... She had managed everything on her own.. H never tried to appreciate it.. Never supported her... She faced it all with a smile... Was it mandatory for her? Or did she do all this for him?? He never understood...

He turned around to find a thermos with his favorite cutting chai and a small glass.. As much he screamed at her, showed her his famous glares, she wouldnt budge.. Never.. Everyday since she came into his life right from the wedding night til today, this would be waiting for him.. His night chai. It would be the same cutting chai... Everynight.. Exactly as how he loved it.. He took the glass and sat on the chair staring into space reminicsing his past moments.. He was jerked by the loud thundering of the sky,. The sky was roaring with all its might.. Arjun immediately turned around to see his angels...

As he neared their room, he realised that she was with them and she would take care.. Yet he felt the need to see them once.. He knew they were scared of thunders... He gently opened the door to their room to find them close asleep in her arms.. As she had one of them on her and the other one snuggling into her.. They didnt need him.. She completely took care of them.. Where was his space in there?? While leaving he saw her sand dangling freely almost about to fall.. He went near her gently put it around the little one.. He went to the other side of the bed, pulled the comforter, completely covering them..

While leaving he felt a tug at his hand only to find his little one holding his hand pulling him... He smiled at him.. Came closer only for a moment, gently untangled his own hand and was about to leave when something caught his attention... His baby was rolling.. Without second thoughts he sprinted across the room holding the kid safely in his arms... After ensuring that his baby was safe he turned his gaze to find his wife in deep sleep with the little angel on top of her making her slightly difficult to sleep.. His always active mind started to ponder on how could the kid roll?? Did she push him on purpose to gain his attention?? A few months back such a behaviour would be expected from her, but now ?? His mind had a doubt.. He went near her to find her shallow breathing thus confirming that she was deep asleep...

He went closer, lifted a pillow to keep it behind the other kid... Closing the door behind him, he left for his chambers...

It took all the energy in her to escape the sharp eyes of her husband.. Yes, she had pushed her baby so that he comes near to them for a while.. He had come as a messiah and left as soon as his work was done.. It hurt her to see that he didnt even take one of them closer to himself.. She was at fault, he was punishing her but why these innocent kids. They already had seen so much.. In a mere age of 3 years and he acted as if he didnt give a damn.. Yea right.. She knew better..

He could not care about her but his own kids?? His flesh and blood? He just couldnt let them on Riya's shoulder.. They needed him too... Riya heaved a sigh of relief and looked at the time.. 2 more hours for her body to start working again.. She kissed her angel's face.. Had it not been for them she would have given up living...

The clock ticked away and the night slowly passed away.. Sun shown bright.. Riya stretched herself out of her bed.. Her babies lay their in deep sleep unaware of the surroundings.. She smiled, kissed them and kept them close to her heart for a while.. Then Mrs. Riya Rawte was back in action... She freshened up, changed her clothes and went to his room.. His room was spick and span and she opened his closet.. Removing a shirt and pants for him.. He never wore the dress she selected but she waited patiently for the day he would do so... She went to the attached balcony and on finding the cup lying she picked it up.. She could see his lip marks.. She picked up the glass and left for the kitchen.. Preparing breakfast and chai for herself.. She took the chai in the same glass he drank, from the same place.. Her day started with a sip of his cutting chai from his glass and she would refrain from eating if she didnt get to drink from his cup or eat from his plate.

Unknown to him, she had started drinking from his cups, eating from his plate and sometimes wearing his clothes at night.. These nights she made sure the door was locked so he wasnt allowed to enter.. He invaded her thoughts every day and night...

Lekin Yaad Kaise Aaoge Arjun Aap??Yaad to unhe kiya jaata hain jinhe bhool jaate hain hum...



Edited by Samaira32 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*Unres*

Aah...
Finally,updated after a very long time...
Aww...
Feeling really bad for Riya...
Riya ka dard is very well expressed here..
Riya pushed the baby,so that,Arjun can notice them,for a while...
This gesture was kinda risky,but,effective.
Hope,her unrequited love will be requited.
Thanks for the update.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah!!! Brilliant Update!! Arjun loved them... But then, Y the distance?

RIYA!! U pushed the baby? What if he fell?? It was kinda stupid!! Even if it was to grab Arjun's Attention!!!!

Waiting 4 more!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

Woah!!! Brilliant Update!! Arjun loved them... But then, Y the distance?


RIYA!! U pushed the baby? What if he fell?? It was kinda stupid!! Even if it was to grab Arjun's Attention!!!!

Waiting 4 more!!!!


I know.. She trusted Arjun plus Arjun Rawte ka ghar carpeted the house... 😛

Arjun Rawte par bharosa kiya hain... Read further to know more...

Im sorry about that part but Riya needed to get his attention... Why?? Ill tell in the upcomign parts...

Thanks for ua comment... I hope u like the next parts...

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