||Arjun FF -The Dawn DISCONTINUED - Page 3

Originally posted by: Leki

Intresting start... continue soon

Originally posted by: Deepikz

Well written .. Do pm me when you update

Originally posted by: ehmmbh_luvr

i really really liked the concept that u have built😊...its really different n i like the idea of a new girl opposite arjun!

it was beautifully written n each n every character's emotions were really well described😊

I liked the significance that u gave to the girl's name n how she was called differently by arjun n rathod😊

Its super mysterious n thus would be waiting for more😃

I would love to read arjun's point of view too!

Lovely start...contonue soon😊

Originally posted by: haruhi26

Very interesting start Sia, i'm happy you didnt put Riya or Sakshi in this story, for obvious reasons😉

but now maybe your story will be much better received😳

Hoping for the down memory lane scenes, where Mau was with rathore, and he fell for Aisha and then how Arjun came between them, and of course why she ran away and is hiding😳

Please continue soon😳😉

But i have my BB with me na😉

Originally posted by: Seenavas

beautiful

something really fresh and interesting

waiting for the next one

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: rinku321

so beautifully written
continue soon

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Hey love it.. thx 4 PM..

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...

Congo for the new Story Sai di...

Amazing concept... Loved it...

Loved the update... Very nice and touching...

Update soon!!

Originally posted by: Arjunkibehen

WOW Sia dii.. Awesome start!!! Intense... LOVED IT!!!

Originally posted by: fatima15

amazing start :) loved it

awww so aisha and sam are married and they have a cute daughter :)

maushami is missing :(

and everyone is missing her so much

looking forward to read it

thanks for the pm

continue soon