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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Sorry Sambha.. Late hoon..

Not fair! Yeh cheating hai.. (Singham style..) Updated after so long aur aise rula ditta..
Isko filler bolte hain? (facepalm) Tumhari na definitions hi hili hui hain..
Jaoo.. Grammar teacher se kuch seekhkar aao.. 😛 🤣

Bechare mere Hotwa ko unn kambakhton ke haathon itna pitvaya?! 😲
And double wala damn it.. He knew she's alive?! 😲
Triple wala damn it! And he endured it all for her sake? 😭

Mujhe pata tha, aisa hi kuch hoga..

Holy Apple.. yeh karan kis khet ki raddish hai?! Make sure do chaar laath ghuse khilwa do isse Hotwa ke haathon.. 😡

Oh wait! Arjun ki Shama hi kaafi hai, iske liye, I guess.. 😎

I really felt for Ayesha, the most in this one.. 😭 Could soo totally relate to her frame of mind..

And tada ting! Hotwa #2/ Beast is here.. *drumrolls*

I'm confused as to which track I'm looking fwd to more.. Arjun-Shama or Aspirin-Beast... 🤔
Chalo.. Dono hi likh dena.. 😆 😎

Hope he's fine.. And gets to meet her once atleast..
Awaiting the next one eagerly..

Thode samay ke liye apni split personality ko side mein rakhiye and isse update kijiye monjolika.. 😛 🤣

Muah! 🤗

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

ohh!!

beautiful part sia di!!

wat?? arjun got himself trapped deliberately??

is he trying 2 find shama??!!

this karan..i find him fishy!!

and the update...

suupperrr fantastic!!

although there are still confusions!!..

but i will wait and not bother u asking 2 clarify..

because i know u will!!😆😆

sabr ka fal mitha hota hai nah!! hehe..

update soon!!

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

awesome update
Arjun is badly injured
n finally managed to reached to Shama
but putting himself in danger
Shama's faith in him that nothing would happen to him was nice
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Hum bahut confusiya gaye hai yaar
tere ee past ke past ke chakkar mein hann
btw d part u updated nw was the past na
if i m ri8,then i m in ri8 track.
Btw update soon bachua

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

Really sorry for late...

Awesome update...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Whoa..Arjun ko pitwa diya un logo ke hatoon..Not fair.
He knew that Sama was alive and did all that for her.
Liked her confidence, the way she told Karan that Arjun will be fine.Where did this Karan from?
The beast is back now.. :)
Brilliant update.
Continue Soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Finally, I comment..😛

Did I tell u I love u??😉

Arjun is near his Shama

and Beast returned to his Aspirin...

Finally!!!😃

Now, starts things getting clear...

I m waiting for more DS...

Jaldi Update karo!😉

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Woh that was an emotional roller coaster ride😭

but above all it was such a heart touching story, you are making us cry a lot...

Four persons, each have their own issues, each trying to live with what they believe to be good and best for the other, yet none having the courage to face their own feelings😭

Hmmm i was scared, that Arjun almost died😭

So meaning Arjun met Shama, but still he didnt manage to bring her back, while Sam is back and he has finally married Ayesha, given the start...

i wonder why Shama didnt return, didnt she love Arjun enough?

didnt Arjun manage to convince her of his love?

too many questions, and i have a feeling, you are going to make us cry a lot before they can ever meet😭

Finally caught up with all updates😉

It's brilliant Sia😳

Update soon😳

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

phew... finally... i'm commenting on this update 😳

Awesome update 👏

Arjun ... set out alone to find his Shama... he knew he left his Bee alone but hopes that Sameer will take care of her ... it was difficult for him to make choices ... but then he had to make one

And he fell in the trap ... was it accidental or he purposely fall into it in a hope to get to Shama?😳

They tortured him but their Chief wanted him to remain alive 😲 ... Does Chief know about his equation with Maushmi? 😕

Karan not being happy was understandable ... for him also he was just another policeman ...

Is this doctor group also associate of the Naxalite group?

Shama was to get the shock of lifetime ... it was not Sameer ... it was Arjun ...

The little flashback was so cute ... 😊

Karan enraged more ... sirf police wala hi nahi hai... Maushmi ka koi special bhi hai 😳

Aisha in deep trouble now... pehle Sameer and ab Arjun ... both left her alone

Yes... mujhe pehle hi laga tha ... he got himself captured deliberately 😉

But yes... it was risky ... though he went with complete research ... still he endangered his life 😳

some relationships are never understood by a third POV ... 😳 Nobody would know what OP and Bee meant for each other 😊

And here comes the beast ... 😉