||Arjun FF -The Dawn DISCONTINUED - Page 23

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

Awesome update but too short!

POV were brilliant...felt like i was travelling into their minds!

whats the new twist...Shama is dead??? i feel its gonna be a turning point in Sam and Aisha's life...or perhaps in Arjun's life too!

cont soon!

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth

i cnt thank u enough...

my all confusions are nw sorted out...all thnx to ur POV part...

it made all clear to me...

love this update nd spclly th POV part...

haww...3 of thm are going through sooo much pain...

i really feel bad for sameer...even for arjun...nd nt to forget for Maushami too...

i think Aisha will bring th positive changes in their lives...

continue soon

love
Aisha

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

oohhh!!!

the last part!!

i just hope its not true!!!

already dono ke bich tension hai...

matters will become worse!!!

beautiful part!!!

update soonn...

n lamba wala!!

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Read the whole story in one go and it's amazing ...😊😊😊
Update soon plzzz...😊😊😊

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Loved it
awesome
update soon

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_

Res..

Haila.. Do do.. 😲😲

Aaj chand aur suraj ek saath nikle hain kya, aapki Dilli mein?! 😆😉

Nahi ...mera mood aacha hai 😆😆

-Unres-

Ghor duvidha hai Behna..

Just lke each one of them, I too couldn't tag one as right and the other as wrong.. And for that, you deserve a pat on your back, my lady in Grey.. 😉 😳

Thanks my lady in red 🤗

Honestly.. Sam, Arjun and Shama's POV's were really very well written..

One loves her, but she's left him so he can find true love.. The other loves her, wants her but cannot have her and ditto on her part as well.. A fourth is unaware of the turmoil in their lives, of which she's already a part..

Maybe this is what they call destiny's blows!

Yes She is enterwined in there triangle and i guess she was always destined for it

Holy Apple! You did it?!! 😲

I thought you were kidding!

😈

But we know she's not dead coz she's present in the present.. 😛 (Unless of course, she's uparwali) 😆😆

No Uparwali ...cant make him romance a bhootini😆😆

Anyway.. Waiting and waiting to know what happens next.. Esp. Arjun and Sameer's reactions to the news..

Had she already informed them that she was going to do it? 😲

If not, I can only imagine the heart-wrenching pain of loss all around.. 😭

Yes ...no gain without any pain na😉

Please please and please update this one soon..

Kal toh chutti bhi hai na.. 'Kanhaiya Lal ke naam pe, ho jaaye ek update! 😉 🥳

Thanks for the PM..

P.S. Never be disheartened with lack of response, Sambha.. Coz trust me, this one's going down as yet another masterpiece on AF! 😉 🤗

Luv u Gabbar !!!🤗

Yours truly,

Gabbar! 😈

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Lovely one ...

like thr Pov's...

and Mau is dead????😭😭

so finally Ayesha is thr betwwen two... hpe she willl help to understnd them abt thr life..

Originally posted by: alee001

wat she is dead!!!!??????????

waitng for next update!!!

Originally posted by: kunchu

Grt update dear
it was a jhatka yaar
the povs were really grt
and shama dead was a shocker
and guessing Arjun n Sam reaction was imaginable