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kunchu

@kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Grt update dear
it was a jhatka yaar
the povs were really grt
and shama dead was a shocker
and guessing Arjun n Sam reaction was imaginable

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#212

amazing update
with a huge turning point
i hope the news turns out to be false
n she's alive
beautifully written povs
thanks for pm
cont soon

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#213

awesome 👍🏼
brilliant pov
beautifully written di
lov it
so mau dead???
omg

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#214

di check ur outbox
apne if only n dawn dono me dawn ka link diya
thanks fr d pm di
ps. her sin discontinue 😭
???

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

Brilliantly written POV's of each one of them.👍🏼It was so Human.
Reading Sameer's POV felt like he expected sumthing to happen but something else happened instead.Sach hi kaha hai kisine Hum Sochte kuch hai aur hota kuch hai.
News about Shama's death was another blow to his already added guilt.This might be one of the reason that have changed the Sameer,Aisha & Arjun's equation.

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Maya

@Harshamara

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Superb.
Waiting for beast and miss aspirin moments.
Cont soon.

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Sia

@satanslove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_
Unresed on Pg. 32..

Precap sirf aapke liya !!

I didn't know where else to go Bee "andshe moved sideways to let him enter😆😆😆

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-Rajvi-

@-Rajvi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Hello h ji...

First of all sorry for being late...(I know mein humesha ho jati hun but kya karun yeh kambhaqt padhai and exams mera peecha nahi chodte h )

and secondly, a very big jaadu ki jhappi for writing such a beautiful and hatke story...Love you for this...

Now,coming back to the update...It was outstanding..👏
All the POVs were brilliantly written...Kauns sahi h and kaun galat can't say...nd waise bhi kisi ne kaha h ki "pyaar mein koi sahi aur galat nahi hota" (btw i really doubt yeh kissi ne kaha bhi h ya nahi🤔 other than me..)

and yeh kya...Maushami dead??😲 waise I am sure ki yahan kahani mein phir se ek twist hoga😆😆...waiting for that twist to come...

Please update soon...can't wait to see Sam and Arjun reaction to this news...

Thanks for the PM!

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: -Siyaa-

Precap sirf aapke liya !!

I didn't know where else to go Bee "andshe moved sideways to let him enter😆😆😆

*Thud*

Wokay.. OP and Bee moments! I definitely love them.. And I have a feeling, this one's going to be intense..

Thaanku Sambha.. 🤗

But you do need to update jaldi jaldi.. 😳

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Another beautiful update 👏

Me happy ... 🥳... my guesses coming true ... I don't know why but somehow I feel connected with this story ... these characters are so real and so human... I don't feel as if i'm reading a fiction ... sometimes I tend to think like them ... 😳

Arjun's POV - true ... he has no way to go... no direction to think...all random thoughts flooded in his mind... he just knew what happened ... but he is not at all in a position to act ... because he doesn't know the reason behind it ... and he cannot even ask Sam directly about it ... and that is exactly what is bothering him.. the feeling of being helpless... ... not being able to help the two most important people in his life...

Sam's POV - My guess was correct ... his move bounced back badly on him ... That's true that he feels lighter now as he has set Arjun and Mau free but still the fact remains that he loved Mau ... and the back story that u have given for Sam, she was the one with whom he had seen his future, after the painful and lonely past ... but definitely the cost of it was too much to bear ... 😭

...now Mau left without a word and he doesn't know what to tell Arjun ... He is lost now...it was for him and Mau he broke up with her...how much hard he tries, he cannot deny this fact... but now he ended fighting himself and his emotions ... he couldn't achieve what he wished to and now Mau too is not in his life...

He wishes to talk to her but ... is it too late?

Aisha walked away ... my poor Sam ... feel like giving a hug to him 🤗

Mau's POV: She knows she is just running away from both Arjun and Sam ... She knows that she has hurt both ... but at the same time she was guilt ridden ... Sam can have his happy ending with Ayesha the way Mau thinks... but definitely the void that Mau has left in his life will always be there... Ayesha cannot take Mau's place ... Ayesha has to create her own place in his life and heart...

But there is more to it now... she had to share something with Sam-Arjun ... what was that? was she able to do that?

An now this news... both are impacted.

Aisha - u haven't written her POV... but my POV abt her 😉

Unknowingly she got entangled in this web.

Sam used her as a bait and she too walked away from Sam while she was the one who can help him, but both are oblivious to this fact. She doesn't know about Sam's true feelings towards her.

She too is somewhere attracted towards Sam but knows Sam is in relationship with Mau ... She also knows Arjun loves Mau ... She knows something wrong with Sam as he must have shouted on her ("Beast is roaring today, who has bitten him" and "He better OP otherwise he will get good lesson form my end too ") ... this conversation cracked me up between this serious stuff 😆😆😆

Overall a small but an important update. Waiting for next part 😊

P.S. - What u do to this story is ur decision, but definitely I would be the one who will be at the biggest loss if u discontinue this 😭😭😭😭.

While other stories thrill me and entertain me, somewhere I know that they are fiction. But this story is different from others. It feels so real and human. This is the only story where I tend to think like characters of it while reading it. 😳

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