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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SilentSilver

Nice start!!!

do contd soon :D

thanks dear..update coming..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

awesome...


sam - jun - ran - sree

ayesha - riya-saakshi- lisa...

lykd der bonding

updte soon


Thanks for Liking it..update coming..will post it soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: dmegha

Wonderful start.

Thanks for the PM.
Continue soon.

Thanks dear..will continue soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ila_tanwar

update soon readyu to read

update coming dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: srividhya68

Thanks for the update dear :) nice starting ...

You are most welcome😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

Sorry 4 late cmmnt dr

It is lovely awesome,superb work
I love it
Thanx 4 pm me 4 wonderful work
W8 4 nxt update

IThanks for lovely comment...And i am also sorry for late update...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Friends i am with new update...i hope ki aap log jiyada bore nehi honge...aur agar bore bhi ho jai toh main hoo na..aplogoki anda aur tomatos ki khane ko...fek dena mere taraf agar pasand na ayeee..Here is new update of !!Shehanaayiyaan!!...

!!Shehanaayiyaan!! Chapter 1-Part2


Aiesha: Abb toh eye saman bhi ghar nehi jaa payega…

Riya chillake: Kyun!!!

Aiesha Hatse ishara karke use car ki piche dikhate hain…

Riya apne haat ki saman aur gale se phooloon ki mala niche rakhte huye uss taraf dekhte hain aur uss taraf dekhte hii phirse cillake bolta hain eye kaise huya!!!

Tabhi Aiesha kuch bolne lagte hain paar pichese lisa chillane lagta hain..Dii..Diii…bachao mujhey…

Eha khare huye Aiesha Aur Riya uski chillane ki awaj sun chouk jate hain aur unse kuch dur khare Arjun Ranveer Sameer Aur Shree bhi ghabra jate hain sochne lagte hain aisa chilla kyun raha hain..

Aur eha Aiesha aur Riya Lisa ki baat sunte hii uss awaj ko follow karte huye dourne lagte hain..

Aur eha confused Rathore: eye kiya huya!!

Arjun: kiya pata!!!musibaat se picha chute yrr…

Ranveer: haan jo bhi ho hum chalte hain eha se…

Shree: paar bhai uske saath kiya huya!!humain dekhna chahiye…

Sameer: haan Shree thik keh rahi hain..hamain chalke dekhna chahiye…

Shree aur Sameer ki baat su Arjun Aur Ranveer undono ko ghur ghur4 ke dekhne lagte hain aur eye samajhke Sameer: aise kiya dekhrahe hoo…

Ran: tumeh dekhraha hoo mere dost…aur mere vai ko

Arjun: haan tujhey hii dkeh raha hoon…

Sam: wo toh main dekh hii sakta hoo ki hamain dekh rahe hoo..paar kyun dekhrahe hoo…!!Aisa dekhne jaisa kuch nehi kaha..aurat hain kuch bhi ho sakte hain..aur hum police officers hain unki raksh karna hamara farz hain…

Arjun in teasing voice: wo toh hain…

Shree: Kiya Jun vai…

Ran: Are jun aise maat bol mere Shree ko bura lagta hain..haa ha ha…

Sam: Abb baas hasna hii hain ya chalna bhi hain…

Arjun And Ranveer saath main: haan haan chalte hain…

Pher wo charo bhi Riya aur Aesha ki piche jate hain dorke…

Aiesha aur Riya dourte dorte market ki samne ek gali ke paas jake chilla chikkale lisa ko bulate hain…

Riya: lisa..lisa..

Aiesha: kaha ho tum..lisa!!!

Aur samne se awaj ate hain : main eha hoon dii…

Aur uss Awaj ke saath Aur ek ladki ki awaj ate hain..hum eha hain Riya…

Paar Riya Aur Aiesha ko samajh nehi ata ki wo log kaha se bol rahe hain..

Riya: kaha hoo..!!

Lisa: Tum kaha hoo??

Aiesha: kaha hoon matlab!!market ki samne ki gali samne khare hoo…

Sakshi: aur samne aoo…

Riya: paar tumdono iss gali main kiya karne aye the..ajeb baat hain…sidha car paas ana chahiye tha na…

Aiesha: hum aa gaye aur samne kaha ho tumlog…

Riya:gali main hoga..

Lisa kahi se chillake : nehi… hum gali main nehi gaddhe main hain…

Aiesha Aur Riya Saath main: kiya!!!!!Gaddhe main!!!!

Paar undonko Gaddha najar nehi ata…

Riya: kaha hain gaddha!!

Sakshi: gali ke thik samne hii toh hain..akhe hain ya batan…!!!

Riya: akhe hii hain..

Sakshi: toh assise dekh…

Aiesha ko samne kuch jangal jaisa kuch dikhta hainaur uske asspas kuch saman gire huye hain kuch dresses kuch flower..decoration ki kuch saman..eye dekhte hii wo Riya se kehte hain riya uss taraf dekh…wo kiya hain…??

pher undono ko eksaath wo gaddha dikhte hain aur wo dono uske taraf jate hain…Aur uha jate hii undono ko lisa aur sakshi dikhai deta hain…Aur uneh dekhte hii wo log chillake eye kaise huya..

Sakshi lisa ko dikhake: ise bhej ne ko kisne kaha tha..bina dekhe chalte hain eye…

Lisa: meri koyii galti nehi hain di..itna samna tha main kuch dekhi nehi payii…

Sakshi lisa ko dhmakake: chup lisa..ekj toh galti karo uparse..

Lisa: assa meri galti hain!!itna saman kharidne ko kisne kaha tha..ek toh madad karo uparse dhamki bhi suno..

Abb uparse Riya Aur Aiesha un dono ko baas dekhte rehte hain..Lagta hain neyii gaddha hain..kuchdin pehle hii khoya hoga…

Riya: Ghaddhe ko goiur se dekhte huye..Eha koyii Maila toh nehi hain na…

Sakshi: gaddhe main mail nehi hoga toh kiya hoga!!

Riya: mera matlab dustbin ki maila se tha…

Lisa: Yak…nehi aisa kuch nehi hain eha…

Gaddhemain sabse niche kuch saman gira hain uske upar sakshi aur undono ke upar Aur saman bhikhra para hain…

Aiesha : baas undono ko dekhrahii hain..apne haasi control nehi karparahi hain..paar has bhi nehi paa rahii…

Aur Riya aur Aiesha ko aise dekh lisa: Aise hii dekhte rahoge ya humain uthaogii bhi humain!!!

Riya haan uthati hoon..eye kehke wo apna haat lisa ki taraf barate hain aur lisa uski haat pakarke uth ne ki koshish karte hain paar sakshi uske upar hone ki wajah se wo thikse bhi uth nehi pati uparse Riya bhi Undono ke upar ake Gir jata hain..…

Aur phirse teeno milke chillane lagta hain…

Sakshi: uuiii maa..

Lisa: Ahhh..

Riya: eye kiya kiya tune lisa..Ahh…

To be continued...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Yeh Riya kitna chillati hai😆
ahaan Shree wants to go and see what happened to Lisa, kya baat hai😉
OMG they actually fell into a pit🤣🤣Riya bhi gir gaayi🤣🤣

awesome part moumi, do contd soon <3
Edited by SilentSilver - 12 years ago

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