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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: surprising

Here comes Eng version...for my dear eager readers😊

Hoito Tomari Jonya
Perhaps Only For You

Harie jete chaoya ki abantar??
Does Want for being introvert is restless??
Ami jani na...tabe anumaan korte pari
I Don't know...But trying to guess
Hoito haan...hoito na...
Perhaps yes...perhaps no...

Bhalobasar ekta bindu...
Just a drop of love...
Koto kichhu korte chai;
Want to achieve a sky;
Kotota samman ba sujog se pay??
But how far it's loved by men??

Tabu manush swapno dekhe...
Still men love dreams...
Swapno dekhte shehkhai k?
Who is the pathfinder of it?
Kaalpurusher teer dhunuk ki nirdesh kore?
Arch of galaxy symbolizes what?

Nive jete jete jwale otha
Something flashing just before the end
Ar jwaleo nive thaker modhye parthakya toto tai...
& something dead in the whole life-span differ
Jotota neel ashru r laal rakter-
Just like blue tears & blood-

how's the translation??😛

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: surprising

how's the translation??😛

finally i understood it...😆

and its reallly goood...

you should start a topic where you post only your poems...

you write so well..😊

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

daydreamer:

thanks⭐️
u nt 1st, koi pahele bhi mujhe ye advice de chuke hey😛

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

kisi ne like korke bhi unlike kar diya😭...nt fair

updating 2nd chap...

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Part-2

Detective...translated into senselessness...awaiting diary...

Gunjan murmures in her mind-
-tough case hey sir,bahoot hi tough case...aap kaise jan payenge jab Privi Laha wo poems likh rahe the, unka situation of mind kaisa tha??writers ke mind bahoot khel dikhate hey,wo khud bhi nehi jante kab kiya aur kaise unse kuch aisa kaam ho jate hey jiska koi meaning nehi hota.aap kaise jan payenge ki...

"Gunjan!!"-aapne aap kiya marmara rahe ho?? tum Bengali jante ho??
Gunjan got a little bit stunned -
-sorry sir...main toh...
-achha chodo...jo punchha gaya hey uska zabab do...
-Be...Bengali sir??...woh...main thoda thoda toh janti hoon...par sir plzzz mujhe wo poem translate korne ko nehi kahiye ga...main aur poem!!!
-Hey listen, you are PA of Arjun Bharadwaj...kiya tha 1st criteria??
-woh...woh...sir... aap..
-haan main tumhari boss for the sake of my work jo bolunga woh without hesitation karni padegi.
toh???
-ok...ok...sir...I'm trying...

Nischal Niharika

An immobile galaxy...

Prakhshkaman akashganga samne-

Akashganga...I mean a galaxy is waiting in front of somebody...

Gunjan realises the translation does not go with the actual sense.May it differ from the meaning.If it will...there'll be a great misunderstanding in this case.

She pleaded Arjun-
-sir...plzz ...mere translation iss poem ke sath suit nehi kar raha hey.I think you can be misled by it.
-toh ab kiya kare??
-sir,mere 1 cousin hey,Bristi.Her mother is a Bengali...she is now doing bachelor degree with Comparative Literature...she can help u sir...she herself is a good poetess.Could I call her??

"Very good poem sir...has a deeper meaning...great poet..."
"I know that...tum plz mujhe ye translation de do...
"ok...sir...pahele main bengali lines k sath english version bol leti hoon...baad mein likh dungi...agar koi gadbad hua toh bolte waqt main samajh jayungi...
"woh diary mujhe do.ye lo wo poem ka copy..."

Arjun began to notice the diary with great attention.Bristi started to recite...Gunjan kept hearing...

Nischal Niharika

With An Immobile Galaxy...

Prakhshkaman akashganga samne-
An awaiting galaxy so far...
Sha e to ballom buke niye sabuj prantar
With calm weapons in her heart
Ek nadi sanshai uphaar dei.
The mother path blesses with a river-full of confusion.
Swapna kake bole jano?-judhho?
Do they know what's dream...what's war?

Ghat-pratighater apato halud prantar
The land hued with yellow that's cute apparent
Kake dakchhe?
Calls for whom?
...ekhane akash neel.
Here,beneath the azure...PEACE...
Tabe ekhuni dheke jabe dhumketur bristi te,
But within a moment,it'll get covered by ice-rain...
Kalponar dhusar chhayapath aaj bastav!
The grey world of sleepy imagination gets in touch of reality!

-kaisa ho raha hey sir??...bas aur 1 stanza baaki hey...

It is seemed to Arjun that talk of Bristi is getting nonlistenable to him...the room is getting dark... what's it...the diary page is just...just...what??...3 or 4??...he tries to control himself...but fails...He falls unconscious on the floor...

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago