Your Love or My Hatred? [DISCONTINUED]

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Scarlett kevin

@Mrs.JamesBarne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Nice start dear . Continue soon and please save riya:-)

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice start dr,.
i lvd it...
beautifuly written...
ahooo u make me cry again..
conti soon...
i wanna to read more..
pm me whenever u update...

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Queen.Bee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice start.. i am interested.. continue soon!!

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beatrice_89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

great start yaar. thank you for writing on ariya do cont soon and plz do pm me when you update next

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srividhya68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

If its ariya then continue

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

lovely start yar!!!!

good going waiting for the next update!:)

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

nice start
hope riya is alive
cont soon

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snehav1999

@snehav1999

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

A Mission Found

Unknown P.O.V (2 months after Riya's death)

What has happened? Why did all this take place in my life?

Hasn't fate played enough games with me to make me a pawn in this game as well?

Why?

"WHY???!!!!" I screamed into the sky.

"Come in, your time is up," came a gruff voice from the door of my balcony.

"Coming..." and saying so I drifted away into the place that has been no less than a hell. Oh, how I wish I could go back in time... back in time to them... to him...

No!!! I cannot think like that I need to be awake and I need to fight, for myself.. for my family... and for him.

Arjun's P.O.V (At the time Riya died)

How can this happen?

How could I let her die?

How did I see her give up her breath just like Roshni did... right in front of my eyes!!!

"WHY DID YOU DO THIS???!!!"

"Rawte, calm down, there is a new case," called out Rathore, but Arjun paid him no heed.

"RAWTE!!" screamed Rathore.

"Coming... you go ahead" said Arjun to stop Rathore from screaming his head off.

I wish I could have done something... something... but... why do I care?

She is NOTHING to me

Nothing at ALL!!!

(2 months later)

So here, basically, Aisha and Liza are already in the show, and right now I am going to introduce Sakshi.

Arjun's P.O.V

A new officer is coming... AGAIN!!!

"What's is her name?" I asked completely agitated.

"Sakshi" replied Rathore.

"WHERE IS SHE!!!???" I screamed finally ready to burst.

"You might be taking about me, I believe," said an extremely bubbly and happy voice from the door of the conference room.

"Are you Sakshi?" asked Rathore before I could start screaming at the new officer.

"Yep, that's me. And I believe that you (pointing at me) might be Arjun and you (pointing at Sameer) might be Rathore?" asked Sakshi.

"Yes , now could we go, we are already late just because of YOU!!" I said completely angry at her bubbly and cheery attitude when she had already made us late.

"Calm down, Rawte, but let's go" said Rathore.

And so we left leaving, as I tried not to think about her dimpled smile and her belief in my love.

Third P.O.V

After the ETF Team solved the case they came to the conference room, but suddenly Chotu's phone rang. He picked it up and listened to the person on the other side.

After the conversation he had a happy and scared look on his face, which only helped the others in getting more confused.

"What happened, Chotu?" asked Arjun lazily.

"...Sir... it's time. We have a clue," said Chotu. And that one line changed Arjun's entire future.

So... how was it?

Oh!! Arjun was actually thinking about Roshni when he was leaving for the case after Sakshi came, just so you don't get confused.

This chapter is a bit boring, I know, but I PROMISE that next chapter will be THE twist in the story. Guys, guess who the unknown person is??!!!!

This is an ARIYA FF so p;ease do not think that I am just letting Riya die when this fanfic is on her and Arjun.

To get PM's plz Buddy me.

Edited by snehav1999 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

great update :) loved it

omg riya died 😭

arjun's POV was so heart touching

and sakshi is the new officer in ETF :) nice

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awesome update..
Everyones pov ws great..
And sakshi too entered ...
N chotu...
What is the clue..
Abt sikader ?? Or riya??
Pls continue soon
thanks fr the pm..

N riya ko jaldi wapas lao..