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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
wow yar nice i love Ariya most please PM me when you update,
i love to see our dulha nad dulhan and their buddies
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome start :) loved it
looking forward to read it
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Part 1
Scene: A party hall. Beautifully Decorated with lots of people of all age groups. It has a traditional yet modern touch to it. Looks like someone is getting married. Ah! the hustle bustle. Looks like everyone is really busy! Everyone seems so excited. But something is amiss. Not everyone is happy. But why? Ah! it's kind of a boring party. Not something today's fun-loving people would enjoy. A beautiful Gorgeous girl in a Beautiful Silver saree walks down with a frown on her face. She stands next to a couple in Pink dresses. (Guys sab ki dresses k liye plzz go to:

Aisha: Yaar Shree! ye kya? Ye kitna boring hai! Mujhe to laga tha k meri shaadi pe jo fun maine miss kiya ose main yahan pe poora karoongi. magar yahan to poori baazi hi olti padh gayi! Ab kya?

Shree: Aisha! Aisa mat bol yaar.. Please don't say k Humaari Riya k sangeet ki saari preparations jo ki thi vo waste hone vali hain!

Aisha: Lagta to aisa hi hai Shree! humne kitna kuch fun plan kiya tha! lekin vo fun to tab shuru ho na jab ye sab bade log humein akela chodein. dekho to sahi! Poora parivaar yahan hai. Sab k mom-dads yahin baithein hain! 11 baj gaye hain. Sab bade logon k friends bhi chale gaye lekin ye sab apne apne kamron main jaane k naam hi nhi le rahe. Aur to aur hum sabko bhi apne saath bitha k rakh rahe hain! Main yahan bach k kaise ayi hoon ye mujhe hi pata hai. Aur jab Liza oth rahi thi to bhi Aunty-Uncle ne sau sawaal pooche hinge kyun Liza?

Liza: Right yaar!! I wish ye humein Akela chod dein!!!! PLEASE god kuch to karo!!

Suddenly, they hear a voice from behind. "Ab Bhagwaan ko kyun pareshaan kar rahi ho?" The 3 of them turn to see who spoke.

3 all toghther: RIYA!!!

Shree: thank God tu finally vahan se nikal gayi!! Dekh na yr... ye teri Party ki band bajane pe tule huye hain..!!

Riya: Meri Bachelorette party to kal hai na?😕

Liza: Ya! Teri aur Arjun ki Bachelorette aur bachelor parties kal hain. Hum to music nught ki baat kar rahe hain!

Riya: Ab ye kaunsa naya panga hai?

Aisha: Panga nahi hai yaar... Teri bachelorette party main sirf ladkiyan hongi aur Arjun wali mein sirf Ladke... to humne socha k Ek-saath bhi to ek party honi chahiye.. to vo party hum tere sangeet se carry-forward karna chahte the. Magar ye bade logon ne sab kuch bigaar diya!!

Riya: To problem kya hai? Inhone mana kiya kya?

Aisha: NAHI yaar. Samjha kar na.. Hum logon ki party na to Badon k liya hai na hi Baccho k liye!!!

Riya: GUYS!!! Aisa kya plan hai?

Shree: Please huh! Itna bhola mat ban na... Hum kuch extreme nhi karenge magar late tak party chalne vali hai aur bahut shor bhi hoga.. in that sense...! Aur agar yahan bade bhi honge to hum na to khul k enjoy kar payenge aur na hi der tak jaag payenge!

Riya: Oh! Ye baat hai... Koi na guys. odaas kyun hote ho? when Riya is here, Never fear!

Riya goes to her mother and explains the situation and as Riya expected, all the children and older people are out of the hall and the hall's door closed. Now, It was time for some fun!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Yay...
I am the first one to comment,that too on my Birthday...
Woo Hoo...
Finally u updated the first part of the OS.
Phheeewww...
Was waiting for it...
Oh...
Loved the update...
Bachelor and Bachelorette party ki plans,huh...
Sounds interesting...
Sangeet ke baad ek party hogi,that too with loud music...
Oh Yeah...
Was waiting for somethin like this...
This OS is gonna be a piece of a good writing..
Waiting for the next update.
Edited by zebbie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Part 2

Scene: The same hall. But a new ray of excitement. Less people. (See the Main and Guest casts on Pg 1) Let the fun Begin! (Guys, no speech is through a mike! that would just b weird)

Aisha: Alright guys! Finally humein thoda time mila k hum apne tareeke se enjoy kar sakein. So guys. Tasks to bahut saare hain but Chotu ki special request hai k koi bhi shubh kaam se pehle pooja ho jaye. And by this, oska matlab hai PET-POOJA! So pehle dinner, Phir dhamaal!!

Everyone finished the food and settles down again!

Liza: Wah! That was yummy! Good job chotu.

Chotu: obviously. maine saara khaana taste kiya tha!

Waiter: Iss liye humein sab kuch dobara banana pada tha. Sahab ne bahut achi tarah taste kiya!

Everyone laughs and poor Chotu goes red.

Shree: to abhi khaana khaya hai to humein dancing k liye ruk jana chahiye. But fun doesn't stop. To khaana khaate waqt mere dimaag mein ek idea aaya. Dekho yaar. sadiyon se chali aa raha hai ek jung- Girls VS Boys. I know k aap sab soch rahe honge k ye main kya bakwaas kar raha hoon. Magar mere aisa kehne k peeche ek wajah hai. Actually, ye jun Ri aur Arjun bhai k beech bhi chidi thi. Aur koi kuch bhi kahe. but this IS one of the best means of entertainment. you get to prove your point and enjoy.

Chotu: Lekin shree, ye to sach mein jhagre main badal sakta hai na?

Shree: wahi to chotu. maine kab kaha k ye jhagre main nhi badlega. Roothna, manaana sab hoga! But sirf aaj ki raat. sone k baad jab sab othenge to koi is baat ko lekar nahi baithega. Deal guys?

Everyone: DEAL!

Shree: great! to abhi apni apni teams mein aa jayen?

All girls go to the right side and the Boys to the left side.

Chotu: Yaar shree!

Shree: haan?

Chotu: Humaare numbers barabar nahi hain!

Shree: Koi ek umpire bhi to hai!

Chotu: kaun?

Shree: tu! dekh yaar. tu hum sab se kitna bada aur hatta katta hai. tere saamne to koi nhi jeet sakta. to agar tu umpire hai to yahi fair hoga. aur vaise bhi, main jaanta hoon tu cheat nhi karega. kyun ki ek side Riya hai aur Doosri side main. tu hum mein se kisi ko dhoka nahi dega.

Chotu: Haan haan theek hai! Baat ko ghuma mat.. main ye karoonga!

Shree: Thank God!

Chotu: KYA?

Shree: Ku...kuch nahi.

Shree joins the boys' team... So the teams are:

Arjun l Riya
Shaleen l Sanjana
Sameer l Aisha
Shree l Liza
Armaan l Riddhima
Karan l Aishwariya
Gautam l Sukirti
Vicky l Jasmeet
Viren l Jeevika
Rishab l Madhubala
Viraat l Maanvi
Samrat l Gunjan
Jai l Mahhi
Arnav l Shilpa
Ravi l Sargun
Chotu
(guys these are also the pairs.)

Chotu: Ok! Sabse pehle, hum khelenge Antakshari. main is bowl mein se ek naam nikaalonga aur is doosre bowl mein se ek Akshar. vo starting hogi aur phir game normally continue hogi! Ok. so naam hai, Rishab! aur aapka akshar hai 'm'.

Rishab: umm... haan! "mere saamne vali khirki mein, ik chand ka tukda rehta hai. Afsos hai ye k vo humse kuch ookhda ookhda rehta hai.

Rishab stared at Madhu the whole time and she glared at him.

Madhu: Ookhda hi rahega na... Romance naam ki to cheez hai hi nahi... to aur kya karoon?

Aishwariya: So right yaar Madhu! Inhe to sirf kaam ki hi padi rehti hai! Kaam ki file ko to har do minute main dekhenge magar biwi ya Girlfriend ko doosri baar bhi dekh liya to problem ho jati hai! (looking at Karan)

Karan: Madam, vo isliye kyun ki aap hain hi itni khoobsoorat ki aapko dekhte hi sab kuch bhool jate hain! Kyun Arnav?

Arnav: Sahi kaha Karan! Aur vaise bhi hum par hi ye ilzaam kyun lag raha hai? tum sab k paas bhi to romance k liye time nhi. jab bhi romance karo to, "chodo na! mujhe kaam hai!"

Shilpa: Ab tu sab romance k liye time hi vo chunte ho jo unconvienient hai!

Chotu: Accha theek hai! Aage badhaein game? Ladkiyon ki baari. 'Hai' par khatam hua. 'h' se gao!

Riya: (looking at Arjun) Hum.. dill de chuke sanam.! tere ho gaye hain hum.! teri kasam... teri kasam...!! Bhoolenge... kabhi na ab tumhe hum.. hooo... Bhoolenge... kabhi na ab tumhe hum..!! Ho.. Hum.. dill de chuke sanam.! tere ho gaye hain hum.! teri kasam... teri kasam...!!

All this while Arjun and Riya were lost in each other's eyes. and all others were watching them happily! all were their true friends and were very happy to see those two in so much love! As riya finished.. all broke out whistling and shouting, bring Ariya back to the real world. Arjun kept staring at her with a smile on his face and Riya kept staring down at the floor, blushing hard!

Chotu: Boys. Phirse 'M'

Karan and Shaleen: Mehndi laga k rakhna... Doli saja k rakhna.. Mehndi laga k rakhna... Doli saja k rakhna.. Lene tujhe o Riya.. Aayenge tere sajnaa... Mehndi laga k rakhna... Doli saja k rakhna.. Mehndi laga k rakhna... Doli saja k rakhna..

Aishwariya and Sanjana: Chehra chupa k rakhna... Sehra saja k rakhna... Chehra chupa k rakhna... Sehra saja k rakhna... Ye dill ki baat apne dill mein chupa k rakhna... Chehra chupa k rakhna... Sehra saja k rakhna...

everyone except Arjun and Riya: Mehndi laga k rakhna... Doli saja k rakhna.. Chehra chupa k rakhna... Sehra saja k rakhna...

Chotu: Ladkiyon 'n' se.

Jasmeet: Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi...Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi... O Tune Kiya Kya Yaar, Haay Mai Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi, Mar Gayi... Na Na Karte Pyaar Oy Mai Kar Gaya, Kar Gaya, Kar Gaya... O Tune Kiya Aitbaar, Haay Mai Mar Gaya, Mar Gaya, Mar Gaya... Na Na Karte Pyaar Hai Mai Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi, Kar Gayi... I am in love, I am in love, I am in love...I am in love, I am in love, I am in love

Vicky: haan! oski saza aaj tak bhugat raha hoon. kash tumne apni "na" maan li hoti!

All boys laugh and girls glare at them. Jasmeet gets angry and instead of shouting or getting angry, her pretty-little-brain comes up with another plan.

Jasmeet: ohho Vicky.. Main tumhe yahi bataane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar keh nahi payi k tum gussa hoge. magar chotu ne abhi kaha na, k aaj ki baat ko lekar koi kal gussa nhi hoga to maine socha tumhe abhi bata doon. ab tumhe mujhe jhelne ki zaroorat nahi hai! I AM IN LOVE!!!
Edited by dashequalsd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Hey,thank u so much,for the birthday gift...
I loved it...
The party is going good...
Loved the pairs...
Loving the Antakshari and their jung between boys and girls.
Loved it.
Thanks once again for ur wish and for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
rocking party dr.

evrythng is amazng.

continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Part 3
Jasmeet: ohho Vicky.. Main tumhe yahi bataane ki koshish kar rahi thi magar keh nahi payi k tum gussa hoge. magar chotu ne abhi kaha na, k aaj ki baat ko lekar koi kal gussa nhi hoga to maine socha tumhe abhi bata doon. ab tumhe mujhe jhelne ki zaroorat nahi hai! I AM IN LOVE!!!

Everyone looks at Jasmeet, shocked beyond wits to reply.

Vicky: WHAT?! Ye tum kya keh rahi ho?

Jasmeet: Yahi k mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai. Frankly, mujhe nahi laga tha k ye kabhi hoga. Lekin Vicky, jab vo meri taraf dekhta hai, to main bas oski aankhon mein kho jaati hoon...

Vicky (panicking) : aankhon mein kho jati ho?

Jasmeet (looking dreamily): Jab vo mujhse baat karta hai to dil karta hai k bas osmein kho jaon...

Vicky: Baat karta hai..

Jasmeet: Au jab vo... mujhe...

Vicky: Ab kya kiya?

Jasmeet (snapping out): Main kyun bataon? Ye mere aur OSKE beech ki baat hai.

Vicky (getting angry): Beech ki baat?! Nahi! Mujhe batao!

Jasmeet: NAHI!

Vicky: HAAN

Jasmeet (standing up): NAHI!

Vicky (also standing up): HAAN!!

Jasmeet: maine kaha na.. NAHI!! Aur tumhe isse kya lena dena?

Vicky: Lena dena hai! Tum meri Girlfriend ho..!

Jasmeet: Girlfriend? Girlfriend, my FOOT! Girlfriend tab hot agar tumne mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya hota! Ab it's too LATE.. Kyunki ab mujhe koi aur pasand aane laga hai... Aur vaise bhi, ye sab tumhaari vajah se hua hai. Jab MAIN kehti thi k main tumse pyaar karti hoon, tab to badi baatein karte the k "OH Please Jasmeet! Tum aur Main! NEVER!!"

Vicky: Vo jhoot tha!!

Jasmeet: "to JHELO apna jhoot!" kash main bhi ye keh sakti! But kya karoon! Ab bhi tumse otna hi pyaar karti hoon. Ab pata chala k jab tum MERE SAAMNE kisi aur k saath flirt karte ho to kaisa lagta hai...? But... maine kaha na.. Its too LATE! ab main os ladke ko na nahi keh sakti! Vo ab humaare beech aa chuka hai!

Vicky: Kaun hai ye ladka? Main dekhta hoon k humaare beech kaun aata hai!

Jasmeet: Os ladke ka naam hai, Mr. Vikram Malhotra!

Vicky: Mr. Vikram Malhotra! ab bacho... EK MINUTE! Vikram Malhotra.. Ye to main hoon!

Everyone bursts out laughing and Vicky looks around confused.

Sukirti: Itna confused kyun ko Mr Vikram Malhotra? Don't worry. Jazz ki life mein tumhaare ilava aur koi ladka nahi hai... Vo sirf tumhe chirha rahi hai.. Ya kahoon confess karva rahi thi! Hum kafi shareef ladkiyan hain... Faithful.. u know! Aur shareef ladiyan apne Boyfriends ki peeth peeche cheat nahi karti!

Gautam: Oh really? vaise theek hi kaha.. tum ladkiyan apne BOYFREINDS k saath kafi faithful hoti ho! ek par nahi tikti na...!

(ouch!! That was too harsh)

Sukirti was SHOCKED and HORRIFIED and HURT beyond words to hear GAUTAM- HER Gautam say that! Tears filled up her eyes. She couldn't believe her ears. She rushed out of the hall before her tears could spill over. Sanjana got up instantly and followed her out. She knew that this hurt Sukirti a lot, as it reminded her of her past. Instantly, there was silence in the hall. No sound at all.. No was was even breathing. Gautam was shocked at his own words.. He couldn't believe he had said that. He was mentally cursing himself for having said that. In the competitive spirit surrounding him, he had completely forgotten that the way he said it could be taken two-ways. As a comment to against girls and a comment against Sukirti! He was quite ashamed of himself and that was visible on his face. The girls had also been somewhat hurt and this was visible on their faces. Gautam noticed this and it only increased to his misery.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Nice os ..parti preparation is god..
loll ariya wedding..
poor enjoy he nahi ker pate..
but finaly at last moka mil he gaya..
nice n cute part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
ohh wow..
Nice idea dear..
Great os..
Em lovng it..
Continue soon :)

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