Arjun FF - Dard Hai - Part 3 - Page 7 - 03/30/13

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: devildiva21
interesting cs and prologue...
lovely start...
riya already dead... :(
continue soon...
plz pm me whenever you update...

Thank you so much

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: madmadona
nice
riya is no more in this?😕
u scared me by the end of ur prologue
omg what's gonna happen next?
will riya come back alive?
update soon

Sorry I left you scared... I can't say anything about Riya... You'll just have to wait and read what happen.

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Wj.mad
awesome cs nd prologue
update soon

Surely update soon

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Liza.
Hey :)
Awesome Character Sketch & Prologue !
Sounds very interesting
Ouuu! Is Pratiksha opposite Arjun? ;)
LOL hope you update soon!!

Glad you like it. Maybe Pratiksha might be opposite Arjun... is there a problem 😉

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Mishti Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

warm thanks to everyone who have supported meand always continue supporting me. I know many of you guys are wondering about Riya and is she dead... if you want to know than continue reading.

Love
Misti

Part One

Unforgettable Day

Far away from the world of crime a house decorated with many lights and music echoing loudly. Many people entering inside that house and kids running around. While one lady stood smiling at the people, but her eyes kept on looking at her daughter's picture hang on the wall with flower. Tiny tear escape from her eyes and yet she kept on smiling. Its time to bring her younger daughter down for the rituals. Yep, its her daughter's wedding today with her friend's son Vikram.

Mother and daughter have emotional conversation before her mother Anuradha brought her down. Her face hidden behind her duppata, but nobody could see her tears. She silently cried while priest words echoing inside her ears.

She kept silent while doing every rituals hesitatingly. She suppress her tears when her Mamu place her hand on top of the groom's hand than touch her head. She close her eyes tightly, hoping everything would stop soon.

After some moment I can hear the priest asking us to stand up and take phera against the scared fire.

Anuradha saw her daughter taking her first step behind her groom reminding her off her daughter's first step in their lives. She smiled happily looking at her elder daughter's picture. Soon two phera are done.

Anuradha felt hand touching her shoulder. She turn around smiling, but soon her smile turn into frown. She glaze at the person who asked her question. She told him its her daughter's wedding with Vikram. Suddenly she heard many people gasping. Anuradha turn around witnessing same person who told her the awful news about her elder daughter's death. She tried stopping him from dragging Vikram, but her daughter's chief stopped her. She stood numbness watching how things came unfolding in front of her. She looked at her friend who lower her eyes in shame. She thanked her god for saving her daughter's life or destroying her life. She heard many guest gossiping until a voice shouted in anger. Afterwards he filled her daughter's mang (forehead) with sindoor announcing to everyone now onwards her daughter (meaning Anuradha's daughter) is his wife. And nobody dares to taunt his wife...

Note: I know many off you wondering "what type of words angered Arjun than he filled Riya's sister's mang" you'll know soon.

Edited by MistiofMistz - 12 years ago

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Liza S.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

Glad you like it. Maybe Pratiksha might be opposite Arjun... is there a problem 😉

Of course not, no problem at all :)
It's precisely what I'm looking forward to most about this story ;)

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Love the first chapter !
Can't wait to see how the rest of
the story unfolds :)
hope you update soon!

Edited by Liza. - 12 years ago