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Posted: 12 years ago

hi. whats up!


I hope u r fine.
amazing update thank u so much for doing this i have read this thing but was not able comment earlier sorry for that



as my exams r going on n i m not in th best of my health also.& looking for job



they have wasted riya's build up as a character and officer,what so creative in introducing a new lead that too when they knw ppl r addctd ariya and riya,s character they wasted ariya moments and killed her just bcoz sana left i respect sana's decision and wish her good health happiness but they must hv find replmnt sabne yahi socha tha k she will survive and arjun will dvlp more feelings 4 her,bcoz 1 week latkaya cvs ne aur marna tha toh same day batate na then her secret and letters to shree-chotu trainig ka mauka to rathore then arjuns dialg about luv,agree he never loved her but didnt he felt smthg or atleast 1percent 4 her,sonali ki audtn actually was 4 riya only when mrunal was avoiding and said she is tired after khamoshiyaan and didnt went 4 audtns when cvs has schdl so many times then she said yes at last moment,but gorky wntd new lead journ god knows for what reason kya creativity hai new lead laane mein,when ayesha was intrdc ppl thght she's opp arjun so they started accptg her but i m glad she's opp sam,cvs want to entrtn themselvs and ignore viewers and disspnt them,Even now i see on fcbk twtr ppl rqsts for riya chrctrs cmbk including me which is not wrong but it falls on deaf ears and forum doesnt accpt criticism they go with the flow sorry if u feel bad its my pov ..
thanks my dr friend u r so sweet.plz keep writing this till arjun serial exist...

🤗🤗

have a great day.

keep smiling..ARSH


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi25031990

hi. whats up!


I hope u r fine.
amazing update thank u so much for doing this i have read this thing but was not able comment earlier sorry for that



as my exams r going on n i m not in th best of my health also.& looking for job



they have wasted riya's build up as a character and officer,what so creative in introducing a new lead that too when they knw ppl r addctd ariya and riya,s character they wasted ariya moments and killed her just bcoz sana left i respect sana's decision and wish her good health happiness but they must hv find replmnt sabne yahi socha tha k she will survive and arjun will dvlp more feelings 4 her,bcoz 1 week latkaya cvs ne aur marna tha toh same day batate na then her secret and letters to shree-chotu trainig ka mauka to rathore then arjuns dialg about luv,agree he never loved her but didnt he felt smthg or atleast 1percent 4 her,sonali ki audtn actually was 4 riya only when mrunal was avoiding and said she is tired after khamoshiyaan and didnt went 4 audtns when cvs has schdl so many times then she said yes at last moment,but gorky wntd new lead journ god knows for what reason kya creativity hai new lead laane mein,when ayesha was intrdc ppl thght she's opp arjun so they started accptg her but i m glad she's opp sam,cvs want to entrtn themselvs and ignore viewers and disspnt them,Even now i see on fcbk twtr ppl rqsts for riya chrctrs cmbk including me which is not wrong but it falls on deaf ears and forum doesnt accpt criticism they go with the flow sorry if u feel bad its my pov ..
thanks my dr friend u r so sweet.plz keep writing this till arjun serial exist...

🤗🤗

have a great day.

keep smiling..ARSH





thanks for liking this,
but one more thing,
i knw riya is gone n she wouldn't come back,
and i won't accept if she will come back,
coz , the show hav some reality, n if she will survive from xora2 virus, its totaly impossible in medical science, n i can't accept that,
yes agree they might have replaced her, bt they plnned sth else.
And for sakshi, no comments..
I too like her, yes i agree her character n job is nt necessary in the show bt
pls don't say such thing abt her..
The plan is made by cv's , its nt her fault.

I hope u understand.


THIS IS COMPLETELY FOR RIYA FANS AND ARIYA FANS , I WOULDN'T ACCEPT ANY COMPARISON AND BASHING OF ANY OTHER CHARACTER.

DISCUSS ONLY ABOUT RIYA HERE, SO IS THE THREAD IS MADE FOR.

AND ONCE AGAING NO COMPARISON OF ARIYA WITH ANY OTHER COUPLE.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thanks for the long post
yes ofcourse it is romantic
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry dear i i hurt u i m not saying mrunal is not good she is nice i like her too yes i also agree her character n job is nt necessary in the show bt The plan is made by cv's , its nt her fault.
the thing is they are forcing people to see Arakshi i knw riya is gone n she wouldn't come back,but
If there was a role was all about chirpness, so then Mr. Gorky, why was Sana Khan not brought back? It's a crime show. You can show her double sister or whatever. People have pulled off double roles all the time. I guess the demand never seems to work with 4 lions. They just do what they want to. Sakshi, sound another Riya perhaps?or may be more childish than her,& what reality they want to show just because Sana wanted to leave? they have killed the character https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3259589/riya-will-be-back-but-sana u should read it atleast once...thank u so much for this OS sorry again if i hurt u ...keep writing this till Arjun serial exist...Arsh
Edited by Arshi25031990 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vampu...

So gayi kya??

Next part kab update kar rahi ho???

Chedi chedi update do...warna...;>
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haan meri dhamki queen de dungi
thoda wait kar..
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Posted: 12 years ago
When will you update dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks a lot for liking and commenting on my update..
You guys seems missing riya so much..hmm..
Ok it will be a long update ..
So mat jana..ok..



Part -???[bhul gayi😲]

ok lets start..


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Arjun and riya was walking on the lonely road. He was only thinking what will happen if she would be at desk.. She will be safe. Yeah it sounds good. But what about me, i m gona miss her...
No way arjun what the heck are you thinking.. You are not gona miss her...


Riya was so boared , its like she is a blind and arjun is showing way to her on that road..
She looked at him... Againg this lost look of his hurt her.
May be one day he will give a little space in his brain atleast ..for her heart is far away..
But she never know , very heavy neurons are occupied by her merories and thoughts in his brain...

She kept her head on his shoulder ..and he was still lost in his thoughts..

After sometime when he comes out of his own trance he felt a little weight on his shoulder. And he turned his head , and found her head on his shoulder..
He smiled at her.. Yes its the second smile ,and again it was for her.. How lucky she is!!


Arjun need to talk to her..
But she is angry but still she is him..its strange for both of them and they don't want to know the reason.


Arjun started, riya..mai aisa
riya- sir pls abhi in sabka koi faida nahi hai..
Arjun - par riya..
Riya - nahi hoon mai iss kabil ..na ETF ki ..aur na hi aap..
She stopped..
[ in her mind - nahi hoon mai aapki kabil..is baat ka dard nahi hai par, main ye nahi chahati hoon ki meri wajah se aap ko dar lage, kisiko khone ka dard sayad hi mai samajh sakun par, aapk dard se farq padta hai..
Aur main khud ko iss kabil bana kar hi rahungi taki, aapko mujhe khone ka dar na ho..]

arjun thought - no riya tum mere liye kya ho ye mai khud bhi nahi jaanta...
Bas mai tumhe khona nahi chahata..


Arjun - kya kaha riya??

Riya - kuch nahi sir, mera ghar aa gaya..

Riya parted from him and headed towards the gate..

Arjun was still there...riya again comes to him..
Riya - thank you sir..
Arjun inquiringly looked at her..
Riya - muje company dene ke liye..
Arjun - hmm..
Riya - muje best of luck nahi kahenge??
She asked.
Arjun was hell confused now..
Arjun - hmm..


Riya- bye sir..

And she enters her house..

Arjun was still there.
She went inside her room . And goes to the window and found, he was still there..


Riya waited,
she thought - ab inhe kya hua?
Ye jate kyun nahi hain..ab inhe kya chahiye..

Arjun was tensed. Why the hell the lights are still off.
He is about to go inside, he saw one room lighted. And he felt relieved.


Riya was now so happy. She is thinking , kya arjun sir yaha iss liye the taki mai safe rahu ya nahi...

She goes the window but couldn't found him..
So she goes to her bathroom.

Then arjun comes out behind the wall.
Arjun told himself -
kahi usne muje dekha toh nahi..
And he headed towards his suv..

[lol, ab karo night walk, akdu sadu raute<asr>]

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4.30 am- morning..


He was in his usual black and blue tracksuit. And hood over his head.
He reached in front of her gate.


Shw was so sleepy and lost in his dreams. And she fell from her bed when she heard her phone ring.


She got up and walked towards her window and found him.
She siggnaled him to wait few minutes and he replied her to hurry up.


She came down in her tracks, obviously pink colour..

She joined him outside.
She - good morning sir.
He - hmm, good morning..
Lets go..aaj tumhe 6 kilo meters bhagna hai..
She - kya sir?? 6 kms,
aap mazak kar rahe hain..
He - Damn it riya it not a joke..
Chalo suru ho jao..
Riya - but sir..
Rathod - riya , arjun ko bata doon toh wo 3 baje utha kar bhagaye ga..
Riya - phir thick hai sir..

They started their work/ jog..

Rathod reminded the flashbake-



flashback-

in the hospital room.

Rathod enters her room.and he was angry at arjun.
He sat beside her.
Rathod - riya raute abhi abhi tumhe kya kahke gaya ??
Par mai uski ek bhi aabt nahi sunne wala riya..
Jab dekho apni marzi chalata hai.
Aur tumhe usse darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..
Aur tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho..

Riya was stunned seeing the reaction of her chief.
She felt happy , that even rathod cares a lot for her and she also have seen the care for arjun in hsi eyes..

He is the best chief ever, like a big brother, who concerns for her and towards for team.
He is rough from outside but cotton soft from inside.

Riya - no sir mai wapas jaungi..
Rathod gets even more angry..
Rathod - damn it riya, uski tarah kahi tumhara toh dimaag kharab nahi ho gaya.

Riya - sir aap meri baat suniye..
Rathod - kya riya?? Tum kahi nahi jaa rahi ho..
Riya - sir aa suniye toh sahi.


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Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Rathod - kya riya??
Riya - sir, arjun sir sahi kehte hain, mai abhi bhi ready nahi hoon field jobs k liye..

Aur hamesha aap logon ko galat situation mai daal deti hoon.

Rathod - aisa nahi hai riya.

Riya - no sir, aap ko yaad hai uss din maine aap se kya kaha tha??

Rathod - kis din?
Riya - uss din hospital mai
rathod tried to remind her last words..

** sir muje maaf kar dijiyega , agar maine kabhi bhi aapko let down kiya ho toh,
agar muje dushra mauka mila toh mai aapki training bekar nahi jane dungi..**

rathod - haan riya??
Riya - toh sir kya aap mujhe train karenge?? Mai nahi team ko muskil mai daalna chahata hoon aur nahi khud ko..
Aur arjun sir ko..
Unse door rahana hi sahi hai mere liye..
Unk aankho mai dar nahi dekh sakti , wo bhi mere lie..

Rathod smiled at her . Is she the girl who argued with him everytime for any field work..
He thought - oh raute , kya asar hua hai tumhara iss par..



Riya- sir aapne kuch bataya nahi..
Rathod - riya par tum etf k desk mai kaam karogi as the head research asst.

Riya mouth fell open in shock..
Rathod - shock mat ho riya, u deserve to be there. And ab tum hamare rank ki officer ho..

Riya - thank you sir.. Par ek request hai,
rathod - haan..

Riya - sir arjun sir ko iss bare ..
Rathod - nahi pata chalega..

In his mind - mai bhi dekhunga raute tum usse door kaise reh sakte ho..

Riya - kuch kaha sir..
Rathod - no kuch nahi..

Riya - ok sir kab shuru hogi meri training..

Rathod - next week at sharp 4. 30 ..
Riya - ok sir..


He kissed her forhead and comes out out the room with a smile face..

[ ab samjhe ya samjhaun, ki rathod sahab batisi kyun dikha rahe the ]



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riya was very tired..
Riya - sir aur bhaga nhi jata..
Rathod - nahi riya, itne se thak gayi..
Abhi shooting practice baki hai..


Riya - what?? Shooting practice..
Rathod - riya chalo jaldi karo..ye toh bas suruat hai aage aur bhi bahaut kuch hai..

Riya - ab toh meri khair nahi..
Gayi mai!

Ra - kuch kaha?
Riya - he he kuch nahi sir, and she flashed her smile..

She know any body can melt in her smile..ever her akdu sadu raute...



They reached at the shooting range of etf.

Rathod first taught her about the weapons and then about their uses..

Riya as a obidient student , coping up with him. And he was happy with her prformance..


Its time return home..
Its now 8 a.m .
Riya was in etf garden.. She was doing her usual yoga .


Arjun enterd with his suv. He always came first but its very first..

Something caught his eyes from
rear view mirror..


Only one word escaped from his mouth , '' riya''..



She was untieing her hairs..
Her pink jacket on her waist.. And a sleevless light pink top. She thows att the water on her face .
All the drops are dazzling with the fiery orange colour of morning sun.

And may be it was the best begining of morning..


Shree joined her after sometime and she told him sth..

And after that they left with shree's bike...

Arjun felt happy..

The charm and determination wasn't missed .. Her face was glowing with the new morning may be with a new dream and new hope..


9.30 am in the conf room.

Shree is already there. Chotu comes there .
Shree - hi chotu.
Chotu - hai shreee, aaj kya ye akdu itni jaldi aa gaye hain..
Shree - pata nahi ink dimaag mai kya chal raha hai.. Kal riya saath gaye the na..
Chotu - chod na re, muje riya ki chinta ho rahi hai..

Shree - haan chotu , wo toh hai .. But usne kuch soch kar hi ye kiya hoga..
Aur waise bhi wo yahi hai ..kahi nahi jaa rahi hai..
Chotu - matlab..
Shree - arre wo etf office mai asst. Research head hai ab..


Arjun was silent listener of their talks..
And he thought accha hai..
But he is already missing her..




Rathod enters along with comm .
Rathod - team, aaj sir ko announce karwani hai..
Comm - rathod tum toh jante hi hoge ki, nadiya jis undercover mission mai thi wo ab fail ho chuki hai, hamari wajah se..
So aaj se wo iss team ka ik hissa hai..

So welcome miss ayesha..

The introduction section ended and comm also informed about the new office of etf.



Comm - ek aur baat bhi hai..
Aaj se Riya mukharjee ETF ki second research asst, hai aur aap logon ki jitni paper works hai, aur jitne bhi research case mai jarurat hai, wo aap logon ko assist karegi but not in the field.

Wo bahar jaa sakti hai, par team se alag..


It was shocking for arjun..
Arjun - in his mind -
ab kya ho gaya?? Ab toh mai uss par nazar bhi nahi rakh sakta..
Damn it.. His facial expression changed..

Rathod - kya hua raute tumhe koi problem hai..
Arjun - nahi kuch nahi..




And arjun entered his cabin.

He found a cutting chai glass on his table.

Arjun - riya.. Ye kabhi nahi bhulegi..
He took his seat sipping his cutting chai...



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Riya was in her desk..
She was missing him..
She took her phone and thought to dial his number.
But stopped in mid.
No riya kya sochenge wo. Kuch toh sharam kar..


Neha comes to her.
Neha - good morning mam..
Aaj se mai yaha aap ko assist karungi..

Riya - ok..
Take ur seat.
Riya - muje jitne bhi pending paper works hain un sabke records chahiye aaj k aaj.

Aur un sab ko kaise complete kiya jayega wo san , new research interns karenge..
Samjhi ya..
And she stopped in nmd..

Kya ho raha hai riya , kuch toh chut raha hai..
Uff riya tu sach mai pagal ho gayi hai..
She thought..



Now it was the case of the actor's son kidnapping case.


Ayesha was trying to cooperate with team and choree trying to cope up with her..
Abd both are annoyed.


Riya have to check more that 59 files of pending work and most of the pending works are of arjun..

She told to herself - hume to bada gyaan de rahe the ab , inki khud ki paper works pending hai..


She dialed shree's num for help.
Shree was busy with his lapi and his phone was on the table in speaker mode,

shree - haan riya..

Arjun was too there..
He was dying to hear her single voice..

Shree - riya kya hua?
Riya- shree , pichle cases mai arjun sir ki jitni bhi files record tumhare lapi mai hai un sab ka record chahiye..

Shree - kyun??

Arjun was also listening her..
Isse mere files kyun chahiye..
Riya - inke aadhe se jada file pending hai..

The whole team burst upon laughing ..


And arjun felt akward..

[ lol ..acp ki izaat utar di ]


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finish guys..

Ye sayad is month ki last updt hai.
Mere exam hai aur i will be less active from the upcoming days..


And i won't be able to update my ffs, and os..
So pls wait for me.
And if you liked this part then pls..
Share your views...


And u knw how unpredictable i am..
So mai kabhi bhi aa sakti hoon..
Aap logon ko kaatne..
Matlab pakane..nere stories..
Ha ha..

I will miss you all ..
And love you al lot..




Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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