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Posted: 11 years ago
res for comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry patner
Dnt read the story
thanx 4 pm but plz dnt mind
i mean mai koe bhe ariya story read ni karti agar koe pm kare 2 just "awesome update n thanx 4 pm" coment post kar daita houn but u ko such bata rae houn ke mai dundi marti houn
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Posted: 11 years ago
Helllooo Shellooo Namaste ji!!!! WE backkk!!! And so glad to be back too!!!

Sorry if this comment is all over the place... just read all the three parts up :D

Absolutely LOVE how you write about Arjun and Riya's point of veiw about the yelling and how they both felt about yelling and being yelled at. You describe those emotions superbly! You got us so intrigued about Arjun and Riya that we actually went and watched a few scenes. And I tell you, whatever we know about Arjun and Riya, we know from you...and I think you describe their relationship so well! Thodi si nokh-jhok, thoda sa natkat, thoda sa pyaar... lovee how you wrote about them :D

Awww Riya calling Shree "James bond" teheee! So witty!!! Your one-liners are awesome, Nabi! Full of masti! And these group of friends come across as so hasmukh and supportive of each other, and I can tell just from the way you write about them. Makes me want to see the journey these friends go through on the show...maybe when we have some time, we will actually take a look :D

Awww Shree knows Anita so well and knows exactly why she must have been mad. AWww sooo sweet!! How luck she must be to find someone who understands her so well, without even having to tell him what is bothering her. AWww Anita was in for a lovely surprise no??? Soo cute!! And playing aank macholi is the cutest idea!!

Hawww! Arjun has already claimed Riya for himself and he hadn't even realized it himself? Hayeee!! Can't wait to see how he apologizes and the journey he and Riya take towards becoming lovers!!!

Sooo glad ke we didn't have to wait to read all the parts! Hayeee! Jitni der tumne upload karne mein daal diya, utne mein ham betaabi se mar hi jaate!!!

Update soon, janemannn!!! Looking forward to reading the next part! Loads of love loaded hugs to youuu!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome updtes
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cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
this arjun arghhh 😡
I think his favourite job is hurt riya make her cry 😡 😡
aww anita get angry with kids 😆
so riya plan for to make smile 😛
she called shree 😉
oh janab arjun get jealous to see riya hug shree 😈
now he want to say riya sorry
hope riya wont forgive him easily
plz dear continue dnt stop 😭 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmm story
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Posted: 11 years ago

Well Hello there Peeps!*waves*

Hope you haven't forgotten me? Kaise bhool sakte ho...mein bhoolne doongi tab na! Haha. Isse pehle ki aap mere murder karo mujhe kuch kehna hai

I AM SORRY. *Puppy face with goggglyyyeee eyes*😳

Please iss nacheez ko maaf kardena...I know meine aap logon ko bohut wait karaya BUT MEIN kya karrooon...blame it all on life.

Okay I'll stop blabbering now. Wihtout further Adieu

Here is the next part...

CHAPTER 4

"Are you sure you wanna go through with this?"

"Do I have a choice?"

"Not...really"

Saying this the woman turned around and walked out of the orphanage gates.

Riya turned around heaving a sigh and saw Shree trying for about the billionth time to make Anita smile. Jab Pyaar kiya hai to papad to belne padenge na bachuu! Riya thought aloud.

As Riya neared the commotion she heard all the kids shouting louder than usual and Shree down on his knees in typical SRK style.

"Anita...ab to mein ghutnon par bhi bet gaya ab to man jao na!"

"Hmm...Sochongi..."

Anita said with a mischievous smile slightly adorning her lips. Shree being the ETF cop he is didn't fail to notice the slight change in her tone and expression even though she was trying to hide it as much as possible.

"Oye Hoyee! Iska matlab tum mangayee?"

Anita's POV

God! Curse Riya for calling shree and bringing him here

Mera sara plan chaupat kar diya!

Ruk Ja bachu jab teri baari ayegi na to mein tujhe chodne wali nahi hoon.

Anita slightly glanced towards Riya with a murderous look and Riya just gave her dimpled smile and mouthed I LOVE YOU ANU!

Kid 1: Didi abb maaf bhi kardo.

Kid 2: Dekho bhaiyya apne ghotnon par bhaite hai.

Anita: Acha...chalo maaf kiya.

The kids burst into a loud cheer and circled Anita singing a chant od "Didi man gayi" This made Anita smile wider than usual. Even though these kids are little devils on earth but they never fail to make her smile. Afterall they are her family.

Shree: Chalo finally tum man hi gayi. Isliye to mein kehta hoon when I am here why fear.

Anita: Bas bas. Itna khush hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Punishment to abhi in sab ko milegi hai. Or tum...(referring to shree) office nahi jana...ya phir phirse koi bahana bana kar aye ho?

Shree: O teri! Dammit to aaj mujhe kacha kha jayenga aur wo Samjhe ya Samjhaun mera bharta bane denge chalo Janeman mein nikal ta hoon!

Shree quickly ran towards the gate but he turned around, ran upto Anita and gave her a quick peck on her cheeks. Muttering, "I love you" he went away.

"I love you too" Anita said to his retreating form.

Shree while going towards his vehicle met Riya on the way.

"Oye Romeo kuch progress hui?"

"Tera kam hogaya...Janeman man gayi. Isliye to mein kehta hoon KI..."

"When I am here why fear. Pata hai pata hai. Ab zayada heropanti mat dikhao aur chalet bano warna tera ran nam stya ho jayega. Bye!"

Riya slightly pushed Shree towards the gate.

"Acha Ri! Heropanti se yaad ya ki...wo Tigershroff ki new movie release ho gayi. Iss Saturday chalein dekhne?" Shree slightly yelled from the gate.

"Kya baat kar raha hai? Release bhi ho gayi aur mujhe pata nahi. Haila! Ok Done! Iss weekend chalein ge! Omg...I can't wait to see him!" Riya slightly squealed out of joy.

When Riya and Shree both left the spot Arjun slightly peered out of the pillar he was hiding from and looked around to see if anyone was around. He had heard Riya and Shree talking about some movie plans or something.

Arjun's POV

Are they going on a date?

Waise to Shree ki baton se aisa nahi lagta since he mentioned a ccertain "janeman" in his talks.

Maybe I am just overthinking.

And why do I even care for Gods's sake. Wo log...dost hai job hi karein mujhe kya pharak padta hai.

Riya slowly approached Anita from behind and tapped her on the shoulder.

Anita:Tu...kahan thi ab tak? Mein tujhe choodongi nahi. Shree ko bulane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Riya; Are baap re. Kyun? Usse dekh kar dil jumping jumping jhapak karne laga. Hmmm?

Riya asked slightly nudging Anita with a smile.

Anita: Tu na ek number ki Drama Queen hai pata hai. Jab tera number ayega na...tab bataongi tujhe kamini!

Riya:Wo to mein paidaishi hoon. No Autographs please!

Riya flipped her hair in a typical celebrity style kind of manner and both Anota and Riya bursted our laughing the next moment.

Riya: Acha chal Ab mujhe office jana hai warna gadbad ho jayegi. Love you Anu! Bye!

Both the girls hugged and Riya started walking towards her scooty. She was checking her mobile for any new messaged when she bumped into someone and her mobile fell down.

She bent down to pick up the scattered parts of the mobile mumbling, "Aaj kal ke logon ko pata nahi kya hojata hai. Dekh kar nahi chal sakte."

That's when she felt a hand picking up the scattered parts of her phone as well, which forced up to look at the man's face.

"Aap!" Riya said louder than usual revealing it to particularly no one.

"Shh! Sari duniya ko batana hai kya ki mein hoon."

"A-a-app yahan kya kar rahein hain? Apko to office mein hona chahiye."

"Kyun mein tum se milne nahi aa sakte. Waise to tumhe bhi office mein hi hona chahiye nahi?"

"Umm...wo...mujhe kuch kaam tha yahan isliye ana pada. Ab batayi aap yahan kyun aye hai?"

"Wo...Mujhe...tumse kuch kehna tha."

"Haan...boliye...I am listening."

"I...I...I...am sorry"

To be continued...

So...I hope you liked it and since I posted after a long time I want long comment okay?😳

Do like and comment peeps.

Until laters...ab wo laters kab ayega mujhe bhi pata nahi!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet n cute update
love it
thnx 4 pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
fantastic!!
thankx for pm
continu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb Nabi dear
Awesome
so cute
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon😊

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