SS : Her Memories *Complete*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone! Now that one of my SS, is going to end soon, so I decided to start a new one!😊

Haters, stay away!

I guess, this one won't have Ariya or Raisha. And Arisha? Never!

So, please give it a read, I won't end up disappointing you guys! 😊

(This post will have index, check the next post for part-1 please!)

INDEX
Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 3
Part 3 : Page 6
Part 4 : Page 9
Epilogue : Page 12


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Posted: 12 years ago
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What happens when we loose someone, whom we love a lot?
Sometimes, it's just too late, when you realize your love for someone!
And here's a story, where he realized his love for her...quite late! Or maybe, he was too late to speak his heart out!


Part-1

"Madam ji, aa gaya Shimla.." the conductor told her.
"Thanks bhaiyya..." she said, as she wore her red overcoat, picked up her Samsonite bag, and checked her purple side-bag.

She stepped out of the bus.

"Holy...u rarely see places, so angelic like this..." she said, as she noticed the natural beauty of Shimla.

**********

Meanwhile,

"Nihu...nihu uth bache...nanu ko milne nahi jaana?"
"Papa chone dona..." his daughter replied him back..."
"Niharika! Baby please utho...papa ko aaj hi waapis aana hai..."
"Papa lekin hum log toh wahaan ik din aul bhi lukte hain na..."
"Nahi baby, papa ko aaj hi waapis aana hai...kal papa ko school jaana hai...papa kal ki leave nahi le sakte...utho...aww mera shona bacha...chalo, be a good bacha..."

**********

She stretched herself.

"Now that I'm here...I should go and find him out...lekin agar Dustin Sir ko pata lag gaya ki..."

**********

"Papa, please 5 minutes!"
"Nahi mera bacha, aapko nehla ke papa ko breakfast bhi banana hai...aloo ke paranthe nahi khane?"
"(licks her lips and runs into her dad's arms) Aloo ke panthe?"
"Panthe nahi paranthe...khair...chalo hum nai-nai karke aayein..." he said, as he picked up his 4-year old in his arms, and went back down in the memory lane.

"Get up, go freshen up yourself!"
"Kyun? Compulsion hai?"
"Ji haan!"
"Kyun?"
"Kyunki mujhe office jaana hai...and after you take ur bathe, I too have to go n freshen up myself..."
"Toh mein ik idea dunn?"
"Kya?"
"Dono saath mein hi shower kar lete hain..." she said, as she flashed her dimpled smile and winked at him...
"Chiii!" saying this, he ran out of the room.
She smirked to herself, as she pulled the blanket and again drifted to sleep.


A lone tear escaped his left eye, as he prepared his daughter for the bath.

**********


"Nahi nahi, unhein pata nahi lagna chahiye, phone number plus phone handset toh change kar liye...bas now I have to find him back..."

She stood there, as she called out for auto's.

5 minutes later, she got one, and asked him to drop her at a nearby hotel.

**********


"Stop doing this chap chap Nihu" he said, as his daughter was busy splashing out the water in the bathtub.

He entered the room, expecting her to sleep, or either in the bathroom, taking shower, but,
She walked out from the bathroom, in a white towel, playing with her hair.

For fraction of seconds he stood there, freezed at his place, as noticed her beauty...

"Kya huya ACP Sahib...lattu ho gaye kya mujh pe?"
"Lattu? Woh bhi tum pe? My foot!" he said, as he stormed out of the room.

She started drying her hair with the other towel, as she smiled at his antics.


**********


~~Sorry for the mistakes. Hope u liked part-1! Waiting for ur likes + cmnts!~~
Edited by MriduB - 12 years ago
Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Awesum start
lov it
gud title
i think dnt throw chappal pls d girl is riya
man is arjun
n
nihu their daughter...
573339 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
fantastic start ): loved it
i think that girl is riya because you said she flashed her dimpled smile
that guy is arjun
and niharika is so cute :)
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow looks very intrsting...!
wanna know who is "she" and who is "he"
waiting!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
hey nice one

i liked d start

hero heroine kaun hian yeh to bata de

i guess its Rathore

but who is opposite him

n i liked d man's (Which i imagined as Rathore) with Niharika

waiting for next
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Interesting concept.
Loved it.
Waiting for more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice.loved it.plzz jaldhi bata dena charecters koun hai.cont. soon.thanx for pm me.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice de
tht story of ariya
if yes then i am veryyy happyyy
thanx 4 pm de😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Intresting start... who s she nd he????
dimpled smiles den it shld be Riya 😳
Niharika s so cute...
update soon

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