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ankita2804

@ankita2804

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

It was simply DIVINE...

Kono katha hobe na...

Out of d world... U dragged me to d dreamland...

Wow wow... Hell romanttic...

One of your best writings...

Proud of u darling...

Awesomeee...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ankita2804
It was simply DIVINE...

Kono katha hobe na...

Out of d world... U dragged me to d dreamland...

Wow wow... Hell romanttic...

One of your best writings...

Proud of u darling...

Awesomeee...

yay...
My bhabi aka Anki commented...
Love you,Anki,for that.
I am happy that u loved it.
When i was writing the last two parts,i was simply imagining myself in thw hole situation.
I was literally blushing at the romantic moments of Zebbie+Arjun=ZebUn.
*blush*.
Ab apni bhabi se kya chupana...

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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

me completely in dreamworld...shayd wahin pe rukuhungi...!!!!!

awesomeee!!!!!!!!!

full on romantic thaaa...!

lovely work !

every min felt the romance...baht aacha tha loved it!

for u!!!👏👏👍🏼

and a bow from me!!!!hum aapke aagaye chukthe hai...!👏

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Aww...
Thanks for the lovely comments.
I appreciate ur love from the bottom of my heart..

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Mujhe aur comments chahiye,please.
Iss bacche ki khwaish ko puri kardo.

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow di...
Great update..
Thanks for pm.

I loved the bro- sis relation of zebbie and rathod.
You really expresse arjun's emotion and his pain very well.
Wow its tooo
romantic one...
I m blucsing.
Finally zebbie forgave him. And in such a romantic manner ...i just loved it...

The intensity of her is well explaind as she cancel their plan ...
The bg u used was too appropriate..
Especially that ' rone de mujhe ...'
that line stole my heart..

Do write more like this...

Just loved..

Sorry fr late cmmnt ..
Bt aaj exam bahaut accha tha..

And

''''congratulation''' , goldie

Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen
Wow di...
Great update..
Thanks for pm.

I loved the bro- sis relation of zebbie and rathod.
You really expresse arjun's emotion and his pain very well.
Wow its tooo
romantic one...
I m blucsing.
Finally zebbie forgave him. And in such a romantic manner ...i just loved it...

The intensity of her is well explaind as she cancel their plan ...
The bg u used was too appropriate..
Especially that ' rone de mujhe ...'
that line stole my heart..

Do write more like this...

Just loved..

Sorry fr late cmmnt ..
Bt aaj exam bahaut accha tha..

And

''''congratulation''' , goldie

thank you so much,my entertainment queen.
Good that ur exam was accha.
Agar Zebbie Arjun ki hai,toh Arjun ke saare gunaah maaf.,kyunki,Zebbie Arjun ki thhi,hai aur humesha rahegi.