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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: zebbie


bas aisi hi.
I love my buddies,isiliye bohut miss kar rahi thi...
Btw,haan,bohut maza aayega next update mein.


awww love you...!!🤗❤️
to jaldi jaldi update kar...!!!😉 hume bhi mazze dekhne hai...!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Ch 2.

Ankita points her finger at someone who was standing in the beach.
It was none other than Arjun.
Zebbie looks at him,from the place she was standing.
Rathod turned around Zebbie and cupped her face.
Rathod: Dekho Zebbie.Arjun ko apne galti pe ehsaas hai.Woh bohut pachta raha hai.Iss pachtave ke dard mein woh andar hi mar raha hai.Tum toh usse jhat se mana logi.Jao,Zebbie.Usse baat karo.Har couple ke beech mein jhagre,nok jhoks toh hote hi hai.Par,usse zyada hone se humein rokna hai.Samajh gayi,Zebbie?
Zebbie looked at Rathod.
She was indeed very lucky to get such an understanding family.
She immediately hugged Rathod.
She was crying a lot.
Ankita understood it.
It was pure a brother and sister love.
How a brother wishes to erase his sister's pain?
It was just like that.
Zebbie(sobbing and telling to Rathod): Sam bhaiya,main bohut hi lucky hu ke mujhe aap jaise Bhaiya mile. Thank you,Bhaiya. Ab aap jo kahenge,woh main karungi.
Rathod broke the hug and kissed her forehead.
Rathod: Thanks,Choti. Ab sun. Tu Arjun ke paas jayegi aur usse baat karegi,samajh gayi?
Shree interrupts.
Shree: Sorry to interrupt sir,par,mujhe lagta hai ki Zebbie ko thora waqt dena chahiye.
Zebbie: Nahi,Shree. Aab main aur waqt nahi lungi.Agar maine unse baat nahi ki,toh,main unke mangetar bulane ki kabil nahi hongi.Haan,par,ek kaam thori der keliye kar sakte hai.
Liza: Kya???
Zebbie: Arjun ko thora wait karwate hai. Thora suffer karwate hai,kyun?
Antara: Baat toh thik hai,par,kuch gadbad nahi hoga toh?
Chottu: Are u sure of it,Zebbie?
Zebbie: I am 100% sure,Chottu. Kuch gadbad nahi hoga.
Shree: Ok.
All five of them planned the whole thing.

Scene changes in the Beach where Arjun is standing.

Precap: Zebbie finally forgives Arjun.
Sorry for a small update,but,aj raat tak final update post hojayega.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nyccc!!!

but waitng for nxt update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
awsum update...
love the way sam made her understand...
ye kya khichdi pakk rai h zebbie ke dimag mai... ;)
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
firstly sorry for late comment!!!!
khaan padke maafi mangti hoon!:(
loved both parts!!!
how can arjun do this?????he slapped Zebbie!!!!*shocked*
any plans to trouble him???😃
waiting for u next update!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Ufff achha khasa ja rahi the..
per ye bich main satane ka plane kahan se aa gaya..
ab next part jaldy update karoo...dr..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Piyarani

Ufff achha khasa ja rahi the..
per ye bich main satane ka plane kahan se aa gaya..
ab next part jaldy update karoo...dr..


piya di,vishwas karo mujhpe.
Jaisa aap soch rahi ho,waisa kuch nahi hoga.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Last part.Part 3a.

Scene changes to the beach,where Arjun was standing.

There he was standing.Standing in the cool waters of the sea.His denims folded upto the knee.The water of the sea were continuosly playing the game of touch and go.
It felt like as if,someone was washing away his pain and sorrows.
A lone tear drop fell from his eye.
As he closed his eye,he,suddenly,had the flashback,where he had raised his hand on his fiancee,his Zebbie.
He forcefully opened his eyes.
He looke at his ring finger of his left hand,which had the emblem of their love.
Yes,the engagement ring which Zebbie made him wear.It was looking so beautiful.
On the other hand,he had a look at his right hand,with which,he raised his hand on Zebbie.
How he wished to cut his hand off,at that moment.
How he wished to run to his Zebbie and ask for forgiveness.
He knew,that,Zebbie will forgive him,but,this time,it went beyond limits.
He hated himself being the person who hated people raising their hand on women.
Arjun: I am sorry,Zebbie. Mujhe tumpar haath nahi uthana chahiye thha.Jis haatho se tumahre haatho mein sagaai ki anguthi pehnayi,usse haath ko kaat kar phhek dene ko jee karta hai,kyunki,inhi haatho se maine tumpar...

He couldnt utter those last words.
He disgusted himself for that.
Arjun: I know,Zebbie.Mujhse bohut bari galti hui hai.Hosake toh mujhe maaf kardena.Mar jaunga tumhare bina.Jee nahi paunga tumahre bina.Please come to me and take me into ur warm embrace,which will soothe my heart.
Please,ek baar aajao,mere paas.

On the other hand,Zebbie was thinking of satafying Arjun,but,she re thinks about the plan.She couldnt decide what to do.
She went to her bhai.
Zebbie: Excuse me,Ma'am.May I please take Rathod sir away from you,for a while?
Lady: Sure.

Rathod and zebbie,in the lawn of the house,with,Ankita,Shree,Chotu,Liza and Antara.
Rathod: Kya hua,Choti? Tu abhi tak gayi nahi?
Zebbie: Nahi,bhaiya.Main bas jaane hi wali thhi,ki,socha,aap se thori baatein karlu.
Rathod: Itni si baat?
Zebbie: Bhai,aap jo soch rahe hai,waisa kuch nahi hai.Waise,Arjun ko suffer karwane ka plan maine close kardia hai.Pehle hi bohut seh chuke hai,ab aur nahi.
Ankita: Thats like my devrani ji.
Zebbie blushed very hardly at that comment.
Liza: Aye haaye... Koi toh bohut sharma raha hai.
Antara: haan,Liza. Aaj toh Arjun sir gaye...
Shree: Hmm...
Chotu: Thanks,Zebbie,for changing the plan.
Zebbie: welcome,Chotu.
Rathod was very happy to see his Choti happy.
Rathod coughs and grabs their attention.
Rathod: agar sabki baatein hogayi ho,toh,let Zebbie go to her Arjun.
Jaa,Choti,apne Arjun ke paas.
Zebbie nods her head in a YES and was about to go,when she stopped in her way.She turned around and ran to give evryone a bear hug.She went to Rathod and bent down and touched his feet For his blessing.
Rathod: Mera aashirwaad humesha tere saath hai,Choti.
Others: ALL THE BEST.
Zebbie: Thank You.
With that,she ran as fast as she could,to the beach.

Scene changes to the beach.

Arjun is still standing in the water,when,he hears some noise.
He turns back to see that his Love,Zebbie,was coming.
It was her payal that making the beautiful noise of her sweet arrival.
He was amazed by her looks.
He was amazed to see Zebbie in a white saree with light pink touches,a backless blouse with one dori,simple light make up and dangling ear rings.
She looked dead beautiful.
The moonlight also added to her beauty.
How he wished to take her into his arms and keep her there,forever.

Zebbie was also left stunned after looking at her Arjun.
He was wearing a white shirt,with a black jacket and black denims.The first three buttons of the shirt were opened.
He looked damn irresistible and hot.
How she wished to run to him and embrace herself with a hug,full of love and warmth.

Zebbie took slow steps to Arjun.
Arjun did the same.

BG Music.
"Tum Ho...
Paas mere,saath mere,
Ho tum yu...
Jitna mehsoos karu tum ko,
Utna main pa bhi loon..."

As the song was playing in the air,Arjun and Zebbie were very close to each other.Now,they could see each other,fully,that too from near.

BG Music:
Arjun: "Tujhe jee bharke main dekhu,
Mujhe Haq Hai...
Zebbie: "Piyaaa... Piyaaa...
Piya piya,bole mere jiyaa...
Tumhe Haq Hai...
Tumhe Haq Hai..."

zebbie blushes at that thought and tries to run,but,Arjun,held her by her wrist.
As he held her by her wrist,her back was facing him.So,it was obvious that,that her backless blouse was visible to him.
Zebbie kept her hair open.
Her long,chocolate brown coloured hair,which reached till her waist,was taking a toll on Arjun.
Her creamy back was inviting him to relish.
He pulled her back,making her back crashing with his broad chest.
As she crashed in his broad chest,shrills went down her spine.
The coldness of his chest were touching her warm back.
She shivered.
Arjun felt that.
He hugged her tightly from the back,to make her feel warm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ufff... Pari na pari na...
Daaaruuunnn...

Haye... Ibke romance se to mai v blush karne lagi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Last part.Part 3B.

As he leaned down,he shifted her hair to her left shoulder,now,completely,
revealing her back.
He leaned down and placed a soft,wet kiss on her neck.
As he placed the kiss,she moaned slightly,"Arjunn..."
he held her by her waist,tightly,being her support.
She felt his left hand around her waist,tightening his hold and his right hand,entwining with her right hand.
She felt at heaven.
She,immediately,turned and hugged him back tightly,never to let him go away from her.
He also responded to the hug.
He also hugged her tightly and hid his face on her shoulder,Both of them tightened their hug.
A silent tear rolled down from Arjun's eye,which wet her back.She felt it,but,to her surprise,Arjun kissed it away.
Again,she moaned.
Arjun: "Rone de aaj humko,
Tu aakhein sujane de,
Baaho mein le le,aur,
Mujhko bheeg jaane de,
Hai jo seene mein qaid dariya,
Woh chhut jayega,
Hain itna dard ke tera damaan,
Bheeg jayega."

she was immensely touched by his words.
Arjun(whispering to Zebbie in the hug): I am sorry.I am really very sorry,Zebbie.Mujhe maaf kardo.I know,mujhe ussdin apna limit cross nahi karna chahiye thha,par...
Zebbie: Ssshhh... Arjun... Beete baatein ko bhul jaiye aur aane wale khushiyon ke baare mein sochiye.Aur,mujhe aapke aansu se sakht dushmani hai.Aapko aakho mein aansu,mujhse bardasht nahi hote. I love you,Arjun,a lot.
Main apko kabhi bhi chorke nahi jaungi.
This was enough for him to understand that his Zebbie has forgiven him,truly from the heart.
BG Music:
"Dard mein bhi yeh labh,
Muskuraa jaate hai,
Beetein lamhein humein,
Jab bhi yaad aate hai...
Beetein lamhein...
Chand lamhato ke,
Waaste hi sahi,
Muskurakar mili thi mujhe zindagi,
Teri aaghosh mein,
Din thhe mere kate,
Teri Baaho mein thhi meri raatein kati...
O o o o o ...
Aaj bhi jab woh pal,
Mujhko yaad aate hai,
Dil se saare ghamo ko bhula jaate hai,
Dard mein bhi yeh labh,
Muskuraa jaate hai,
Beete lamhe humein,
Jab bhi yaad aatein hai."
(I used this Beete Lamhein song in this situation,coz,i felt,in this loving and warm hug,Arjun remembers all the happy moments spent with Zebbie,which brings a smile on his face,even if he is in any sort of pain or sorrow.
All in a nutshell,Zebbie's smile and love is the cure to all his pain and sorrows).

They break the hug.
Arjun leaned a bit to place a kiss on her maang,whic will be adorned by the sindoor of his name.
He then kissed her neck line,very gently,which will be the place of their another emblem towards Life...
Yes,the sacred wedding chain which Arjun will make her wear in their wedding.
He then took her hands on his,and kissed her palms and let his lips linger their for a while,which will be adorned with Arjun ki naam ka mehendi.
He then took her both the wrists and kissed them which will be adorned y the wedding churas.

Tears started to come out of Zebbie's eyes.
Yes,she was being loved by her Love.
Arjun felt her tear drops on his face,and leaned over to kiss away the away,and in that chance,placed a sweet kiss on both of her eyes.
Arjun(to Zebbie's tears): Tumhe koi haq nahi hai mere Zebbie ke aakho mein rehne ki,samjhe ya samjhhau?
She smiled at his antics.
Oh,My!!!!
Her smile...
How much he wished to see that beautiful smile of hers which took his heart away.
He didnt take anymore time.
He pulled her for a sweet and a soft kiss.
At first,he thought,she would feel bad,thats why,he parted a bit.
Zebbie didnt allow him.
Zebbie: Tumhe Haq Hai...
He got his answers.
Again,he pulled her for their first kiss.
It was a passionate one.
Zebbie was enjoying this beautiful moment of her life,no,actually,the beautiful moment of their life.
After they parted for some air,she hugged him and kept her head on his chest.
He hugged her,as tightly as he could.
Now,their hearts' were beating at the same rate,chanting each other's name.
Arjun: I love you,Zebbie,a lot.
Zebbie: I love you too,Arjun,khud se bhi zyada,apne jaan se bhi zyada.
Arjun: I promise,aage se waisa bartav nahi karunga tumse.
Zebbie: I know that,Arjun. Just consider that incident as temporary loss of anger.
Thorw that matter sfom your brain and heart,and,let me stay their,forever.
Arjun had no replies.
He was amazed at her words.
He smiled and turned her towards the moon.
Now,her back was facing him.
He hugged her tightly from the back and kissed her cheeks,neck line,jaw line,etc etc...
He held her by her waist,tightly,and covered themselves with Arjun's warm black jacket.
"Hum huye poore yahaan pe,
Iss chand aur Khuda ko gawa rakh ke,
Hum huye poore yahaan pe,
Iss chand aur Khuda ko gawa rakh ke,
Tumhare saath bitane hai jeevan ke saare haseen pal,
Ke,main tumpe apne jaan ko nichavar kardu,humare pyaar se."

Thus,Arjun and Zebbie,re united,keeping the God and the Moon,as their witness of Love.

The End.

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