SS: I Really Want To Know.Ch4,pg11 20.02.2014 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice zebbie,
mujhay tum say ek shikayat hai,
why you don't PM me.
Nice concept
continue soon and please PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Updating this after a very long time.
Sorry for the big delay.
Update in the next post.

Note:

translation of the song lines are in brackets in English.

The song is written in paragraphs,thats why,i am writing the story according to that.
Please bear with the short updates.

Thank you.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Ch 2.

''Ekhono ki prothom shokal hole(Still when the New Dawn arrives),

Snaan ki shere Pujaa'r phool tule(Do you pluck the flowers after your morning bath),

Pujaa'r stholey amari kotha bhabo boshe Thakur ghorey(Do you still remember me in your prayers).''


As Arjun penned down these lines,he thought,how colourful and beautiful his Life was,when,Riya was there.She used to wake up early in the morning,have her bath and pluck fresh flowers to make garlands to adorn her Lord Ganesha,on whom she had Undying Faith and Belief.

She used to spend hours in the Mandir infront of Lord Ganesha,praying especially for my Happiness,Goodwill and Safety.As she used to be done with her Prayers,I used to ask her that why she prays for me with such Devotion.

She used to tell me that, ''Aapki suraksha aur khushiyo keliye Bappa se prarthna karti hu,ki,aap humesha surakshit aur khush rahe,chahe jo bhi ho jaaye.''

He let out a faint smile at remembering her words.

He thought,

'' Does she still wake up in early morning?Pluck fresh flowers from the Garden and make garlands to adorn her Lord Ganesha?

Still does she do this,now?

I really want to know.''
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
Anika_PreRish thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
eh leh?
sirf ek hi like and no comments...????
😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
loved the update
very nicely written 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
read both parts
nice story
arjun divorced riya
he wants to know that riya still love him and miss him
update next part soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
it was hurt touching update dear.
awesome. continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
superb zebbie di..

fultu zebbie di style..

arjun remembering riya and her flashbacks..


awesome update..

thanks for the pm..

and please jaldi jaldi update karna eagerly want to know more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
ooww...
so touching!!
ooww...
cant say any thing..
superb update..
i wish they meet soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
really very fantastic but short update
continue soon

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